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If you wrote a book where the villain succeeded in destroying the world, what would the last line be?
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Jul 09, 2024 07:43AM
Mine would be: I thought it would help. But I feel nothing new. After all these months... I've finally succeeded. So why do I regret it? Why do I regret everything?
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"It's all over. It's done, and it's mine. And you can't stop it."
"You'll soon realise the world blessed you with weakening eyes and memories so that you couldn't really see yourself, can you now?"
@henny - that's similar to mine!! loll. for the villan destroyed the world bcz of the loss of his loved one
As the last smidgen of smoke slipped silently from the deathray's mighty barrel, Victoria lifted her eye above the optic rangefinder only to find a lonely emptiness, and though there was no one left to hear, softly mumbled, "Oops, thought l had that set on stun..."
finally, she could breath . she could smile . she could cry. she could live . she could die . cause finally, there were none .
As the smoke cleared he looked over the barren land, possessiveness in every taut line of his body. Then he realised there was no one to oppress, no one to bow to him or worship him. No one to listen as he declared his ownership. “What have I done?”, he whispered.
As everyone who had ever doubted her lay dead before her feet, Scarlett’s laugh echoed into the silence, finally free and unleashed.
A slow, wicked smirk spread across her face. Blood dripped down her face, leaving a trail of red behind it. The world was hers. To build. Or destroy. And she loved it.
Daniz wrote: "“That was easy,off to mars I guess”she giggled as she skipped along"
GNNNN-
GNNNN-
The screaming had silenced and all I could I hear was my heart beating in my chest. It was only me and her now in this cruel broken world. Together until death do us apart.
Brian wrote: "As the last smidgen of smoke slipped silently from the deathray's mighty barrel, Victoria lifted her eye above the optic rangefinder only to find a lonely emptiness, and though there was no one lef..."Brilliant
(Brushing their hands off as if there was dust) well now I’m hungry I should probably get some food now, I haven’t eaten all day. Oh wait…dammit.
As the darkness spread around her, swallowing the world. She heard the screams of the people flicker out like stars blinking out of existence in vast space, until the only sound was her shallow breaths. In and out. The darkness was creeping in. In and out. Her eyes closed understand the consequences of what she did. In and out. In and…Silence
Ava wrote: "As the darkness spread around her, swallowing the world. She heard the screams of the people flicker out like stars blinking out of existence in vast space, until the only sound was her shallow bre..."Excellent ending. Nice
As she stares ahead as the fire spreads across the town she says "I did not want it to come to this, but they gave me no choice. Now they will get the madness and chaos they all deserve.
As he stared at the smoke and ruin that surrounded him, a thought entered his head, What have I done?
She looked at her crew with a tired but victorious smile on her face and said " phew, now that we got this off the list, what's for dinner ?! ". Skinny Jake looked at her with anguish and said " your incredible highness, we lost Teddy the cook ".
"Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo".
Her screams was higher than the screams of those dying souls on the ground and even higher was the sound of her empty stomach.
Hafsa wrote: "Ooo, that's similar to mine Diana!!"So it is. I saw the prompt and just went with it.
Great minds think alike.
Happy reading:)







