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New Books for Review > Looking for a beta reader or two for my 107k portal fantasy story

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message 1: by S.A. (new)

S.A. Stevens | 1 comments Hello!
I am looking for a couple beta readers for my portal fantasy story that borders on dark fantasy. Here is the blurb:

The FMC is a dreamer and romantic that always has her head in the clouds. One day, a portal opens up and she takes a chance and steps through it, hoping to find her happily ever after.
She quickly learns that the grass is not always greener. On the surface, her new home is a utopia, but she soon discovers dark secrets lie beneath its foundation. Her dreams and nightmares are plagued by a ghost begging to be found. Will learning the city's secrets free her or jeopardize her life?

At this time, the story is primarily in the FMC's POV with several chapters from a different POV.


Current Tropes:
3rd person/Multi Povs
Fish out of water
Hero's Journey

Current Triggers:
Mild Adult language
Violence/Murder/War/Bloodshed
Anxiety
Nightmares
Note: I am still working out the trope & trigger list. Feedback would be helpful in this area as well.

I would like to have notes back by the middle of October so I can have time to re-work what I need to before sending it to my editor.

If you would to know more please feel free to message me! Or you can sign up to read here: https://forms.gle/DpJ6X5ceX2Qd59af6


message 2: by Veronika (new)

Veronika Akbasheva | 5 comments Hey! I’m currently working on short stories and also in need of a beta-reader who could give me a constructive feedback. I think we could help each other out, do a critique swap or something like that. If you are interested, contact me on telegram @icylily or email me veronika.akbasheva@mail.ru


message 3: by Jules (new)

Jules | 5 comments I’d love to beta read your book!🙃 feel free to send me an email 2006juliadias@gmail.com


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