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Uh....*awkward laugh* Not really
Okay well what do you like?
Anything except high school rps. Like fantasy or sci fi usually.
Alright cool. Did you happen to have ideas?
I have one but its fine if you don't want to do it
The year is 3024 and the world is rule by a new species called the Perfects. The Perfects are and alien/human hybrid. Each perfect has a special ability and talent that use. Humans are extinct. Or that's what they think. Humans have to hide because they can't fit in with the Perfects. Most humans are barley living. Each Perfect is driected if they find a human they have to bring to the Dome where they would be transformed. One day the bad boy popular Perfect went stumble across a human girl on the run for life. He takes her to the Dome. The human girl gets transformed. Little did he know about the corrupt ways of the government until he is made to take care of the girl until she adjusts to her new life.
The government secerts he finds out.
She's confused and has no memory on what happened but she is a danger to the public with her ablitlies that no one has.
Can they stop the government before it's to late?
I have one more
That sounds cool. What's your other one? I'm just curious
Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?
I definitely like the first one
Thanks :)Just let you know my characters aren't that detail because I discover them as I go.
That's okay me either. But mostly because I'm lazy as hell
Is it okay if we don't start with characters?
Okay******
Aaliyah was walking slowly fast through the city. She dove each perfect trying to blend in. So far so good. She hope she didn't run into anybody who can tell she's human. Even though most could easily tell. She kept her head up some. Making her eyes look down. She couldn't get caught. The city was very busy which was an advantage and disadvantage at the same time. She didn't speak up. Her eyes would give her away. She had grabbed a pair of sunglasses from the sale table. She put it on her face. The sun was setting she had to get home to her brother.
Her eyes were going to give her away. She didn't have the health com in her eyes. She can't see in the dark either. Her heart rate was speeding. She was super nervous. She walked in the alley way that lead her to to her house. She then saw some people there. She backed away. She had to distract them knowing she was going to get turned. Her little brother had to stay safe. She took a shaky breath and went out of the alley way. She then turned down another one not knowing where she was.
She walked quickly looking down. She was super protective of her little brother and if he got hurt she would feel responsible. She ran throw her sunglasses down knowing she wouldn't be seeing anymore perfects or at least she thought she wouldn't see any. She ran into a person a perfect. She looked up and looked in his eyes and ran the past him trying to get away from him.
Her heart was racing. She was having a rush. She kept running not looking back. She stumbled along some trash cans. She was in a dead end. She was going to be turned. Her brother was safe that is all that matters right now.
Simon was walking around town trying to buy food for the afternoon when he didn't notice anything abnormal going on at first. Then again there was never anything to notice since everything was always so calm and undisturbed. Sometimes a bit too calm....
As he walked around, he noticed someone that seemed to be scurrying out of the corner of his eye.
He turned his head to see what it was when he noticed a girl that seemed to be trying to run away from something. He couldn't see her face since she was not facing him, but he guessed that she might be injured of someone had tried to rob her. He assumed it was the first one since crime around here wasn't all that common at all. Not to say it didn't happen, but it was rare. Especially with all of the enforcement that went down.
On an impulse, he decided to follow her. He wasn't sure if it was the best idea, but he didn't know what else to do. And he also felt at liberty to help her if she really was injured. Eventually he thought he had lost her when she ran straight into him. It had surprised him at first, but what surprised him more was her face. She was a human.
He followed her and called out to her, "Hey stop!" he shouted. "I'm not going to hurt you, I can help." Of course he assumed that he could help her. Because all he knew was that turning her would be the best for her. She would be immune to numerous diseases, she would become more physically capable of things. She would even become more intelligent. But this girl seemed frightened about something. Why? He slowly moved closer to her determined to figure something out.
As he walked around, he noticed someone that seemed to be scurrying out of the corner of his eye.
He turned his head to see what it was when he noticed a girl that seemed to be trying to run away from something. He couldn't see her face since she was not facing him, but he guessed that she might be injured of someone had tried to rob her. He assumed it was the first one since crime around here wasn't all that common at all. Not to say it didn't happen, but it was rare. Especially with all of the enforcement that went down.
