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message 1: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments So, I'm a young 14 yr old girl and I'm writing a dual pov about two girls who aren't related but are still 'sisters at heart' and the story is mainly revolved around Elena, whose 19, and her trainer Ivy, that's a little younger than Elena by a few months.
So my question is, how can I write the characters to be likeable and for the reader to get attached to them?


✰ Brynlee ✰ | 6 comments i’d give them character traits that are relatable and/or admirable for people who are around the same ages as them that might be reading it, that’s one of the big things that makes me love certain characters so much!


message 3: by TKZ (new)

TKZ | 36 comments Is there specific plot to the story?
Is it meant to be serious or can you add goofy quirks about them. Like one needs a morning Starbucks or is always has a specific candy, etc.


message 4: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Brynlee - I will do, but I need to ask what kind of relatable because it's a fantasy, fiction book? (sorry if I'm being a bother)


message 5: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @TKZ - Well, she (Ivy) can be goofy and fun but she's also serious when needed. Definitely not a startbucks coffee or candy😂💅🏼this is a fantasy, fiction book with magic


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