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May 14, 2015 03:52PM
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I'm great! My throat hurts and I didn't have to talk to anyone at school today!
Okay. A girl's boyfriend died in a awful motorcycle accident. A month after he died, she found out she was pregnant with his baby. Her boyfriend had made his brother/best friend (either is fine) swear to watch her if something happened to him. He does take care of her no gradually the fall in love. I'd like them to be in the 22-28 age range.
Hmm that's a good idea, slightly hard, but I'll do it!
Yup. Wait is Mad her boyfriend's brother or bestfriend? Her ex's name is Rome.
Best friend, that way My character doesn't feel weird))
((Kk.))Mad stood with Luna at Rome's funeral, his two-piece stiff from the humidity of the day. He glanced at Luna, the tears running down her face. Maddox sighed softly and grabbed a tissue packet out of his pocket, handing it to her. He smiled gently at her.
Luna took them from his hand, thanking him quietly before taking some out, she didn't look at him or at anybody else, she watched the funeral quietly, thinking about the last thing Rome had ever said to her.
{FlashBack}
Luna was sitting between Romes open legs, staring up at the night sky, it was just five days before the accident, Luna leaned onto Rome, feeling happy for once in her lifetime. She turned to Rome, in his hands he held a necklace box, he handed it to her, she took it from his hands, she opened it. She gasped and took it out, it was a diamond ruby silver chained necklace, Rome gingerly took it from her hands, she lifted up her hair as he put it on her, before he closed the clasps, he sighed into her ear, " Promise me you always love me, no matter what happens, or who gets in the way, because I'll always love you no matter what, do you promise Luna? Do you promise?" Rome asked. " I promise," Luna whispered as Rome closed the clasps, he turned her around and kissed her softly.
{FlashBack Ends}
(( I hope you don't mind that I put this in here))
{FlashBack}
Luna was sitting between Romes open legs, staring up at the night sky, it was just five days before the accident, Luna leaned onto Rome, feeling happy for once in her lifetime. She turned to Rome, in his hands he held a necklace box, he handed it to her, she took it from his hands, she opened it. She gasped and took it out, it was a diamond ruby silver chained necklace, Rome gingerly took it from her hands, she lifted up her hair as he put it on her, before he closed the clasps, he sighed into her ear, " Promise me you always love me, no matter what happens, or who gets in the way, because I'll always love you no matter what, do you promise Luna? Do you promise?" Rome asked. " I promise," Luna whispered as Rome closed the clasps, he turned her around and kissed her softly.
{FlashBack Ends}
(( I hope you don't mind that I put this in here))
((No it's fine.))Maddox clenched his hands as he thought about that stupid motorcycle. Rome knew it would probably kill him one day but he didn't care. He glanced at the coffin. It was closed. Rome's body had been too damaged for anyone to see. Bruises and cuts all over his body. Mad ran hand through his hair and moved away a bit. He couldn't do it anymore. Mad went around the corner and punched a nearby tree, cracking his knuckles and cutting them as well.
Luna cringed at the Flashback, she then thought of how both she and Maddox had told Rome that the motorcycle was a bad idea, they all knew that one day it would kill him, but Rome never listened to a word they said, not once, of course he loved Luna, all three of them knew that, but he didn't care that the motorcycle would end up killing him someday.
Maddox rested his head against the tree, letting the pain just numb him up. He and Rome had both agreed that no one would ride the motorcycle after they had fixed it up. And when they finished, he took it for a midnight ride and was hooked. Both Rome and the cycle had been destroyed in the crash.
Luna left, she walked towards the river, the river was where Rome had wanted to be buried, it was where he and Luna met, shared their first kiss, and where they had first did "it". Luna looked at the small rock right between her feet, she kneeled down and picked the small rock up, she started to cry when she saw the little heart with their initials on it.
Maddox left the bloody tree and went in search of Luna. He finally found her by the river. He frowned and went over to her. Mad placed a hand on her back. "Luna.." he said softly. He didn't really know what to say to her. Didn't know how to comfort her. Maybe he should tell her about the promise Roma made him make to him.
Maddox left the bloody tree and went in search of Luna. He finally found her by the river. He frowned and went over to her. Mad placed a hand on her back. "Luna.." he said softly. He didn't really know what to say to her. Didn't know how to comfort her. Maybe he should tell her about the promise Roma made him make to him.
Luna looked up, she looked at Maddox before hugging him, " I know what he made you promise," Luna replied as she hugged him tightly, now she did really know, it wasn't hard for her to figure it out. Luna closed her eyes to keep the tears from falling.
