Last Lines

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Kriss wrote: "O.o oh my...."

Yes. That's going to be part of the sequel...

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Kriss wrote: "Here's what the one from The Seventh Dimension is probably going to be:

It had all started from a simple string of love, jealousy, and hatred. A war became born from the ashes of a lost love tha..."

oooh! I like it!

[Krys]

I really have one of these know... Hehe. All the other ones are just ideas...

Anyhoo, here's the last line for The Seventh Dimension:

And so the world set out to waiting, waiting for what was going to reemerge through the ashes of a war; a new beginning.

[[deleted user]]

Dun dun dun.... :P

haha. Sorry! Great ending!

[Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie)]

for The Hunters: Now I knew why; This place was never meant to be discovered.

[Acacia]

Guinea Pigs: Another firework burst in the sky.
Letters to Ryan: But you're finally happy.

Yay, I legitimately have some too, Kriss! :D

[Emily]

For my book at the end the main character kills herself then the last sentence is, "And they all live happily ever after."

[Krys]

Hehe, yay! :D

[Emily]

Yep, lol, dark humor rocks

[Krys]

Oh... that meant to go to Acacia's comment. We posted at the same time.

[Acacia]

But dark humor does rock.

[Krys]

Dark humor is usually the best kind of humor.

[Emily]

Yepp!

[Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie)]

For Starting Over(title may change)

I fell asleep in a flash, concentraing on the warmth of the fire, the sound of Yuri singing a sweet Russian lullaby, and the throbbing pain in my shoulder. I looked over at the wound. I was just a white line now, but the pain got worse as I thought about it. I fell asleep wondering if it would leave a scar. That would be cool. It was the end of day seven.

[RedPath]

This is what I had in mind for In Between.

I turned away from them, winking before they went out of sight. A knowing smile crept up my face as I made my way to towards the person with a blue and a green eye.

And for The Red Door:

We smiled at them and at eachother, before taking hands and walking into the golden light.

[Ellen]

From Now It's Gone:

This beginning will be the end

[RedPath]

TheTrying to be Optimistic Pessimist (Dayna) wrote: "Woah, those are both AWESOME! :D I love the mystery in the first one, of that "knowing smile"."

aw, thank you :)


Ellen ♥ wrote: "From Now It's Gone:

This beginning will be the end"

ohhhh I like it :) very paradoxical (is that a word? Not sure)

[Ellen]

RedPath ~Enna-girl~ wrote: "TheTrying to be Optimistic Pessimist (Dayna) wrote: "Woah, those are both AWESOME! :D I love the mystery in the first one, of that "knowing smile"."

aw, thank you :)


Ellen ♥ wrote: "From No..."

Haha. Thanks :D Um... I'm not sure, actually :/ Lol.

[Gabry]

I have to add that I skipped to the end to read the final words.

But one of them is, Everything faded to black. ( main character blacked out)

Then my second one was, Her life was cracked up to be, but she wasn't going to give a damn about it now.

[Clare]

"Tell him to take a number; he can wait till tomorrow to try and kill us."

[Ellen]

Niiice.

[Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie)]

This is the last scene from Restart:

“What’s that? “ Anna asked. But she didn’t have to ask. I already knew.
“This is a mixture of concentrated amyl nitrate, sodium nitrate, and sodium thiosulfate, chemicals commonly used to combat cyanide poisoning.” I knew what was coming, but it didn’t prepare me for the shock. I wobbled a little bit, but I kept my voice firm.
“Why did you poison me?” I asked. I could feel the poison working. Cyanide worked faster on an empty stomach, so the only reason I was still alive was because I had just eaten breakfast.
“Because, little buddy,” he said. “You are a lot stronger than any of the other kids. Without you, this army will fall apart. So when you’ve gone the way of the dodo, I can take control.” But I wasn’t listening. The poison was robbing the oxygen from my cells, and my lungs were on fire. It felt like the air was on fire, that my clothes were on fire, that I was on fire. I keeled over, banging my knee against the table. I didn’t feel it though, I only felt pain. Blackness flooded its way into my eyes faster than I could fight it. I couldn’t breathe. I was dully aware of a loud bang, a stifled cry, and a thud as something heavy hit the ground, but I paid it no mind. I was too busy concentrating on the fact that I was dying on the cold, wet grass of the Dublin Forest. Someone took my head in their arms and shoved a wet substance down my throat. With my last bit of strength, I swallowed it...and almost choked on it. It was chalky and tasted like dirt, but somehow, I got it down my throat. The darkness was coming faster now, and I knew there was nothing I could do. I closed my eyes and surrendered to death...or so I thought.
It was the end of Day Seven.

