*affordable* beta reading [starting at 15 USD]

[⁺‧₊˚ ཐི⋆ vyn targaryen ⋆ཋྀ ˚₊‧⁺]

Hello angels!!

My name is Vyn. I am a college student currently majoring in English and am hoping to earn a little extra while helping my fellow writers make their work the best that it can be! I'm an enormous nerd, and although I specialize in fantasy, I adore contemporary fiction and romance as well. My services, which include editing sentence structures, commenting on worldbuilding and character relationships/arcs, remarks on foreshadowing and plot elements, etc, start at 15 USD for 30 chapters (regardless of length). After that, it would be an additional dollar for each chapter (regardless of length). The time estimate for 30 chapters would be up to a week. Here are some comments you would likely see from me:

"Your vocabulary impresses me daily, and this is such a perfect word for this situation. however, a lot of readers aren't going to know what this means. to retain an ethereal and symbolic tone while allowing for easy understanding, I would use something like ______."

"One small thing I've noticed while reading is that you often place a verb with an "-ed" ending when the structure of the sentence requires an "-ing" ending. I'll do my best to point out these moments"

"This is perfect! Love it"

"You're jumping heads here; while I enjoy extra perspective your main character and POV here is _____ and she wouldn't know or think this"

"I might replace this with another word such as "parchment" or "chart" because you've used map three times in this paragraph :)"

"To make this more impactful, I might mention the _____ earlier!"

"THIS IS SO SAD MY HEART CANNOT TAKE THIS"

Again, I'd sincerely love to help any of you- especially those of you who need cheaper options- to make their book into the best version of itself that it can be!!

If you think we'd be a good match, feel free to reply to this comment, DM me here (goodreads), or email me at evelyn.mae.bush@gmail.com!