Looking for a beta to read my first four chapters

[Arya]

Hi! I’m looking for some betas to read my first four chapters, to see if I’m going in the right direction! Here is the blurb.


Alwyn Briggs was born into rebellion. Hidden in the Humanlands under a false name, she was raised on whispers of war, loyalty, and a father who once shook the foundations of a kingdom. But when Carrendale’s armies finally crush the Confederation, Alwyn is dragged from hiding and paraded as the last remaining daughter of a traitor.

Marked by a sinister power she doesn’t understand and forced into the heart of her enemy’s palace, Alwyn expects death. Instead, the ruthless Queen of Carrendale offers a twisted kind of mercy—survive two months in Summot, the kingdom’s brutal military training ground, and earn a place among the Elites. Fail, and die in the ring.

Surrounded by strangers who share her bloodline but not her trust, and watched by a High Commander rumored to have destroyed entire villages with a single thought, Alwyn must navigate a deadly game of loyalty and betrayal. But as cracks begin to form in the Queen’s flawless city, Alwyn discovers that nothing about the war—or her father’s legacy—is as it seemed.

And when enemies begin to look like allies, Alwyn must decide if she’s willing to risk her life not just for survival…
…but for the truth.

[Debbykaay]

hello, I am interested in beta reading your book. If interested, drop me a mail debbieekenth@gmail.com

[Arya]

Hi! I’ll send it over now! Thank you both!

[Arya]

Check your e-mail! It should there for all of you! Looking forward to your feedback.

[Arya]

Hi Felix! Would love your input. I’ll send it over now.