Experienced Beta Reader - Immediate Availability - Any Genre

[A.K.]

Hi writers! I’m Alexis and I’m offering beta reading services. I’m an avid reader and passionate writer with a B.A. in Comparative Literature. With my experience being both a reader and a writer, I can relate to you and your readers and articulate my feedback on your work in detail.

I will provide you with detailed feedback addressing important elements of your work, such as characterization and motivation, plot and conflict, pacing, setting and worldbuilding, dialogue, technique and style, and overall thoughts and impressions. I will also address anything further you would like me to pay particular attention to.

I am willing to beta read all sorts of work, from short stories to novels to poems to non fiction narrative work. I am open to all genres. If your work is potentially triggering, please include a content warning.

I can also serve as a sensitivity reader for some groups of Indian (country) people (please include details of the character's background in this case) and queer people.

If interested, please comment or PM.

[Lee]

I've been working on a dragon rider fantasy, maybe its a romantasy. But it's a found family novel at 108k. But if you're interested, I'm looking for someone to rip my soul out.

[John]

Hi Alexis,

I have a contemporary novel at 158k words.

Blurb:
One morning in a coffee shop, Alex is beside himself to meet Pete Shehann, whom it seems has some experience in the very subject of which he is a self-proclaimed enthusiast. Reluctant yet prompted, Pete shares his story, beginning with how his father abandoned him as a child in rural 1930s Oklahoma, leaving him embittered and believing himself a failure, proven time and again. And marrying May couldn’t be luck at all but a fluke, even if she has her own problems. After losing all of her family in a tragic accident, a terrible void remains, and she wants children more than anything.

An unexpected inheritance raises suspicions yet sends Pete and May to a new life in Oregon, where they meet Stevens, the attorney handling the inheritance and proving himself a faithful friend in the years to come. But a tragedy that happened on their journey haunts Pete, eventually conforming to an eerie parallel with May after her health fails following the negative results of an infertility test. It greatly disturbs Pete to discover he isn’t even enough for his own wife to want to live, but he determines to do whatever it takes to save her. And what of himself? Is he destined a lifetime of failure?

Content warning: rape

If interested, contact me here or at lostintwilight@netzero.net

[Francis]

I am looking for a Beta reader.
54K Sci-Fi How a family handles the knowledge of alternate dimensions after watching one sister disappear.

ftcrowley@gmail.com

[Abbey]

Hi Alexis!
Would you be interested in a YA fantasy with bitey monsters, magical sword fights, and the power of friendship?

It's a completed 130K novel set in a fantasy medieval realm, and includes a slow-burn romance sub-plot.

Most of the book takes place in a country where the locals have all shades of brown skin. If there's anything about this world-building that you notice that I can't, I would really appreciate the feedback.

BLURB:

***
Monsters have plagued his city before. Now, two years later, they're back.

Still struggling to make peace with his past, Tristan Avron meets a girl carrying the magical crystal from his bedtime stories. Desperate for answers, he and his friends set out on a journey to find out where the monsters come from.

But it's not long before they make enemies with someone with strange abilities, and the farther they search, the more they realize what it may cost to stop them.
***

What this novel has:

-Men have feelings
-Women play an active role
-Occasional descriptions of violence (not explicit)
-Swordfights/magic

Let me know if you're interested, and I can send a sample chapter.

[Rachelle]

Hello Alexis,

I am looking for Beta readers for my completed novel.

Chamber of Whispers is a YA fantasy–magical realism mystery/action/adventure novel.

(In magical realism, fantasy elements are treated as normal and woven into the everyday world. The magic is ordinary and plausible, and the impossible is considered normal.)

This story follows a young college student, Harper Miles, who has the unique ability to shapeshift. Harper knows this unique ability will give her an edge in her future career as a Criminal Investigator. Only a few months before graduating, she loses her mother to cancer; while learning to cope with her mother's passing, Harper witnesses a murder one night while prowling as a cat and impulsively grabs an envelope in the victim's possession before fleeing into the bushes. Harper quickly discovers the envelope's mysterious contents have deep connections with The Chicago underworld, a sinister world she knows nothing about but is now suddenly intertwined in her life. Hired on with the Green Ash Police Department, Harper is quickly assigned to assist her department and the FBI on this case, which puts her shapeshifting skills to the test, turning the underworld upside down.

The setting is present-day—Green Ash, Mississippi, on the Gulf Coast.

The novel's word count is 90K

I would greatly appreciate it if you could look at my work and give me constructive criticism. Please let me know if you are interested.

Thank you

[Freyja]

If you have the time:
I'm looking for a beta-reader for my 33 K Slow burn, (18+) shifter romance.

Can you ever truly return to normal if your life has been a constant fight or flight? For Robin, the answer is uncertain. After years of surviving alone, she becomes entangled with the Red Mountain Clan and its enigmatic Beta, Wulf. As she navigates the complexities of trust and loyalty, shadows from her past threaten to resurface, forcing her to confront her deepest fears.

