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Awake
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Awake by Natasha Preston - Restarting November 26th 2021
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Chapter 4: The writing is super juvenile, like a middle schooler wrote it. And the relationship between Scarlett and Noah is moving way too fast.
Abby wrote: "Chapter 4: The writing is super juvenile, like a middle schooler wrote it. And the relationship between Scarlett and Noah is moving way too fast."
I agree the writing does seem a little juvenile. It's fast paced and rushed at times. And some of the dialogue is slow and rushed too.
I agree the writing does seem a little juvenile. It's fast paced and rushed at times. And some of the dialogue is slow and rushed too.
Finished: I sped through the rest of the book because it was so bad. I just couldn't stand it. This definitely has a one star from me.
Yes this is turning out to be a poorly written book. Not interesting at all. I'm io to chapter 6 and just Shaking my head at how it's written. I was expecting more.
The characters lack development and personality. They seem rushed and not there at times.
To me it seems like fan fiction writing. Sloppy and unedited... Though that's an insult to fanfic as some are better than this.
Done done done done. Yikes. What a read. I was expecting more from it. It could have been better.
For me the characters just lacked so much. Especially character development.
For me the characters just lacked so much. Especially character development.
I think so. I found myself just saying to myself "just finish it and get done with it." I was happy when I was done and a little disappointed with how it was. I wanted more out of it.
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Chapter 12: this reads like a middle grade book...the writing is kind of immature almost? I don't know. I'm only 25% of the way into the plot but I'm not enjoying this book.
Is this going to be a series? Oh pls. I have to read the rest if it is. Even though I didn't particularly enjoy the writing of this one.
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Date changed. Restarting November 26th 2021. Happy Reading ☺
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❀ Crystal ✿ - wrote: "20% [spoilers removed]"I was surprised that this was the focus too. It had me excited when I discovered it but it didn't turn out quite like how I expected.







When a new guy moves into town, Scarlett feels an instant spark. But Noah knows the truth of Scarlett’s past, and he’s determined to shield her from it...because Scarlett grew up in a cult called Eternal Light, controlled by her biological parents.
And they want her back.