Mad sighed quietly and hugged her, rubbing her back. "I'm sorry he's gone." he whispered softly. Maddox took a deep breath and stared over the top of Luna's head. Mad knew that Rome had loved her. Rome had told him multiple times. The one thing she didn't know, the day of his crash, Rome had been on his way to Luna's. To propose to her.
" Don't be sorry for something you didn't do or cause Maddox," Luna said quietly, she sighed as she hugged Maddox, the tears flew freely, she closed her eyes tight and she tried so hard to fight them back but she couldn't.
(( Oh IDEA! ^_^!!!!!!! I HAVE AN IDEA!!!!!))
(( Oh IDEA! ^_^!!!!!!! I HAVE AN IDEA!!!!!))
((What? Tell me now. I'll post later.))
(( What if Rome hadn't really died, that the body was the body of a thief, that the thief had kidnapped Rome, hiding him somewhere, The thief had stolen Romes identity and had rode off on Romes motorcycle, the thief had crashed the motorcycle and had gotten his face and body badly damaged, he had lost every single bit of DNA, making it hard for the medical examiners at the morgue, to make sure that it was Rome, during all of this Rome is still alive, but he's been in a coma for a whole month. So after his funeral and a ton of other "stuff" he regains his life back, remembering not only about what happened, but what he was suppose to do, so when he finds out his motorcycle is gone, he walks out of the place he had been hidden in and he starts to wander all over the city looking for Luna, when he finds where Luna now lives, When Luna opens her front door, and finds Rome, all healthy and everything, Luna is surprised and ecstatic, but when Rome comes to Luna's house, Luna and Maddox are married, and Rome is very saddened and angry? This can still go with your plot if you like ))
((Hmm. I'm not sure.. Maybe it was a car crash fire instead so the body was burned and that way they couldn't tell? And maybe Rome had somehow wandered out of town but had no knowledge of it and he had been living somewhere else for a while? Perhaps he'd been in a recovery thing where he tried to get his memories back?))
(( yeah that seems more like a more simpler plot,))
((Well do you like it? If not, tell me.))
(( I like it, it's a good one:)..))
((Yay! Alright. So how do we put it into action? Oh, and I want to keep the last part here: When Luna opens her front door, and finds Rome, all healthy and everything, Luna is surprised and ecstatic, but when Rome comes to Luna's house, Luna and Maddox are married, and Rome is very saddened and angry?))
(( And I have no clue how we could put it into action ))
(( xD Alright then. Maybe we skip to the part where she finds out pregnant?))
((Can you start? I have to go. Sorry.))
(( Sure ))
Luna was in the bathroom pacing, and pacing, making a lot of racket as she waited for the results of a pregnancy test, she could've sworn she heard the ragged breathing of Maddox as he waited on the other side of the door for her. She sighed and began pacing once more, waiting and waiting, which was really annoying her more then anything, and she wished that she could just open the door and have Maddox comfort her, but right now that wasn't the solution.
Luna was in the bathroom pacing, and pacing, making a lot of racket as she waited for the results of a pregnancy test, she could've sworn she heard the ragged breathing of Maddox as he waited on the other side of the door for her. She sighed and began pacing once more, waiting and waiting, which was really annoying her more then anything, and she wished that she could just open the door and have Maddox comfort her, but right now that wasn't the solution.
Maddox waited outside the bathroom door for Luna. He could hear her pacing in the there and was honestly afraid she was gonna wear a hole in the floor. He leaned against the wall and ran a hand through over hair. Maddox was just as anxious as Luna. He did and didn't want to know if she was pregnant with his best friend's baby but there was nothing he could do about that. Mad was going to keep his promise to Rome.
Luna bit her lip, she paced some more before she leaned on the door, " Mad?" Luna called, slightly worried that he wasn't there. Luna closed her eyes, praying that he was still there, and she prayed that she was pregnant, she knew it was Romes if she was.
Mad moved off the wall and stood right on the other side of the door. "Yeah, Luna?" he asked, running a hand down his tattooed arm. Maddox wasn't going anywhere. "I'm still here." he told her.
" Good, Don't ever leave me," Luna said, and suddenly a timer went off, she jumped in fright and her elbow hit the doorknob, "ouch," Luna muttered but she took the stick and she bit her lip as she picked it up, her eyes were closed, she then opened her eyes and then she ran to open the door.
Maddox jumped back as Luna came flying out of the bathroom, the door slamming against the wall. He put a hand on her back as she stood there. Mad couldn't see the test but he knew it could only go two ways and it either made her happy or it didn't. "Luna..." he said softly.
" I'm pregnant Maddox," Luna said quietly.
(( I'll be back in like twenty minutes ))
(( I'll be back in like twenty minutes ))