With danger closing in, Robin must decide whether to face her history or let it dictate her future. Wulf challenges her to open her heart and learn to trust again, but can she overcome the scars that hold her back?

Join Robin on her journey as she battles her inner demons and fights to reclaim her life, where resilience is the key to survival.

Thanks!

[Thom]

I'm looking for a beta for one of two projects:

Plague of Locusts is an apocalyptic sci-fi western (say that three times fast) and sequel to Lords of Night. It is set twenty years-ish after the first book and is mostly about the struggle to rebuild after an event and how regular people and the Locust People will be able to coexist. (Or not. Hint.) This weighs in at a respectable 96k words.

Victim of Changes is a time travel book about several things, but mostly about hope. From the cover letter:

Victim of Changes (106K words) is a sci-fi adventure, a story of time travel and destiny. It's the story of Mikayla Tombs, an entrepreneur who founds a time-travel agency, and Veronica Fleet, one of her Agents who eventually becomes one of her enemies. Mikayla's company, Novus, is a wealth-creation machine, equipping all sides of every time travel vacation jaunt and feud.

While chasing down a wily asset, Veronica Fleet finds herself on the wrong side of Novus and experiences what it's like to be one of the native time travelers she hunts down for the company. She then dedicates herself to righting the wrongs she and others like her have done, and along the way she enlists the help of Cat Nano, an archaeologist and long-time friend and partner of Mikayla Tombs.

Together, they hatch a plan which will not only create a safe world for travelers, but which might also be the key to saving Humanity. They only have to live to pull it off.

Please let me know if either of these tickle your fancies.

[Steven]

Hi Alexis,

I would love for you to beta read my historical fiction novel. I just sent it to my primary editor a few days ago, so it will be ready for beta-reading in 4 - 6 weeks.

Following is the blurb...
Thanks to Leonardo da Vinci’s miraculous new cannon, the Republic of Florence has defeated a superior naval force. But the victory comes at a cost: the Annunciation—a sacred painting said to protect the Republic from foreign invasion—has been stolen.

After Florentine spy Elena Borseli sends word of the Annunciation’s location in an underground lair beneath Notre Dame Cathedral, she falls into an ominous silence.

Enigmatic sea captain Niccolo Corsini has been tasked with an impossible mission: lead a small band into the heart of France to recover the Annunciation and rescue Lady Borseli from the infamous Bastille Prison. Yet even if he succeeds in either objective, how can he hope transport his Florentine Order across hundreds of miles of hostile territory? And do so in time to warn the Republic of the threat of an imminent invasion?

I hope to hear from you soon! (email: steve.freeman7@gmail.com)

[Michael]

Hi Alexis,

I would love for you to read my Post-Apocalyptic Catholic Action-Adventure story (195k words).

Blurb -

It is the cusp of the end of religious freedom in the United States as the government enacts new draconian anti-religious laws, and churches of many denominations begin organizing an underground effort to fight the rising persecution.

Before they can ramp up their struggle, a mysterious and terrible enemy appears. This new threat is bent on the destruction of all mankind or its subjugation under their rule. Lukas Dubois, a recent widower and Vatican Astronomer, along with the Roman Pontiff get caught up in the events. When international leaders refuse to submit, the enemy ruthlessly attacks.

In the immediate aftermath, society swiftly crumbles and thrusts people into a new medieval age without an apparent explanation, forcing Catholic husband and father, Greg Meyer, who is also a martial artist, to engage in a fight for the survival of his family. Greg focuses his efforts on recreating a knightly order of the Catholic Church to combat the new challenges. Adapt or die is the catchphrase.

Will the creation of a new Knightly Order be the world’s only chance?

Thanks!

[Robert]

Hi, I have a sci fi thriller that I'm looking to have beta read, its been read before but I'd like another opinion just to get another set of eyes on it. Here is a short description:
What would you do if you were sitting on your boat gazing over the side and a sleek, ferocious killing machine swam by barely in your sight in the murky water. Then it makes another pass and drags its razor sharp fingernails along the hull, the sunlight gleaming off its jagged teeth as you strain to see what it is.
This is real life for Brent Fisher as he tries to survive in the small town of Fortune.

[Diana]

Hello! :)

I know this is rather atypical, but I'm a fanfic writer with a deep passion for writing. I've tried to find beta readers within my community, but unfortunately, it didn’t work out. As a non-native English speaker, I'm quite self-conscious about my work. It would be a dream come true to finally have someone who could help me correct basic grammar errors and perhaps even offer some tips on how to improve my writing.

I mainly write fanfiction for the Hunter x Hunter fandom, and occasionally, my stories include explicit content. Thank you for reading this, and I hope to hear from you soon!

[Humphrey]

H
Are you interested in short stoty collections?

The stories are like "Final Destination" meets "The Monkey's Paw" (W. W. Jacobs, 1902). They are a little bit Roald Dahl with a hint of Poe. As such, they are tragedies more than either mysteries or horror, and would appeal most to readers who enjoy the inexorable pull of a story arc that leads to doom. In each story, a protagonist (usually a rotter), makes a wish that comes true with fatal results for someone, often the person making the wish. Sometimes the victim is just a nice person with bad luck.

