I’ve just completed the second draft of my novel Something Between Us (Book 1 of my Between Us series), and I’m looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for the second round of feedback.
📖 About the Book: Something Between Us is a contemporary romance with suspenseful elements. It follows Ashley Summers, a Manhattan marketing executive haunted by her abusive past, who finds herself drawn to Landon Denver, a guarded British billionaire. As their relationship deepens, Ashley’s violent ex resurfaces—only to reveal he’s just a pawn in a much darker game. Alongside her protective sister Suzanne and Landon’s rebellious younger brother Jayden, Ashley must confront both danger and desire, discovering that love can be both terrifying and transformative.
📝 Details: • Chapters: 68 total (67 + epilogue) • Word Count: ~261,355 (current length) • Status: Fully completed and available in Google Docs
This is my 2nd round of beta reading, so I’m especially interested in feedback on: • Pacing (does it drag or move too quickly?) • Character development (are they compelling, consistent, and believable?) • Emotional impact (do the relationships and conflicts resonate?) • Any sections that feel unclear or unnecessary
If you enjoy romance with high emotional stakes, family dynamics, and a mix of passion and suspense, this might be for you. 💌
📧 If you’re interested, please comment here, message me, or reach out directly at laksshya98@gmail.com — I’d love to share the Google Docs link with you! If you’d like to discuss anything about the project before committing, feel free to message or email me as well.
Thank you so much for considering helping me polish this book. Your feedback means the world. ❤️
I’ve just completed the second draft of my novel Something Between Us (Book 1 of my Between Us series), and I’m looking for a few thoughtful beta readers for the second round of feedback.
📖 About the Book:
Something Between Us is a contemporary romance with suspenseful elements. It follows Ashley Summers, a Manhattan marketing executive haunted by her abusive past, who finds herself drawn to Landon Denver, a guarded British billionaire. As their relationship deepens, Ashley’s violent ex resurfaces—only to reveal he’s just a pawn in a much darker game. Alongside her protective sister Suzanne and Landon’s rebellious younger brother Jayden, Ashley must confront both danger and desire, discovering that love can be both terrifying and transformative.
📝 Details:
• Chapters: 68 total (67 + epilogue)
• Word Count: ~261,355 (current length)
• Status: Fully completed and available in Google Docs
This is my 2nd round of beta reading, so I’m especially interested in feedback on:
• Pacing (does it drag or move too quickly?)
• Character development (are they compelling, consistent, and believable?)
• Emotional impact (do the relationships and conflicts resonate?)
• Any sections that feel unclear or unnecessary
If you enjoy romance with high emotional stakes, family dynamics, and a mix of passion and suspense, this might be for you. 💌
📧 If you’re interested, please comment here, message me, or reach out directly at laksshya98@gmail.com — I’d love to share the Google Docs link with you! If you’d like to discuss anything about the project before committing, feel free to message or email me as well.
Thank you so much for considering helping me polish this book. Your feedback means the world. ❤️
— Laksshya Guptaa