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If you wrote a book where the villain succeeded in destroying the world, what would the last line be?

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message 1: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments Mine would be: I thought it would help. But I feel nothing new. After all these months... I've finally succeeded. So why do I regret it? Why do I regret everything?


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's all over. It's done, and it's mine. And you can't stop it."


message 3: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments damn, that's a good one!


message 4: by Daniz (new)

Daniz (happygirl53) | 46 comments “That was easy,off to mars I guess”she giggled as she skipped along


message 5: by Avinav (new)

Avinav  | 13 comments "You'll soon realise the world blessed you with weakening eyes and memories so that you couldn't really see yourself, can you now?"


message 6: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments wow XD she one of thoes scary cute villans?


message 7: by Daniz (new)

Daniz (happygirl53) | 46 comments Yeah, I was imagining that girl from legally blonde


message 8: by Daniz (new)

Daniz (happygirl53) | 46 comments And also slightly insane


message 9: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Avinav - wow, that's deep


message 10: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Danzi - haven't watched legally blonde but I'm planning to!!


message 11: by Daniz (new)

Daniz (happygirl53) | 46 comments Oh same just watched a few clips of her with her chihuahua 🐶❤️


message 12: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments lol, I only know of the show bcz of yt lol


message 13: by Daniz (new)

Daniz (happygirl53) | 46 comments That is so nice!How do yall think of all these deep things


message 14: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @henny - that's similar to mine!! loll. for the villan destroyed the world bcz of the loss of his loved one


message 15: by Judith Speed (new)

Judith Speed | 208 comments “Oh shit! What will I do for kicks now?”


message 16: by Brian (last edited Jul 11, 2024 08:36AM) (new)

Brian | 186 comments As the last smidgen of smoke slipped silently from the deathray's mighty barrel, Victoria lifted her eye above the optic rangefinder only to find a lonely emptiness, and though there was no one left to hear, softly mumbled, "Oops, thought l had that set on stun..."


message 17: by Sabrina Weldon (new)

Sabrina Weldon | 9 comments And so all was healed and all will begin anew


message 18: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @henny - that's similar to mine! great one!


message 19: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Brian - deeeeppp


message 20: by Nilou (new)

Nilou (thenilou) | 24 comments finally, she could breath . she could smile . she could cry. she could live . she could die . cause finally, there were none .


message 21: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments Damn Nilou :>


message 22: by Hanna (new)

Hanna Camille | 26 comments Some peace and quiet, at last!


message 23: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments omg, lolll


message 24: by Jo (new)

Jo Kerr | 76 comments As the smoke cleared he looked over the barren land, possessiveness in every taut line of his body. Then he realised there was no one to oppress, no one to bow to him or worship him. No one to listen as he declared his ownership.
“What have I done?”, he whispered.


message 25: by Emma (new)

Emma Stauffer | 35 comments As everyone who had ever doubted her lay dead before her feet, Scarlett’s laugh echoed into the silence, finally free and unleashed.


message 26: by Emma (new)

Emma Stauffer | 35 comments Oh that one’s good! The one before mine. Sorry my phone won’t show me ur name.


message 27: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Jo Kerr - Daaaammmmmmnnnn!!! That's AMAZING


message 28: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Emma Stauffer - Niceee!!


message 29: by Reeya⸆⸉ (new)

Reeya⸆⸉ | 56 comments A slow, wicked smirk spread across her face. Blood dripped down her face, leaving a trail of red behind it. The world was hers. To build. Or destroy. And she loved it.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Daniz wrote: "“That was easy,off to mars I guess”she giggled as she skipped along"

GNNNN-


message 31: by Jacy (new)

Jacy The screaming had silenced and all I could I hear was my heart beating in my chest. It was only me and her now in this cruel broken world. Together until death do us apart.


message 32: by Judith Speed (new)

Judith Speed | 208 comments Hanna wrote: "Some peace and quiet, at last!"

Love this one


message 33: by Judith Speed (new)

Judith Speed | 208 comments Brian wrote: "As the last smidgen of smoke slipped silently from the deathray's mighty barrel, Victoria lifted her eye above the optic rangefinder only to find a lonely emptiness, and though there was no one lef..."

Brilliant


message 34: by Ava (new)

Ava Ford | 4 comments (Brushing their hands off as if there was dust) well now I’m hungry I should probably get some food now, I haven’t eaten all day. Oh wait…dammit.


message 35: by Ava (new)

Ava Ford | 4 comments As the darkness spread around her, swallowing the world. She heard the screams of the people flicker out like stars blinking out of existence in vast space, until the only sound was her shallow breaths. In and out. The darkness was creeping in. In and out. Her eyes closed understand the consequences of what she did. In and out. In and…
Silence


message 36: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Reeya - wowowwww!! Great one!


message 37: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Jacy - I love the last line!! "till death do us apart."


message 38: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Ava ford - lol. no food to eat


message 39: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Ava Ford - damn. she died?


message 40: by Catherine (new)

Catherine Rivera | 51 comments Ava wrote: "As the darkness spread around her, swallowing the world. She heard the screams of the people flicker out like stars blinking out of existence in vast space, until the only sound was her shallow bre..."

Excellent ending. Nice


message 41: by Lori (new)

Lori | 15 comments ahhh ha ha ha haaaaa!


message 42: by Lani (new)

Lani Putthoff | 91 comments As she stares ahead as the fire spreads across the town she says "I did not want it to come to this, but they gave me no choice. Now they will get the madness and chaos they all deserve.


message 43: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments damn..


message 44: by Diana (new)

Diana Jaques | 134 comments As he stared at the smoke and ruin that surrounded him, a thought entered his head, What have I done?


message 45: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments Ooo, that's similar to mine Diana!!


 Bawy{•_•}  (bawy_) | 12 comments She looked at her crew with a tired but victorious smile on her face and said " phew, now that we got this off the list, what's for dinner ?! ".
Skinny Jake looked at her with anguish and said " your incredible highness, we lost Teddy the cook ".

"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo".

Her screams was higher than the screams of those dying souls on the ground and even higher was the sound of her empty stomach.


message 47: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments Lolllp


message 48: by Diana (new)

Diana Jaques | 134 comments Hafsa wrote: "Ooo, that's similar to mine Diana!!"

So it is. I saw the prompt and just went with it.
Great minds think alike.
Happy reading:)


message 49: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca Cecil | 272 comments I won, I won. It is ALL MINE. Hmmm... I should feel great but NOW WHAT AM I GOING TO DO.


message 50: by Kai's (new)

Kai's Darling | 660 comments @Diana - Lol yh. Great minds do indeed think alike:)


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