[Tim]

Birds of America Hell

Multi-genre 88.5k word cleanly edited complete contemporary fantasy novel by retired criminal defense lawyer & former JAG officer U.S. Navy. Something different. Comp Tim Powers, Philip K. Dick (not claiming that quality, just giving an idea.) Themes: relationships, regret, perils of immortality, moral degradation in war, and a jaundiced view of the Cold War to the present.

After 30 years in Hell, Major Connor Galloway, USAF (MIA) is used to weird. But when a sightseeing charter reveals a shocking past he missed, he and the volatile Romanian crew of his ancient DC-3 are drawn into the diabolically inept Conspiracy to Change Everything. The prize: a way back to the world he left if he wants it. He must first survive the might of American Hell and the hidden agendas of friends and allies. Everyone is in Hell for a reason. Our Lady of Chaos may be rolling loaded dice for Galloway, but she loves irony. A darkly satirical blend of alternate history, aviation adventure, and military thriller in an original fantasy setting.

[Joanne]

Hello A.K.!

I'm a new author and looking for some feedback on my debut book "In a Bed of Crocuses". It is a MMF romance fantasy with tropes like; fated mates, happy ending, magic is real and burn it with fire. If you like romantasy that doesn't make you wait until the end for spicy moments, you may like this story as it begins as a holiday romance but after they leave the resort the MCs relationships are challenged with busy schedules, family drama, and a magical mystery centered around a strange plant.

[Victoria]

Hello Alexis!

My name is Victoria and I am new to the platform. I haven't come across many beta readers for children's manuscripts, but I thought I would comment and give it a try.

I have a children's ("early reader") manuscript that is fewer than 1350 words due to my reader category. I'm looking for feedback on style, pacing, dialogue, potential interest for a children's audience, etc. I'd love to get your eyes on it and maybe you know any children who would also give it a read?

In any case, here is a brief synopsis:
Lola Ellie Font dreams of becoming a ballerina. There's only one problem: she's an elephant, not a graceful gazelle with beautiful, pointed feet. Elephants never take ballet! Can Lola overcome her fears (and her flat feet) to pursue her dream?

Let me know if you're interested! My email address is victoriaprince15@outlook.com

Thanks :)
-VP

[F.K.]

Hi alexis,
My novel is a contemporary romance at 90k i just want someone to read it to give me feedback on style and pacing i would love to knew your thought if you're interested please let me knew
Blurb
Omar al-Tahan built himself from nothing. Growing up in a broken home, neglected by his own parents , he learned that success meant money, power, and never slowing down. Feelings? Attachments? Those were for the weak, until he met her.
Lilly was the one who slipped through his armor. Friends turned lovers, bound by obsession , they shared a passion as consuming as it was dangerous. But Omar? He has a gift for breaking things he can't bear to lose.
Now, in a world full of deception and fake smiles, fate has brought her back. Years of separation and countless obstacles couldn’t keep her from haunting his thoughts.
Lilly is trapped in a loveless marriage, burdened by choices that left her dreams in ruins. She carries her own scars, and when they meet again, old wounds reopen. The love they tried to bury bursts back to life—fierce, undeniable, and impossible to ignore.
Will their love remain a haunting echo of what could have been?

[[deleted user]]

Hi Alexis,

I hope you’re doing well! I wanted to reach out because I've written a self-help book and would love to get your honest feedback on it. The book was a bit of a passion project, sparked after a difficult breakup, and it turned into something more—a guide for navigating grief and the tough moments in life. I’ve packed it with practical advice and included humor and some personal, witty stories to keep it light and accessible. It’s a quick, easy read, and I’m hoping the tone resonates. If you have a chance to read it, I’d be so grateful to hear your thoughts!

Thanks so much for considering it!

Warmly,
Victoria

[Leila]

Hi! I have a novel titled “To our daughters” with 46433 words. To Our Daughters follows a young woman navigating a series of tumultuous relationships, each teaching her vital lessons about love and self-worth. After experiencing the chaotic love of her first romance with Matty, she confronts the painful realization that love should not come at the cost of her identity. Each subsequent relationship serves as a stepping stone, revealing the complexities of her heart and the weight of expectations.
Ultimately, she finds herself drawn to Dan, a steady presence who offers the kind of simple, unconditional love she never thought possible. Through their relationship, she learns that true love uplifts and empowers, allowing her to reclaim her sense of self.
This novel resonates with anyone who has felt lost in the complexities of relationships, offering a powerful message about the importance of self-love. Filled with raw emotion and relatable experiences, it serves as a beacon of hope, reminding us that healing is possible when we learn to value ourselves.

This is my first ever novel and it’s very near and dear to my heart. I would like any feedback you have! My goal is to get this professionally published and I would love to know what readers think and how I could make it better. Thank you in advance ♥️

[Kelsey]

Hi Alexis,

My name is Kelsey and I'm looking for a sensitivity beta reader.