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DUBLIN! Sorry, ancestors from there. =D

[Jordan, The Picture Magician (aka Probie)]

Me 2! Thts why I used it

[Isaac]

And I knew just somewhere, someday, I’ll find Fox again.

It's king of hard to explain this line if you haven't read "Outlaw". I posted it in the writing section, look it up!

[Isaac]

^Awesome.^

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Acacia wrote: "Guinea Pigs: Another firework burst in the sky.
Letters to Ryan: But you're finally happy.

Yay, I legitimately have some too, Kriss! :D"

Letters to Ryan... I feel like crying and clapping for joy at the same time. xD

[[deleted user]]

Morbid, untitled, very short story I wrote for English:
All I could do was watch, as the world around me crumbled.

Vigil:
But I know it's a lie.

Skye High (another short story for English that I hate):
"I don't doubt that for a minute."

Breathe:
He could truly breathe again. (Maybe.)

Sons of the Morning:
"I forgive you." (This is just an idea, and it's not very original. I'm pretty sure it will change.)

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Slowly, he opened his eyes.

[Krys]

Maxy wrote: "Morbid, untitled, very short story I wrote for English:
All I could do was watch, as the world around me crumbled.

Vigil:
But I know it's a lie.

Skye High (another short story for English t..."

Vigil sounds like a sad ending. Is it? o.o

[Krys]

Here's an idea for Manipulators:

"I don't care anymore."

or

"It doesn't matter."

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Kriss wrote: "Here's an idea for Manipulators:

"I don't care anymore."

or

"It doesn't matter.""

Sounds sad.

[Krys]

Another. I'm have fun with this:

"No one knew the truth."

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OOh! That sounds really cool.

[[deleted user]]

Kriss wrote: "Maxy wrote: "Morbid, untitled, very short story I wrote for English:
All I could do was watch, as the world around me crumbled.

Vigil:
But I know it's a lie.

Skye High (another short story ..."

Very sad. I'm writing an alternate ending for Fate because I feel so bad for him.

[Krys]

Aw... Depressing ):

[[deleted user]]

Quite. He's only loved one girl and she freaking breaks his heart by marrying the amazing Darren Reid. *breaks out the tissue box, then begins chuckling at her randomness*

[Krys]

I'm so confused because I haven't read the story... Still... Poor Fate.

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Maxy wrote: "Quite. He's only loved one girl and she freaking breaks his heart by marrying the amazing Darren Reid. *breaks out the tissue box, then begins chuckling at her randomness*"

*sobs*

[[deleted user]]

Kriss wrote: "I'm so confused because I haven't read the story... Still... Poor Fate."

I only have the prologue up... haha. Fate is a person-ish-type-thing in the story, if that helps un-confuse you. He has a physical form. AH! That's the word I've been looking for.

[[deleted user]]

Haha!! yay!! So glad you found the right words to say.

[[deleted user]]

Me too, Erica... Meee tooo.

I'm hyper. I shall shut up now.

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Ahah!!

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I'M HYPER TOO!

[Julia]

not from something I wrote, but the creepiest last line ever:

1984- He loved big brother.

[Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts]

I'd lost her twice alread, and 3 time's the charm. Right?

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Julia wrote: "not from something I wrote, but the creepiest last line ever:

1984- He loved big brother."

1984- George oswell!

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That's considered spamming, Hannah.

[Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives], Butts butts]

Please don't spam

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Hannah wrote: "Copy this code to your website to display this banner!"

Grrr... Spam should jump off a building.