On an impulse, he decided to follow her. He wasn't sure if it was the best idea, but he didn't know what else to do. And he also felt at liberty to help her if she really was injured. Eventually he thought he had lost her when she ran straight into him. It had surprised him at first, but what surprised him more was her face. She was a human.
He followed her and called out to her, "Hey stop!" he shouted. "I'm not going to hurt you, I can help." Of course he assumed that he could help her. Because all he knew was that turning her would be the best for her. She would be immune to numerous diseases, she would become more physically capable of things. She would even become more intelligent. But this girl seemed frightened about something. Why? He slowly moved closer to her determined to figure something out.
She looked up at him. She knew she wasn't going to make it. She looked down. She didn't say anything. "I'm not going to give up." She said. She was head strong person. She wouldn't let people control her at all. She would give up easily but she knew she didn't have anything to do get out or around him with. She had daggers in her shoes she would use. Her ankles hurt. She winced at the pain figuring she sprained it. She didn't mean to hurt self. She was weak. She was showing weakness. She will be turned. She wasn't going to be turned. He didn't have the sleeping spray or mind control. He didn't. She hoped he didn't which he probably did like most perfects.
She got up slowly and fell. She looked up at him again. She looked down. One thing she knew was she wasn't going to be a puppet. "I'm not a puppet. I don't and won't ever be controlled." She didn't say another word. She smiled up at him not looking in his eyes. "I won't give up."
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The truth was he did have the mind control, but for some reason he did not use it on her. He could see her resistance and he felt bad for her, but in his mind changing her was the only way that would make her better. That was what he honestly believed. "Don't worry," he said when he started to unintentionally control her mind. "I am here to help you. You should come with me and you'll be taken care," he said it calmly so that she did not think that he was threatening her.
He reached over and put his hand on her shoulder. "You need to calm down," he said knowing that she was injured. "You are in a lot of danger and I can help you but you need to cooperate," he said realizing that he was controlling her when he started to back off.
But he knew that it would only be a matter of time before the officials showed up and noticed what was going on.
He reached over knowing that he would probably have to carry her since she was injured and very weak. So he reached over attempting to pick her up. He knew that she couldn't really run away from him but he also didn't want to force her. But there was that instinct in him, he needed to help her and he knew that she needed to be turned soon.
The truth was he did have the mind control, but for some reason he did not use it on her. He could see her resistance and he felt bad for her, but in his mind changing her was the only way that would make her better. That was what he honestly believed. "Don't worry," he said when he started to unintentionally control her mind. "I am here to help you. You should come with me and you'll be taken care," he said it calmly so that she did not think that he was threatening her.
He reached over and put his hand on her shoulder. "You need to calm down," he said knowing that she was injured. "You are in a lot of danger and I can help you but you need to cooperate," he said realizing that he was controlling her when he started to back off.
But he knew that it would only be a matter of time before the officials showed up and noticed what was going on.
He reached over knowing that he would probably have to carry her since she was injured and very weak. So he reached over attempting to pick her up. He knew that she couldn't really run away from him but he also didn't want to force her. But there was that instinct in him, he needed to help her and he knew that she needed to be turned soon.
Why was he acting so calmly? She thought. He was perfect his main goal turning the human race into what he was. She felt her mind slowly slip away but she was stronger than that. "I'm going no where with you." She wasn't still putting up as much as fight as possible. "Calm down?" Her voice rose high pitch. "I'm not going to calm down. I know what kind of danger I'm in. Just because I'm human doesn't mean I have no brains. At least I have a brain unlike a mind control freak." When he went to touch her she backed wincing at the pain in her ankle. Her little brother was waiting for her.
"If you come any closer to me I will hurt you." Her voice trailed off some getting distracted by her mind being taken over. Her breaths began to be quicker as she tried fighting him. Even though she was strong she wasn't as strong as he was. He could hurt her badly after all he had more capabilities than she had. In way she felt bad for him being a puppet who didn't know any better.
