Last Lines

[Sella]

What are the very last lines of your stories? For ones that you have already finished, and for ones that you haven't finished yet - if you know the last lines already. If you're worried about the last line spoiling the ending for people who haven't read it, then you probably shouldn't post them. :P

[Sella]

Hehe. I like all of my last lines. XD

For Hunted: 'But the fire never leaves.'

For Life in D Minor: 'I let myself get lost.'

For Outcast: 'She was gone.' or 'The night was empty, and all there was left was the cold.' Or something like that. ((idk which one))

For Blackout: '"I'll wait for you."'

For 300: 'I will win.' Or something. Idk. :P

For Memories: 'I'm off to start living.' Or, 'It's off into the real world for me.' or something like that. idk. XD

For Dear Death: 'I give up.'

For The Morte: 'And just for a moment, Kayla could have sworn she saw the ghostly outline of a blue-and-white striped cruise ship, with a tower of three floors and rows and rows of flickering, glinting windows, floating eerily above the trees.'

For Moon Rise (a book Brigid and I wrote together): '“It all began one night, when the full moon was rising…”'

[[deleted user]]

Hmm... I guess I would have to say:

The Inspector: I never stopped running.
Wanted: I never looked back.
Hurricane Katrina: The water was refreshing as i dipped my toes in the hamless ensing.
30 Days: no way I'll tel

[♫Huneeya♥]

umm well the last line of Hoping, Wishing Wanting wouldn't make sense by itself so here are the last LINES :D :

But the best thing it did, Sherri, was make me meet you.
Love,
Mel

[[deleted user]]

mine not so good but if you read the whole thing it would make more sense.

I always been watching you remeber how all this happened.

with that we rode off into the sunset never looking back at what has been

[Baxter, butts butts butts]

Silent Room - All the while the television repeated the same tired phrase.

"I love you, I love you, I love you..."


Beauty - “He got me that cup you know. Everything has its beauty but not everybody sees it. Really makes you think, doesn’t it. Just like that guy. I remember once, he showed me his latest work. He had been making extra mannequins and combining them together. The end result was this monstrous thing. My first reaction was disgust. It looked like something found in nightmares. Arms sticking out in odd positions, legs tangled together. I started shouting at him, telling him how sick he was. But you know what he told me? He said, ‘Everybody is together. It’s the most beautiful thing on the planet.’ And you know what? He was right.”

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Sella wrote: "Hehe. I like all of my last lines. XD

For Hunted: 'But the fire never leaves.'

For Life in D Minor: 'I let myself get lost.'

For Outcast: 'She was gone.' or 'The night was empty, and all there w..."

AAHHH!!! Sella all your last lines are so amazing!! :D

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Okay, here are some of mine:

Edge: "I'm ready."

Injection: "I’ve done my part. All I’m asking, now, is that you do yours."

Reborn: "I watched the sun sinking below the horizon, in the far distance. It was setting upon the day that had changed everything. And tomorrow, it would rise upon a world that – little by little – was about to be reborn."

Soul Stealer: "All I can do now--the only thing left to do--is give in with one last, satisfied sigh, finally releasing my own soul."

Walking Shadow: "It is. It really is." (or something along those lines; idk cuz i haven't written it yet …)

[Krys]

Awesome :) I only know what the last ending sentence for my NaNoNovel is going to be... It's:

Dawn had come at last, and with it came the beauty of day. With it came the world of reality, with it came the life of the Seventh Dimension.

[Jayda]

Howl: Book One
After all, that was the least they could do, right?

Amulet: Book Two
“At dawn,” William repeated, licking his lips, looking up to the tops of the trees. “She will pay.”

Dagger: Book Three
“Alexander,” I whispered before the darkness began to surround me.

Fangs: Book Four
My angel was back.

Alive: A Novel
What would summer bring?

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Cool! :D

[Hope]

Justyn wrote: "Hmm... I guess I would have to say:

The Inspector: I never stopped running.
Wanted: I never looked back.
Hurricane Katrina: The water was refreshing as i dipped my toes in the hamless ensing.
30 D..."

What the heck is a hamless ensing??? lol

[Sella]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "Hehe. I like all of my last lines. XD

For Hunted: 'But the fire never leaves.'

For Life in D Minor: 'I let myself get lost.'

For Outcast: 'She was gone.' or 'The night was empty, a..."

Thanks! :D

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

ur welcome my fiance XD lol

[Sella]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Okay, here are some of mine:

Edge: "I'm ready."

Injection: "I’ve done my part. All I’m asking, now, is that you do yours."

Reborn: "I watched the sun sinking below the horizon, in the far distan..."

Those are all amazing!! My favorites are the Edge and Injection ones. XD

[Niki]

I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face.

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

haha XD

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Sella wrote: "Those are all amazing!! My favorites are the Edge and Injection ones. XD "

Aww thanks. haha.
Really? The Edge one is just two words though … haha. I like the Injection one. and Soul Stealer. XD

[Sella]

Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. You never know. XD

[Sella]

♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "Sella wrote: "Those are all amazing!! My favorites are the Edge and Injection ones. XD "

Aww thanks. haha.
Really? The Edge one is just two words though … haha. I like the Injection one. and Soul ..."

