Trying to gauge a level of interest. Would you be interested in this book? The novel is written and in the editing phase. Feel free to discuss and critique the TAGLINE, ELEVATOR PITCH, and BACK COVER SYNOPSIS located down below.(all feedback welcome, as long as it's constructive.)
If you're interested in possibly reading the first edited chapter and giving feedback, I would greatly appreciate it. Just send me a good email for you. If you're especially helpful, I may even end up sending you a signed first copy as a Thank You! ;) Once it's published of course. My goal is my birthday, 8/8, so as of today I only have 60 days.
TAGLINE: "Her gift could reunite them—or finally break her heart."
ELEVATOR PITCH: "A young girl inherits mysterious necklaces that draw her closer to her long-lost love—but the unknown history behind them could tear them apart forever."
BACK COVER: Auraya has spent the last three years trying to find Jacob—her best friend and first love—who left without a goodbye just a month after her grandmother’s funeral. On the day Jacob was supposed to move, she rediscovered the letter and the box gifted by her grandmother, realizing the true power within—but it was too late. Now a junior in high school, she’s still alone, still searching, until Annette—an outsider with a strange snack habit and a bold heart—sits beside her and brings a friendship, the first light, in years. When a school field trip spirals into danger, Auraya is forced to use the power of the necklaces to save Annette’s life. But Annette isn’t fooled and when she confronts Auraya, the truth only brings them closer. Annette is forced to move after a threatening encounter with her estranged father. Bringing up feelings of past regret, Auraya is determined not to let distance break another bond. Weeks later, Auraya visits Annette in her new town—and that’s when she finally finds him. Jacob—Taller, stronger, and just as kind—but after an altercation Auraya isn’t sure if it’s fate, or another chance for her heart to break. When Jacob asks her out, she’s hesitant—but agrees. However, their chance at reconnecting is shattered when the past tied to her inheritance resurfaces—bringing danger that could cost everything. Auraya can face it alone. Or risk losing Jacob all over again.
If you're interested in possibly reading the first edited chapter and giving feedback, I would greatly appreciate it. Just send me a good email for you. If you're especially helpful, I may even end up sending you a signed first copy as a Thank You! ;) Once it's published of course. My goal is my birthday, 8/8, so as of today I only have 60 days.
TAGLINE: "Her gift could reunite them—or finally break her heart."
ELEVATOR PITCH: "A young girl inherits mysterious necklaces that draw her closer to her long-lost love—but the unknown history behind them could tear them apart forever."
BACK COVER:
Auraya has spent the last three years trying to find Jacob—her best friend and first love—who left without a goodbye just a month after her grandmother’s funeral.
On the day Jacob was supposed to move, she rediscovered the letter and the box gifted by her grandmother, realizing the true power within—but it was too late. Now a junior in high school, she’s still alone, still searching, until Annette—an outsider with a strange snack habit and a bold heart—sits beside her and brings a friendship, the first light, in years.
When a school field trip spirals into danger, Auraya is forced to use the power of the necklaces to save Annette’s life. But Annette isn’t fooled and when she confronts Auraya, the truth only brings them closer.
Annette is forced to move after a threatening encounter with her estranged father. Bringing up feelings of past regret, Auraya is determined not to let distance break another bond. Weeks later, Auraya visits Annette in her new town—and that’s when she finally finds him. Jacob—Taller, stronger, and just as kind—but after an altercation Auraya isn’t sure if it’s fate, or another chance for her heart to break.
When Jacob asks her out, she’s hesitant—but agrees. However, their chance at reconnecting is shattered when the past tied to her inheritance resurfaces—bringing danger that could cost everything.
Auraya can face it alone. Or risk losing Jacob all over again.