He decided that clearly she wasn't going to listen to him. He sighed knowing that he didn't have the power to change her mind without forcing her, so that was what he did. He reached over and took control of her mind actually using fo price this time since he knew that she was not going to get better with him just standing there and letting her lie there on the ground without helping. He didn't know any better, he just knew that it was time for her to get turned.
"I'm sorry," he said lifting her up easily since she was rather light. He carried her over to the medical center and informed the doctors he was there. "This girl needs help," he said also trying to stop her ability to move around a lot. He didn't want her moving to the point where she injured herself further.
The doctors nodded and took her into an exam room, "you'll have to wait outside," one of them said to Simon. He nodded and decided to wait since he didn't know where her family was and didn't want her to be alone through the process. The took her into a very clean white room when they looked at her. Now that Simon was out of reach, he no longer had control of her. But the doctors did. They could easily control to make this easier for them. Just like they did with everyone else.
"I'm sorry," he said lifting her up easily since she was rather light. He carried her over to the medical center and informed the doctors he was there. "This girl needs help," he said also trying to stop her ability to move around a lot. He didn't want her moving to the point where she injured herself further.
The doctors nodded and took her into an exam room, "you'll have to wait outside," one of them said to Simon. He nodded and decided to wait since he didn't know where her family was and didn't want her to be alone through the process. The took her into a very clean white room when they looked at her. Now that Simon was out of reach, he no longer had control of her. But the doctors did. They could easily control to make this easier for them. Just like they did with everyone else.
Everything that she ever knew was gone in a blink of an eye. She couldn't help her brother. He was going to have to take care of himself pretty soon she will forget she even had a brother or any thing. She will be a mindless dummy like the rest of them. Her mind was gone now. No self control at all now. She was in the hands of this guy she just meant. As she approached the center she couldn't move at all. Her thoughts were scattered and blank. She felt herself be overwhelmed with the feeling of emptiness. If only she knew how long it would before she would be a perfect. Poking and jabbing at her body. She laid there mindlessly. She which she could have put up more of a fight but she was hurt and couldn't have done much any ways.
Her eyes widen as they began to brainwash and take all her precious memories away. Everything was gone. Then they put a big burst of light into her body. Giving her powers and brainwashing her to their likings. She was soon done and completed. There wasn't much she could of describe as the room was blank like a fresh new start. Her eyes dropped down closing some. It was all over.
The doctors rolled her to a room where she would wake up and be ready to go into transition.
As they rolled her out, the doctors made sure that all of her vitals were checked and that everything was taken care of. They were basically finished with the transition all that was needed now was to enhance all of her senses. So they started by putting a probe on her forehead that would scan her brain to see how active it was and what needed to be done.
As they waited one of the doctors wrote down all of the data and plugged it into a machine nearby. As they waited the probe turned itself off and they went forward and started to make all of the enhancements. After that, they would have to leave her in the final stage which was something that her body had to do on it's own. But they would be there every step of the way to ensure that the transition went smoothly.
She was placed in a white room and appeared to be in recovery but her whole body was going to experience a change that would probably take the whole rest of the night. The first thing that would change would be her eyes since they were near the top of her head. But everything would be a long and slightly painful change since that's how it always was. They would have medications to keep it from being unbearable but since it was a reconstruction of her body she would feel it somewhat.
As they waited one of the doctors wrote down all of the data and plugged it into a machine nearby. As they waited the probe turned itself off and they went forward and started to make all of the enhancements. After that, they would have to leave her in the final stage which was something that her body had to do on it's own. But they would be there every step of the way to ensure that the transition went smoothly.
She was placed in a white room and appeared to be in recovery but her whole body was going to experience a change that would probably take the whole rest of the night. The first thing that would change would be her eyes since they were near the top of her head. But everything would be a long and slightly painful change since that's how it always was. They would have medications to keep it from being unbearable but since it was a reconstruction of her body she would feel it somewhat.