I have a realistic fiction, early reader manuscript. It's a short 826 words and I'm looking for an honest opinion on the idea (I want to make sure I'm being culturally sensitive) as well as feedback on the writing (style, pacing, general interestingness, etc.).

Here's the synopsis:
Jack and his crew have their compass, shovels and snacks… and they’re off to dig a hole to China! They’re excited to learn about a new culture, and even more excited to get there and meet their new friend Li. Li and his friends introduce them to Chinese language, history, food and culture. This whimsical journey is all about expanding horizons - and satisfying that age old desire to dig a hole to China!

Thanks so much for offering your services - let me know if you'd be interested in reading my manuscript and I'll send through the pages.

You can also get in touch via my email: kelseydinan@gmail.com.

[Chris]

Hi, My name is Chris. Some of this may be triggering, However I have no Idea what triggers.

[Complete/In Progress] [12214] [YA/Black Fiction/Urban fantasy/Contemporary Fantasy/low fantasy] Black People Are Great!: The Power of Black Identity
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

9 Chapters of Savage Swords: The Thief of Shadows
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

[BookLoverGirl]

Hi, I was wondering if you'd be willing to read Chapter 1 of my dystopian novel and give me feedback? https://forms.gle/tsWikuwpb3eivUvbA

[Ray]

Hi Alexis, I'm Ray. I have a 9k-word nonfiction science book, Galaxy Astronomy for kids age 8-12. It teaches them to identify galaxy types by looking at beautiful images from the Hubble Space Telescope. Along the way, kids learn galaxy evolution, which happens over billions of years.

Would you be interested in helping me out with a beta read? The book is an epub and I can email it or a download link. Thanks.

[AB Fiction]

Hi Alexis,

I have some short stories I'd like you to review.
You can email me your rate at AB-Fiction@outlook.com

Looking forward to your reply.

[Shivendhu]

Hi Alexis,

I’ve just finished the 5th draft of Father, my 94k fantasy novel. Please feel free to DM if you're interested!

Zane's siblings have relinquished their claim to the throne, leaving the youngest prince to navigate a life he was never trained for. His father has been abducted by the neighboring kingdom, and now his uncles are eyeing his seat on the throne.

His only hope to save the kingdom is to reunite with his siblings by journeying across the land, accompanied by a boy who is too young and annoying to be his personal guard, and the very woman who abducted his father in the first place.

Excited to explore this with you!

[Valentina]

Hi Alexis,

I have a fantasy novel that's about 149k words. It is completed and I am searching for a dedicated beta reader that can help me see everything that I am too biased to notice about my story.
The story follows the main character, Elora, a banned powerful princess who grew up thinking her world died, living in the human world. She was cursed when she was little, being part of a dark prophecy that threatened to destroy their magical world. At 20 years old, she is compelled to return, and the reader sees the journey of her coming back, accepting her real identity, embracing her powers and the truth about her family and her world, and fighting everyone who doesn't trust her. There is a romance, enemies to lovers sub-plot as well as mystical creatures, wars, battle scenes, and complex characters.

Let me know if you're interested. I can also send you the prologue to start. Hope to hear from you soon!

Valentinanobilebarquet@gmail.com

[Lisa]

Hi Alexis

If you are still accepting work, I have a 100K complete horror manuscript which has already been through one beta read, and currently being assessed by another reader.

The story deals with demonic possession, set across multiple timelines.
The trigger warnings are mention of suicidal ideation and postpartum depression, (no death occurs)

If interested, I can send you a google doc link to sample, see if it is a good fit for you.

lisaryan@outlook.co.nz


Thank you for your time,
Lisa

[Abbey]

Hi Alexis! Thank you for generously offering your services. I have a new adult fantasy manuscript that needs beta reading. The current draft is 85k words. If interested, I'd be happy to provide the first few chapters to test the waters.

Here is a quick blurb:
Ruthless King Aldric has banished the gods, and the realm has fallen into disrepair. Resigned to a small cottage on the outskirts of the royal city lives Serafina Oakhart, who is forced to watch her father succumb to the effects of khata, the king's most destructive drug. Trapped and unwilling to leave her father, and she yearns for something more.

Determined to burn every khata field in the royal domain, she falls into leagues with the infamous pirate lord Errol Kalidan. As they sail the seas, Serafina begins to learn the truth about the man who rules the country. Even the pirate lord has more up his sleeve than swashbuckling. He offers her a deal: join the rebellion and watch the king's head roll. Serafina, driven by her anger, would do anything to see King Aldric fall.

As she navigates new relationships and new lands, Serafina is torn between embracing the power within her and the woman she used to be. With the fate of her realm hanging in the balance, she must choose: give up her power or watch everything burn.

Thank you for your consideration,
Abbey

[Steven]

Hello Alexis,

I am looking for beta readers for my YA Speculative Fiction book called "The Thrift Shop."

See blurb below!

Devon gets bullied daily, and he is dealing with severe PTSD after losing his father to suicide. His father was a professional baseball player, and Devon wants to follow in his father’s footsteps, but he is uncoordinated and small for his age. His life is one misery after the next until he stumbles upon a Thrift Shop where every item is steeped in history and grants its new owner magical properties.

