Will anyone be kind enough to review for a new writer?

[Khalid]

Hi, I am Khalid. Not any well-known writer. This is my first book. Please feel free to contact me at a.b.m.khalid.hassan@gmail.com

Book: Psychopath: A Case Study in Unreality

Synopsis: A nameless operative who works for a secret organization performs assignments to manipulate the thinking of others. He doubts that his own thinking is also manipulated. He questions everything but doesn't want to know everything at the same time. In a psychiatric session with his psychologist, they both figured out that his imagined story somehow got matched with her (psychologist's) real incident. The story is slow-paced when the protagonist talks about his thinking or observes small things surrounding him with philosophical insights. But fast-paced during action sequences or conversations which often turns into intellectual analysis.

Around 10,000 words.

Would you please review for a new writer?