Her eyes open some as they turned a bright blue. She wanted to scream as the pain felt unbearable to her. Confusion sparked in her a little. Not knowing where she was or even worse who she was didnt make any sense. Looking around in a white room seeing eyes. A loud scream escaped her mouth as she couldn't hold it down any longer. How was she going to surive this?Something wet like was dripping down her pale face. She felt her breathing pick up quickly and heavily. Going through everything scanned like to see if she knew who she was pr anything. There was nothing there or maybe she couldn't focus enough as the pain was all she felt. Unfamiliar faces were all around her standing there. Saying words and phrases she couldn't hear.
A sharp needle was injected in her arm to stop the pain. She closed her eyes again exhausted from what she felt. She figured who ever these people are they must have been helping her. Another thing she thought was the pain would be back and for next time how long. Droplets of sweat came down her face. That form little rivers of her face.
Time had past. Not sure how long but light waves of pain flew through her body. Wanting to open her eyes or squeeze it the sheets of the bed. Those were qll great options but she couldn't move it hurt a lot. Again trying to access to see if she ever experienced something like this before nothing. She didn't sense nothing.
The only comfort she had was that the people in the room she was in would help her again. They seemed like nice kind people who wanted to help her. And whoever they were must know who she is. Maybe she woild find out things about her past. Or maybe not maybe she should be thankful to have these people taking care of her and helping the pain subside.
It was beginning to darken outside. The streets were silence not word out of any one. Perfects or humans. Her body was getting closer and closer to be done but she was still starting over in transition. She was becoming more and more mindless and stronger. She felt obligated to help the government. She couldn't wait to thank them.
Meanwhile Simon was still waiting outside since he didn't know if she had any family or not and wanted to make sure that the transformation went well. He didn't realize that he had done anything so he just decided that it was alright and that he didn't need to worry about it. Just as long as she was better and healthy, then all was well.
He was pretty brainwashed as it was, but since everyone else was too it didn't make a difference. He looked around and decided to try and go to sleep since it would be an extremely long wait and he didn't have anything to do.
As he waited, the doctors paid close attention to her transformation and made sure to put enough pain killers so that it would be easier on her. They waited when one of them looked at her vitals again. Everything was fine and she was almost done.
One doctor used some of her blood sample to try and match a DNA to identify her. While she was doing that the other doctor watched, not feeling tired but just doing his job. The woman doctor found her name but didn't find that much information about her. Just her age, birthday, height, and usual stuff like that. It had her name but it showed just her parents. The woman nodded and recorded the date so that future doctors would know that today she had the transition. Other than that they didn't pry into anything else since this was her life now and she would just have to accept it like everyone else.
After about another 40 minutes or so the doctors nodded to one another, "I believe she is ready," the woman said and started to turn off one of the machines so that they could take her to a resting area where she would stay for the rest of the night.
As they lied her down in the bed, they could see that she was pretty much all changed. They pulled her bed and placed her in a resting room where they would leave her for the rest of the night. She would wake up in the morning a few more hours from now, but once she did wake up she would be a much more enhanced human. A much better person as well, they thought.
He was pretty brainwashed as it was, but since everyone else was too it didn't make a difference. He looked around and decided to try and go to sleep since it would be an extremely long wait and he didn't have anything to do.
As he waited, the doctors paid close attention to her transformation and made sure to put enough pain killers so that it would be easier on her. They waited when one of them looked at her vitals again. Everything was fine and she was almost done.
One doctor used some of her blood sample to try and match a DNA to identify her. While she was doing that the other doctor watched, not feeling tired but just doing his job. The woman doctor found her name but didn't find that much information about her. Just her age, birthday, height, and usual stuff like that. It had her name but it showed just her parents. The woman nodded and recorded the date so that future doctors would know that today she had the transition. Other than that they didn't pry into anything else since this was her life now and she would just have to accept it like everyone else.
After about another 40 minutes or so the doctors nodded to one another, "I believe she is ready," the woman said and started to turn off one of the machines so that they could take her to a resting area where she would stay for the rest of the night.