Devon gets offered a job at the Thrift Shop, and slowly, things begin to turn around. But Devon begins to dig into the magic of the Thrift Shop, and secrets once hidden are revealed to him. He takes advantage of the magic in the shop, finding his own special item: an antique baseball glove that belonged to Lou Gehrig, and he begins to play baseball like never before.

But Devon’s life turns upside down when he finds out his mother has cancer. Everything begins to fall apart. He decides to sell the glove to make money for his mother’s treatment, challenging fate, and he angers the protector of the shop, an ancient evil that brought about the Dark Ages the last time someone tempted fate.

Devon must risk his life and make a bargain with the devil to turn things around and save his family, his friends, and all of humanity.

[Sin]

Hi Alexis!

I have a completed 51k sci-fi, post-apocalyptic, lgbtq romance novel.

Blurb: The story follows around Shion, a 17 year old amnesiac boy who woke up on a school rooftop with no memories of anything but his name. He then discovers that the world is infested with zombies, and he navigates everyday life as he tries to regain his memories and eventually form meaningful bonds with others.

CW // suicide, domestic abuse, gore, violence, implied SA, human experimentation

You can reach out to me at my email iloveeggssmh2@gmail.com

Thanks in advance!

[Lorne]

Hi A.K. Would you read a medieval Japanese historical novel? I also have several short stories, if you would be interested.

[Michael]

A.K. wrote: "Hi writers! I’m Alexis and I’m offering beta reading services. I’m an avid reader and passionate writer with a B.A. in Comparative Literature. With my experience being both a reader and a writer, I..."

Hi Alexis,

I'm looking for a final beta reader after making some tweaks based on my last beta reader's suggestions before I send out my query letter.

It is fantasy, set in a world of dragons, elves, and druids. It is a coming-of-age story for a young druid who can't control his magic, falls in love with a druidess, and meets up with a cantankerous old man who takes him on as an apprentice. The young druid serves a mad king who wants to unite five kingdoms into one empire. But to do so, he must rid himself of the druids and ensure that a door between his world and the world of Fae remains locked.

If you are interested in beta-reading, please contact me at my university email address: mi.cote@northeastern.edu.

P.S. The last beta reader said it was interesting enough that she couldn't put it don't and read it in three days straight. I thought that was encouraging. Any story or novel should be fun and interesting to read and that is what I am striving for in this first of a seven-series novel.

[Warren]

Hello AK,
Are you still doing the Beta reading thing? I have a completed my first novel, a sci-fi/fantasy with dark, comedic elements set between 2118 London and the Egyptian afterlife and likely to appeal to adult fans of Terry Pratchett, Richard Kadrey, and Saad Hossein.
If you are interested - and I'd be looking for feedback by the end of March, with a view to publishing at the end of April - then let me know and I'll send through a proper precis.
Warren

[EJMLS]

Hi AK!

I have a 132679w completed manuscript(1st draft)/Paranormal mystery romance

Seeking beta readers for my first novel. I need honest feedback please.


Blurb:

In a small mountain city of St. Georgetown where historic brick buildings blend with modern cityscape, a battle of romance between two young women unfolds.

“Who could possibly be my equal when you’re a girl with wealth, status, and looks? What man could even grab my attention when all men are beneath me?” These are the beliefs of Marianna, a billion-dollar heiress who wears the mask of an elegant and kind person in public, while hiding how highly she thinks of herself above others.

“My long time crush just asked for my number?! He doesn’t even recognize me after I reinvented myself. What if I tell him we actually met before?!” Samantha considered herself the stereotypical geeky girl who truly bloomed only the previous summer, now interacts with the crush she had admired from afar.

The two women find themselves involved with Nolen, a seemingly normal and average guy, in almost every way on the surface. The more Marianna and Samantha learn about Nolen, the more they feel him being “Normal” might be just a facade. As bodies are found from a vicious animal attack, a dark shadow looms over St. Georgestown interrupting their quaint, mundane lives.


Send me a message if interested. Thanks!

[William]

William Reyland | 2 comments
Dear AK. I am seeking feedback on my upcoming release. "All My Best Friends are Dead: A Buddhist Chaplain’s Path", to be released in Spring 2025. This 135 page editorial draft manuscript promises readers a unique inner perspective of the daily life a Buddhist Hospice Chaplain working in the conservative belly of the Midwest. It might sound gloomy but it isn't.

I am seeking simple feedback and there is a short survey included. If you are interested in reading this the manuscript, please reach out. I can't wait to share it with you. Thank you, AK.

https://www.williamreyland.com/

[Kyarash]

Hi Alexis,

There is a science fiction trilogy novel set in China in 2090. The first manuscript is ready and features mystery, romance, diverse characters, conspiracy, climate change, a futuristic world and inventions, resistance, disasters, pandemics, political changes, and an AI system and AI character.

If you are interested in providing feedback on the plot, writing style, and storyline, I would be happy to send you a special edition copy as an appreciation gift. Please let me know.

