I mainly want to post this because the attention span on tik tok is like 5 seconds, so I think this will fit that description. If you're wondering what type of writing/pacing this book has, I will give an example:
*BANG* *BANG* A dim red light came through the revolver as it was hot. “Why hasn't he..” *CRACK* The barrier split itself into 2 by 2 decimeter chunks as they laid down in order on the ground. *sigh* Shepherd's arms held against the stones, stopping them in the middle of the air. They stood still in the air not going anywhere. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Theon put his revolver in it’s saddle and reached for his knife. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Theon ran forward and striked his knife towards Shepherd's heart. “Hm” Shepherd grabbed Theon's hand with one arm and pushed it up with another. *splat* The knife went straight through Theon's last wound. *bang* *EEEEEEEE* Shepherd slammed Theon in the head. *dunce* “Aahh” Theon reached for his revolver. *tthh* *BANG* Shepherd hit Theon's gun with his right shoe. *vooo* Shepherd fired the remaining bullets in his revolver towards the gun. *BANG* *BANG* *BANG* Shepherd shot the revolver as it was in the air. *BANG* *BANG* It flew up in the air as he hit it again. *BANG* The revolver went over the edge as it flew over the barrier. *click* *click* *click* *click *click* *click*… *click* The chambers locked into place as Shepherd heightened his revolver towards Theon.
“hm, I didn't think it would end this way…” His look changed as he pulled the revolver back by a bit. “You saw them didn't you?” The screaming baby and mother appeared in Theon's mind. “My wife and daughter murdered in cold blood.” *tttsss* Shepherd pulled out his cigar. “Just as my men on the battlefield.” *sigh* Theon began to pull the knife out of his body. “Do you know why I smoke this?” “To help me forget the pain of that day.” “My life has been consumed by nothing but absolute loss. Then and only then will you understand what it’s like to be me!” “The end of the empires will mean the end of the wars. That day the screams of the dead shall end.” “I KNOW YOU UNDERSTAND!” *VOCH* The knife spun around as Theon throwed it towards Shepherd. “GHA” Blood ejected meters into the sky as it pierced through Shepherd's eye.
*BANG* *BANG* A dim red light came through the revolver as it was hot. “Why hasn't he..” *CRACK* The barrier split itself into 2 by 2 decimeter
chunks as they laid down in order on the ground. *sigh* Shepherd's arms held against the stones, stopping them in the middle of the air. They
stood still in the air not going anywhere. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Theon put his revolver in it’s saddle and reached for his knife.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!” Theon ran forward and striked his knife towards Shepherd's heart. “Hm” Shepherd grabbed Theon's hand with one arm and pushed it up with another. *splat* The knife went straight through Theon's last wound.
*bang* *EEEEEEEE* Shepherd slammed Theon in the head. *dunce* “Aahh” Theon reached for his revolver. *tthh* *BANG* Shepherd hit Theon's gun with his right shoe. *vooo* Shepherd fired the remaining bullets in his revolver towards the gun. *BANG* *BANG* *BANG* Shepherd shot the revolver as it was in the air. *BANG* *BANG* It flew up in the air as he hit it again. *BANG* The revolver went over the edge as it flew over the barrier. *click* *click* *click* *click *click* *click*… *click* The chambers locked into place as Shepherd heightened his revolver towards
Theon.
“hm, I didn't think it would end this way…” His look changed as he pulled the revolver back by a bit. “You saw them didn't you?” The screaming baby and mother appeared in Theon's mind. “My wife and daughter murdered in cold blood.” *tttsss* Shepherd pulled out his cigar. “Just as my men on the battlefield.” *sigh* Theon began to pull the knife out of his body. “Do you know why I smoke this?” “To help me forget the pain of that day.” “My life has been consumed by nothing but absolute loss. Then and only then will you understand what it’s like to be me!” “The end of the empires will mean the end of the wars. That day the screams of the dead shall end.” “I
KNOW YOU UNDERSTAND!” *VOCH* The knife spun around as Theon throwed it towards Shepherd. “GHA” Blood ejected meters into the sky as it pierced through Shepherd's eye.
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