As they lied her down in the bed, they could see that she was pretty much all changed. They pulled her bed and placed her in a resting room where they would leave her for the rest of the night. She would wake up in the morning a few more hours from now, but once she did wake up she would be a much more enhanced human. A much better person as well, they thought.
Then the pain was gone. She didn't feel anything but exhaustion. She started to fall asleep slowly. She was relaxed and looked peaceful not knowing that they were moving her again. As she drifted off into sleep she started to dream. Aayliah notice she was in this dark room with malevolent eyes looking at her. That freaked her out a lot. They kept repeating mindless and puppet over and over again. Her heart started to pump fast. She became sweaty and clamly. She darted for the nearest door and tried opening it. Banging on it hard. "Let me out." She screamed in her dream. The door slowly started to open and there was a little boy. He looked familiar but it was impossible standing because she was a perfect and he was human. And as far she knew she was always a perfect. The human little boy was saying the same thing as the eyes with no heads.
Her eyes flashed open as she was in a room. She was shaking terribly. Tears were in her eyes. She didn't know what was happening she didn't want that dream again. Maybe the friendly people in the coats could help her out. She looked around scared from the dream that was replaying over and over in her head again. "Someone please make the dream stop." She whispered not knowing where anyone was. Her heart still pounding loud enough.
At that moment, one of the medical staff walked into the room to check on her since they had someone do that every hour when he saw that she was awake. "How are you feeling?" he asked checking the monitors. "The process is nearly done and you will be able to return home soon," he said, "but we don't have a location for you. Where is your currently family at this time?" he asked since they didn't have any information on her at all really.
As he looked at the machines, he could see that everything seemed fine except for the fact that her heart rate had accelerated a little bit. "Are you having nightmares?" he asked, "you needn't worry, they will go away once the transition is complete." He said it to assure her even though he knew that at this point she would believe anything he said. Not that he was lying to her or anything, but he knew that things could go worse depending on how well her body was accepting the change. But for now it seemed she was doing just fine.
As he looked at the machines, he could see that everything seemed fine except for the fact that her heart rate had accelerated a little bit. "Are you having nightmares?" he asked, "you needn't worry, they will go away once the transition is complete." He said it to assure her even though he knew that at this point she would believe anything he said. Not that he was lying to her or anything, but he knew that things could go worse depending on how well her body was accepting the change. But for now it seemed she was doing just fine.
"Home? I don't know where home is" She said confused. "Do you know who I am?" She asked. "I don't remember anything" She asked confused. Still shaking some. "Yeah I am having awful nightmares." Her eyes looked around and nodded. He said everything will be okay soon. That she believed. She was fine."Who are you? Where am I? Why can't I remember anything" She asked. She was more curious than others but she was a fighter into which could cause conflict with in her body. "Can you help me fine my home?" She was too curious about her old life but she just wanted to know who she was and where she lived. She was suppose to hang on every word they say. Right now being this curious was dangerous.
"My nightmare was about these eyes in a dark room repeating mindless puppet over and over again and then I ran away and I ipen this door and there was a little boy saying the same thing" Her voice still shaking. "But yiu guys are very nice and helped me. I want to say I will do anything you want"
He listened carefully to her when he sighed, "You're name is Aaliyah," he said. "And I do not know where your home is but I will help you find it." He meant that he would help find a place amongst a family of perfects where she could live. Since she was still pretty young she would still need a place to stay since she would not be ready to be out on her own.
He then remembered the guy outside and had an idea, "Your nightmares won't go away until the transition is complete," he said, "but there was someone that brought you here who is still around. Perhaps you would like to talk to him? Maybe that can help you to come to terms with your confusion and it may be helpful for you since a transition alone can be a bit overwhelming.
He finished up and thought about her nightmare, "Do not worry," he assured her. "You are perfectly safe here and nothing will harm you. But you must also try not to force your mind to think of anything since you don't want to give yourself more nightmares." He knew why she was having nightmares and the real reason behind why she saw what she saw, but he wasn't going to tell her of course.