[Craig]

Hello. I've recently finished my suspense fiction novel and I'm looking for honest feedback. It's long but everyone who's read it so far said that it was justified. It's currently 135k words.
It's about Derian Sargis, a young man with extraordinary shooting skills, who is fascinated by the Wild West. Frustrated by the tedium of organized shooting sports, he discovers a way to restore the excitement that he’d once felt when he wrapped his hand around the grip of a pistol by organizing a quickdraw shooting club. Before long, The Gunslinger’s Club rapidly expands into a violent, worldwide phenomenon for which he is unfairly held accountable. For the sake of his precious Anyia, he struggles to suppress his rageful lust for vengeance long enough to clear his name, while being hunted by a mysterious villain who systematically destroys everything that he holds dear.
“In The Beginning” is an emotional coming-of-age thrill ride with unforgettable characters and explosive conflicts that document Derian’s involuntary progression from a calm, fun-loving, young boy to hardened gunfighter on the run. A fugitive from the law with a bounty on his head, he does his best to navigate his path to redemption, while relying on nothing more than quick thinking and an even quicker draw.
As the first act of a visionary tale, showcasing the ultimate battle between the forces of good and evil, “In the Beginning” is a delight for readers who enjoy unique characters, dynamic and humorous dialogue, fast-paced action and a cornucopia of raw human emotion.

[Barbara]

Hello,

I have a 72K-word African American Inspirational Romance Novel. This is my debut novel. I am looking forward to feedback about my first novel.

Please don't hesitate to get in touch with me at barbara@barbarajaneoliver.com if you are interested. Thank you so much.

Barbara

This is the synopsis:

***
This is an inspiring Christian novel that follows the life of Samantha, a compassionate nurse who has faced her share of personal trials but continues to rely on her unwavering faith in Jesus. Despite the challenges life throws her way, Samantha believes that as long as she puts Jesus first, everything will fall into place.

Samantha's world shifts when she meets Daniel, a widowed schoolteacher who has been struggling with deep resentment and anger toward God after the death of his wife two years ago. Unable to reconcile his grief and the pain of loss, Daniel has distanced himself from his faith, abandoned attending church services, and no longer nurtures a relationship with Jesus Christ.

Their paths cross by chance, and an undeniable spark ignites between them. However, Daniel fears that she will walk away if Samantha learns the truth about his disillusionment with God. So, he keeps his struggles hidden, unsure how to reconcile his feelings for her with the unresolved tension in his heart.

As Samantha and Daniel grow closer, the story unfolds with themes of healing, redemption, and the transformative power of grace. Samantha’s steadfast belief in God challenges Daniel to confront his anger and his pain, while Daniel’s vulnerability opens Samantha’s heart to a new understanding of faith and love.

This novel is a heartwarming tale about the power of faith, forgiveness, and the healing that comes when we allow God to lead us through life’s storms. It reminds readers that no matter how broken we may feel, God's love has the power to restore and bring new hope.
***

[Heather]

Hello,

II would be interested in having you as a beta reader for my first novel if you were at all interested!

I have a 110k word Dark Fantasy | Urban Fantasy | Supernatural Thriller | Slow-Burn Romance

Amalabragia


A fallen warrior. A stolen key. A fate he refuses to claim.

Banished from the only home he has ever known and brandished as the Incinorator, Nathan Ronin never wanted to be a legend he now fights in underground pits, testing the limits of the monster beneath his skin. But fate isn’t done with him yet.

Lottie Loraris was never supposed to be part of this world. When a priceless artifact is stolen from her, she’s thrust into a dangerous game of cults, magic guilds, ancient magic, and high-stakes betrayals. The Brotherhood, the Wild Hunt, and the underground elites are all circling—and Nathan might be the only person standing between her and oblivion.

Lottie is about to realize that the stakes were way more than she bargained for. And Nathan realizes—the only thing more dangerous than his past is his future.

If you like, dark, character-driven fantasy with high stakes and morally complex leads. If you love slow-burn tension, supernatural politics, and reluctant antiheroes, this book is for you!

Please let me know if you are interested!

[Lisa]

Hi Alexis. I have a completed LGBTQ novel of around 95k words that I would love to get your feedback on if you are still available for beta reading. I would be particularly interested in your feedback regarding Indian culture, as the main character's mother moved to the US from India when she was young, and I would like to ensure I have written an accurate and inoffensive representation of the Hindu faith. The synopsis of my novel is below. If you are interested, I would love to hear from you. my email is lisadeanwrites@gmail

When Eliot Carson’s carefully balanced world is upended, he finds support in the most unexpected place—Noah Weston, a rising Hollywood actor whose connection to Eliot’s family changes everything. As they navigate personal struggles, career ambitions, and an undeniable pull toward each other, Eliot must decide if he’s willing to take a shot on something bigger than basketball. The Perfect Match is a story of love, resilience, and finding unexpected connections when they matter most.

