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Apr 15, 2008 08:24PM

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Attractive site! (Having the women rise from the city is very effective, but it rather bothered me when they went back down again. Just rising and fading out would, IMHO have been better. But it's not my site, and I hope you don't mind an honest observation).
But how can one go wrong with a story as intriguing as Evelyn Nesbit's? Best of luck with it....sounds like you've got a winner!
Best Regards,
Dorien


Good luck.
PS the only thing that I think needs fixing is some of the typos - but thats a minor thing, I am sure you are aware of. I actually like the characters rising and going back down. It captures the spirit of the book and the times! I personally would leave it - but as Dorien says - its your site.
Nice book and it sounds very interesting. So you
live in a "haunted house"? I lived in one that had "spirits" too, when I was a young child. Not too much fun! :) The best with your book! Perhaps you could find time to check out my new books too? Peace! Katie
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live in a "haunted house"? I lived in one that had "spirits" too, when I was a young child. Not too much fun! :) The best with your book! Perhaps you could find time to check out my new books too? Peace! Katie
http://www.jnksansone.com/KATIES_BOOK...
http://store.livingwaterspc.com/myfi2...
http://www.jnksansone.com/MY_FIRST_24...
http://katie-bear-cottage.weebly.com/...