He then remembered the guy outside and had an idea, "Your nightmares won't go away until the transition is complete," he said, "but there was someone that brought you here who is still around. Perhaps you would like to talk to him? Maybe that can help you to come to terms with your confusion and it may be helpful for you since a transition alone can be a bit overwhelming.
He finished up and thought about her nightmare, "Do not worry," he assured her. "You are perfectly safe here and nothing will harm you. But you must also try not to force your mind to think of anything since you don't want to give yourself more nightmares." He knew why she was having nightmares and the real reason behind why she saw what she saw, but he wasn't going to tell her of course.
"You will help me find it? That is super nice of you" Not knowing the family she will come home to will not be her own. Her parents are dead and her brother who knows where her brother is. She didn't care though as she could not remember. "I guess it I wouldn't mind meeting this guy." She said. "Don't think" Repeating the two words slowly while her head nodded understanding what he was saying. As he finished talking her eyes widened and started to glow she fell back on the bed trying to move but she couldn't. Another wave hit her this time exhaustion replacing the pain. Her body was going into the end of transition. The only sound she heard was her heart beating fast in her ears. This feeling seemed peaceful and calming. She didn't want to think she didn't want to do anything but what she was told. A wave hit her again. As this wave hit her she felt a great hate and despise for the humans. This hate would be stronger since she was a new perfect.
"Very well," he said. "I will bring him in once your transition is complete. For now you will stay here and rest since you only have about fifteen more minutes to go. I will be outside and in touch with you if you need anything." He walked out of the room and went to go wake up Simon who was still waiting outside.
He went over to him and woke him up. "She is almost complete with the transition," he said proudly. "I cannot thank you enough for finding her for us. She will be an important person to society just like you and I and we are closer to more perfects in this world." Simon smiled and nodded believing it to be true, but that was what they told everyone. You were important! You were special! But how can that be so since they were all perfect?
Simon slowly walked into the room where Aaliyah was and say beside her as she was finishing the transition. "I hope you are well," he said meaning it since he knew that the transition was always hard on humans at first. But he didn't feel bad since he believed this was a good thing for her.
He went over to him and woke him up. "She is almost complete with the transition," he said proudly. "I cannot thank you enough for finding her for us. She will be an important person to society just like you and I and we are closer to more perfects in this world." Simon smiled and nodded believing it to be true, but that was what they told everyone. You were important! You were special! But how can that be so since they were all perfect?
Simon slowly walked into the room where Aaliyah was and say beside her as she was finishing the transition. "I hope you are well," he said meaning it since he knew that the transition was always hard on humans at first. But he didn't feel bad since he believed this was a good thing for her.
Aaliyah wanted this to be over. She was so confused about everything and everyone. All she wanted to was go home. This was too much. A few minutes past as she opened her eyes looking and some. "Who are you?" She asked. Since she was done with transition. Everything seemed different. Her already blue eyes were brighter and had a glow to it. Where her blonde hair was the perfect shade of blonde. Everything about her was perfect now. Taking a minuet to think about his statement or question. "I am thank you for being so concern." Hoping that was a great way to respond to him. "I'm ready to go home now can you tell me where my home is?" She asked.
"My name is Simon," he said, "I was the one that rescued you, you were very injured when I found you." He honestly believed that she needed his help and he didn't mind helping someone out. But now that she was completely transformed he knew that she would be treated much better and be much healthier as well.
"I'm sorry," he said, "I do not know where your home is but I can help you find it. I believe that you will be able to find your home here among us." He knew that if she was still with a human family here, they would eventually find out and everyone would undergo the transition. But for now she would have to be placed in a temporary home so that they could take care of her.
"I'm sorry," he said, "I do not know where your home is but I can help you find it. I believe that you will be able to find your home here among us." He knew that if she was still with a human family here, they would eventually find out and everyone would undergo the transition. But for now she would have to be placed in a temporary home so that they could take care of her.