[Rob]

A.K. wrote: "Hi writers! I’m Alexis and I’m offering beta reading services. I’m an avid reader and passionate writer with a B.A. in Comparative Literature. With my experience being both a reader and a writer, I..."

Are you still looking for manuscripts?

[Robin]

Hey Alexis!

I have a few things I've completed and would love for someone to beta read them. Hopefully some resonate with you!

I have a ~7K short story about a former miner stuck in a dying Appalachian town, his strained relationship with his son, and the weight of the past keeping them both trapped. It explores themes of generational cycles, addiction, and the idea of home as both comfort and cage. Would love feedback on pacing, character depth, and emotional impact. This is I would say a short story grounded in realism, so let me know if that's not your cup of tea.

Another story I've completed is a ~4K short story about music, obsession, and the search for something just beyond reach—a sound that lingers after everything else has ended. Charlie, a washed-up saxophonist, is drawn to Laura, a woman whose voice pulls him deeper into this chase. She is both muse and siren, promising something beautiful but leading him toward a precipice. Together, they push the limits of music, of themselves, of reality itself—chasing a sound that may not even exist. Would love feedback on the emotional undercurrents and whether the story’s themes—art as hunger, sound as a haunting, and the thin line between creation and destruction—come through effectively.

Finally--this is a longer one--I have a ~60K magical realist novel completed called Lady Lo. Lo Ting, once a rising actress in Hong Kong, now makes a living as a cardboard collector in Sham Shui Po, pushing through the heat, the city’s indifference, and the weight of regret. When a minor injury on her leg refuses to heal—expanding, glowing, pulsing with an eerie life of its own—Lo is forced to confront the past she’s spent decades burying. The wound isn’t just an injury; it’s an unraveling. Through it, she begins to slip between reality and something stranger, something magical, where memories are as tangible as the neon-lit streets she walks, and the past refuse to stay buried. At the heart of it all is her son, Mahn Hohn, whom she left behind years ago. As the boundary between reality and the magical fractures, Lo embarks on a desperate search to find him before the city, or her own unraveling body, consumes her entirely.

Let me know if you’re interested in any of these! Thanks so much!

[Shravan]

Hey, my book is a memoir that is kind of dark and deals with a lot of stuff that can be triggering to a lot of people, and at the same time super relatable, introspective and raw. If you would like to beta read it for me, I would so appreciate it.
Wordcount is about 46k.
Thank you

[Chris]

Hi Alexi
Would you be interested in beta reading my 72000 mystery story? In Beneath the Breaking Lines, the lives of several individuals converge around a fatal bus crash, revealing how a single act can unravel everything with devastating consequences of deceit and the fragility of truth. Cooper Reeves, the owner of a struggling bus repair company, faces the consequences of his past as he works to rebuild the wrecked bus, haunted by guilt and the weight of his decisions. His journey becomes a quest for redemption, not just for the bus, but for himself and his fractured relationships, especially with his wife, Samantha. The line between innocence and guilt, between success and failure, is razor-thin, and as Cooper’s past collides with the present, the weight of those breaking points pushes him toward an irreversible transformation.
Throughout the story, the characters grapple with their breaking points—moments where a single choice or flaw changes their lives forever. Yet, despite the lies and betrayals, there is justice in the end. The truth comes to light, offering some measure of closure to those left behind after losing their loved ones. In the aftermath of the crash, Cooper and Amy’s bond deepens as they work together to restore the bus, symbolising the repair of broken parts of themselves. As Cooper and Amy’s connection grows, Cooper comes to realise that perfection is an illusion, and it’s the imperfection, the moments of breakdown, that shape them. The bus, once a symbol of destruction, is now a symbol of renewal, and Cooper finds himself married, beginning a new chapter in life. The journey from tragedy to healing, from fault to forgiveness, unfolds beneath the breaking lines of fate.

[Shayla]

Hi Alexis, if you're still kicking around on here I'd love to have you beta read my paranormal fantasy, Blood Glamours, which is complete at 110,000 words. Even a partial read would be awesome.

Here’s the elevator pitch. Please let me know if you're interested. Thanks!

*****

Life as a smuggler suited Deyl Parker very well—until one bad decision put thousands of fae lives at risk.

For two centuries, war between humans and fae has ravaged North America. While humans cower inside their walled-in mega-cities, the military’s Hunters scour the lands between for all that remains of the fae. Against this backdrop of fear and strife, Deyl and her partner Logan—protected by her unique magic—have made a lucrative living smuggling supplies into fae hands.

Their most valuable export? Blood glamours—a blend of Deyl’s distinctive magic and Logan’s science, and the only substance capable of fooling the Hunters’ blood signature tests. For the fae living in hiding, these are priceless. Logan, however, wanted more. When he begins selling blood glamours to the Resistance, he leads the Hunters straight to them—and gets captured in the process.

Logan knows far too much. If the Hunters break him, they’ll uncover the location of thousands of hidden fae—and learn far too much about Deyl herself. To save him, she must trade in her smuggling shoes for combat boots, and join forces with a Resistance wolf shifter, an elf with broken magic, and a mage too smart for his own good. Their mission is reckless, possibly suicidal—but Deyl has no choice. Because if Logan talks, it’ll spell the end for all faekind.