But those two words are so cool! And I think the fact that it's so short is what makes it so cool. XD

[Niki]

Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. You never know. XD"

I actually thought of this when I saw 'my face.'

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Sella wrote: "But those two words are so cool! And I think the fact that it's so short is what makes it so cool. XD "

I guess … ? haha XD

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. You never know. XD"

LOL

[Sella]

Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. You never know. XD"

I actu..."

Hahahahaha. XD

[Stephanie]

this is from my NaNo novel. it's leterally the last line.

He held Isabel as she whispered to him, “What’s happening?”

[Hannah]

And that's how vampire bunnies dominated the world.

That's not really a last sentence to any of my stories, but I do think that vampire bunnies will atleast try to rule the world in the future. ;D

[Baxter, butts butts butts]

Antoine - "He closed his eyes and slept for a very long time."

The Thing In The Basement - "I’m scared."

And As The Sky and the Meet - "He sneezed, and the man in black looked up."

[Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts]

I closed my eyes and fely myse;f being lifted to the other realm.


Tomorrow it will happen. I know it will

[Ellen]

This is a very sketchy draft for the ending of Revealed.
"We will see each other soon," he called out from behind me.
No, I don't think we will, I thought. I don't say this outloud though, I just continue walking to my car and didn't look back.
Didn't look back to the place- and person- I will forever leave behind.

Hmmm. I kind of like it, but I kind of don't. And I didn't say who she was saying goodbye too because I don't want it to spoil it! Mwah-ah-ah-ha

[Summer]

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I finally have an official last line to share!!!!!!!! Last night at like 2:35 in the morning I finished the officiall first draft of my first novel and I'm rather excited about that. It's not a very epic line but it kind of sets me up for the second book.

"Then I'll go home I suppose."

[Summer]

That's rather undramatic but oh well.... I'm too happy to care.

[Ellen]

Summer wrote: "That's rather undramatic but oh well.... I'm too happy to care. "

Lol. No it's a good set up for the second book. Congrats on the whole finishing the book draft thing. Lol. Is it on GR?
I have almost finished mine because I can't find a way to expand it at the moment. Though I know I have a lot of plot holes that will take up a fair bit of unused room in my book. Lol.

[Summer]

Ellen ♥ wrote: "Summer wrote: "That's rather undramatic but oh well.... I'm too happy to care. "

Lol. No it's a good set up for the second book. Congrats on the whole finishing the book draft thing. Lol. Is it ..."

Thanks. XD It's not on GR because I need to do just the opposite of you and take out chunks that just don't need to be there and add a few elements. Good luck!

[[deleted user]]

From just a random short story I wrote a while ago- "Maybe, just maybe, I could learn to forgive."

[Riley]

A Single Rose
I recently discovered a love of gardening that makes me tons of money. My favorite flower? I thought you could've guessed. One that takes a ridiculous amount of work and care. The rose.

:D

[Ellen]

I put my head down against my horse’s mane, and felt myself sink into the uncontrolled blackness that was present in my mind.

Blah. That is from one of the first stories I wrote. Lol. I think I shall go over that one! Hehe.

[Krys]

This one is a little iffy, but I should have something like this for my novel idea Two Shadows.

She walked into the rising sun, and with that rising sun came her dark shadow, and with the still attained darkness the lights of the city on her other side it was doubled, casting for a single person two shadows.

[[deleted user]]

Can we make up some last sentences, like we do in the First Sentences topic? If we promise we won't begin another outbreak of Lemonitus?

[Sella]

Anna wrote: "Can we make up some last sentences, like we do in the First Sentences topic? If we promise we won't begin another outbreak of Lemonitus?"

Sure. We can number it.

[[deleted user]]

(I counted the previous lines and I got 41, but I could be wrong.)

41. Nothing could make it better.

(That one was made up, but I might use it later on.)

[Ellen]

( I can't be bothered to count so we shall start with your one, Lol)

42. And there was nothing else that I could do. What's done has been done.

[[deleted user]]

The room was endless, and we all knew it. There was no way to escape.

[[deleted user]]

45. "So, what does the future hold for you, Aro? You know I can't see your future,or past." he asked me, with his head cocked to the side.

"You know what? I really don't know."

[Austin]

Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. You never know. XD..."

I like the four way

[Niki]

What?

[Sella]

Austin wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "Sella wrote: "Niki wrote: "I thought you wrote 'my face' and I was confused as to why you would call Sella your face."

Well, my nickname for Brigid is 'my ass,' so. Yo..."

What are you talking about, Austin?

[Sella]

Hehe. I came up with the last line for Found, the last book in the Hunted trilogy. It shall be:

But it sure as hell wouldn't hurt to try.

I like it. XD

[[deleted user]]

Sella wrote: "Hehe. I came up with the last line for Found, the last book in the Hunted trilogy. It shall be:

But it sure as hell wouldn't hurt to try.

I like it. XD"

oooh! I like it too! :D

[Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.]

Sella wrote: "Hehe. I came up with the last line for Found, the last book in the Hunted trilogy. It shall be:

But it sure as hell wouldn't hurt to try.

I like it. XD"

GASSPPP! haha. that's so cool!!! XD

[Sella]

Thanks! :D