[Carlisha Writes Co.]

Be the First to Read Falling Confetti – Seeking Beta Readers!

**Dear Alexis,**

I hope you’re doing well! I’m reaching out because I’m looking for a few **dedicated** **beta** **readers** for my upcoming book, Falling Confetti. Since you love psychological thrillers with an eerie, mind-bending edge, I’d love to invite you to be one of the first to experience this story.

**What’s Falling Confetti About?**

Daisy wakes up in a fractured version of her home, unsure if she’s escaped a nightmare or stepped into one. The world around her is distorted, memories slip through her fingers, and shadowy figures linger just at the edge of her vision—watching, waiting. Those she meets insist this strange world is real, yet the unsettling gaps in her memory suggest otherwise. As she pieces together eerie clues, Daisy is pulled deeper into a psychological labyrinth where every step blurs the line between reality and something far more sinister. But as the mystery unravels, one question lingers above all: **Is she truly awake, or is the real nightmare just beginning?**

**Beta Reader Expectations?**

✅ Story flow & pacing – Does it feel engaging? Are there slow or rushed moments?

✅ Characters – Are they compelling? Do their actions feel believable?

✅ Clarity & world-building – Does anything feel confusing or need more explanation?

✅ Emotional impact – Does the tension, suspense, or eeriness come through effectively?

✅ Overall experience – What did you love? What felt off?

💡 **Google questionnaire** form for seamless submission. 🔗 https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FA...

**What’s in It for You?**

🌙 **An exclusive first look** at Falling Confetti before anyone else.

🌙 **Your feedback will shape the final version!** Your insights help me refine and strengthen the story.

🌙 **Special thank-you credits** – Beta readers will be acknowledged in the final book (if you’d like!).

🌙 **Early access** to future projects – Get priority access to ARC copies, giveaways, and behind-the-scenes content.

**Interested? Here’s How to Join!**

I’m looking for a small group of readers who can commit to **reading the manuscript within 2-3 weeks** and providing **honest**, **constructive** **feedback.**

If you’re interested, just reply to this email with “**I’m in!**” and I’ll send you the details, including the manuscript and a short feedback form to guide your thoughts.

Thank you so much for considering! I can’t wait to hear your thoughts and take this story to the next level together.

**Best,**

Carlisha Powell-Auld

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🔗 Let’s connect! @lisshaaleah

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[Chablis]

Hi Alexis ~
I would LOVE to have you read my fictionalized memoir 56k words about online dating during pre & post pandemic - humorous, yet thoughtful, metaphors of running and eating.
If you like David Sedaris, Cheryl Strayed Wild or Dear Sugar and even David Foster Wallace...its a mix of their influence.

Looking to have feedback by April 18th & I'll put your name in acknowledgements!
Please help!
Chablis Sanchez

[Jasmine]

Hi! Your offer sounds great. I have a psychological thriller/contemporary fiction manuscript that I'd love to have beta read. It's titled 'Justification'. It's approximately 50,000 words.

Here's a quick synopsis:

After surviving a brutal sexual assault, Averi struggles to navigate the aftermath—haunted by flashbacks, battling shame, and searching for justice in a system stacked against her. When the legal route proves futile, her mother moves them to a new town, hoping for a fresh start. But trauma doesn’t disappear with distance.

At her mother’s insistence, Averi attends a support group, where she meets Emily—sharp, fearless, and harboring her own painful past. A tentative friendship forms, built on shared wounds and unspoken rage. When Averi unexpectedly comes face-to-face with one of her attackers, the fragile foundation of her healing shatters. Emily offers a new path: revenge.

As their plan unfolds, Averi finds herself slipping further into the darkness, torn between the desire for retribution and the fear of losing herself in the process. But Emily is relentless, feeding the fire inside Averi until revenge becomes more than an idea—it becomes an obsession.

Then, everything spirals. Blood is spilled. Secrets unravel. And when Emily ends up dead, Averi is left with one terrifying question: If she wasn’t the one who killed Emily… who did?

Let me know if this sounds like something you'd be interested in

[Rachel]

I’m currently looking for beta readers for my novella, Whispers of Wings and Whimpers, and I thought you might be a great fit!

It’s a dark fantasy with supernatural elements, exploring themes of morality, consequence, and the fine line between light and darkness. The story follows a group of characters entangled in an otherworldly conflict, where choices carry weight and redemption isn’t easily won. With angels, magic, and an unfolding mystery, it’s a character-driven tale full of tension and emotion.

Since this story has some intense themes, I want to be upfront about the content warnings:

Psychological manipulation & coercion

Mild fantasy violence

Themes of regret, redemption, and emotional turmoil

A kidnapping scenario (handled without excessive detail)


The novella is 24,624 words long. If you’re interested, I’d love to send it your way! No pressure at all, and if it’s not the right fit, I completely understand.

[Rachel]

you can email me at rachelhendricks096@gmail.com