Station Eleven
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Chronological Order of Station Eleven

Is there anyone else out there who loves everything about Station Eleven (the book) EXCEPT the “Flip Flopping Back and Forth In Time” structure?
Don’t get me wrong - I think non-linear narratives can work when used sparingly or with short chapters (such as in All The Light We Cannot See).
But I think Emily St. James over-did it with this writing technique in Station Eleven, to the point where the plot was unnecessarily fragmented.
If anyone else thinks this story might have been better told in chronological order: Don’t worry - I’ve done it for you.
Here’s “Station Eleven” in chronological order (more or less):
* Chapters 13, 14, 15, and 27 (Arthur’s Back Story)
* Chapter 17 (Arthur’s Dinner With Clark)
* Chapter 26 (Gossip Book about Arthur comes out)
* Chapter 25 (Some of the Letters in the Gossip Book)
* Chapter 39 (Miranda Visits Arthur)
* Chapter 53 (Arthur’s Last Day)
* Chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6 (Arthur’s Death and Beginning of Pandemic)
* Chapters 28, 29, 30, 32, 34, and 36 (Immediate Aftermath of Pandemic)
* Chapters 40 and 41 (Spread of the Pandemic and Miranda’s Illness)
* Chapter 54 (Miranda’s Last Moments)
* Chapters 42, 43, and 44 (Establishment of the Airport Settlement)
* Chapters 16, 18, 21, 31, 33, 35, 37, 45, 46, and 47 (All Snippets of Kirsten’s Interview with the Newspaper Editor, Year 15; Introduction of The Traveling Symphony)
* Chapters 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, and 12 (Year 20, The Traveling Symphony’s Arrival at St. Deborah by the Water)
* Chapters 19, 20, 22, 23, 24, and 49 (Separation of the Traveling Symphony)
* Chapter 38 (Kirsten and August travel toward the Airport Settlement)
* Chapters 48, 50, 51, and 52 (Escape From The Prophet, Reunion with Symphony, and Arrival at Airport Settlement)
* Chapter 55 (The Traveling Symphony moves on from the airport, Clark contemplates re-awakening of civilization)
If I missed any chapters or if anyone can think of a better order, please feel free to chime in with any suggestions.
Don’t get me wrong - I think non-linear narratives can work when used sparingly or with short chapters (such as in All The Light We Cannot See).
But I think Emily St. James over-did it with this writing technique in Station Eleven, to the point where the plot was unnecessarily fragmented.
If anyone else thinks this story might have been better told in chronological order: Don’t worry - I’ve done it for you.
Here’s “Station Eleven” in chronological order (more or less):
* Chapters 13, 14, 15, and 27 (Arthur’s Back Story)
* Chapter 17 (Arthur’s Dinner With Clark)
* Chapter 26 (Gossip Book about Arthur comes out)
* Chapter 25 (Some of the Letters in the Gossip Book)
* Chapter 39 (Miranda Visits Arthur)
* Chapter 53 (Arthur’s Last Day)
* Chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6 (Arthur’s Death and Beginning of Pandemic)
* Chapters 28, 29, 30, 32, 34, and 36 (Immediate Aftermath of Pandemic)
* Chapters 40 and 41 (Spread of the Pandemic and Miranda’s Illness)
* Chapter 54 (Miranda’s Last Moments)
* Chapters 42, 43, and 44 (Establishment of the Airport Settlement)
* Chapters 16, 18, 21, 31, 33, 35, 37, 45, 46, and 47 (All Snippets of Kirsten’s Interview with the Newspaper Editor, Year 15; Introduction of The Traveling Symphony)
* Chapters 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, and 12 (Year 20, The Traveling Symphony’s Arrival at St. Deborah by the Water)
* Chapters 19, 20, 22, 23, 24, and 49 (Separation of the Traveling Symphony)
* Chapter 38 (Kirsten and August travel toward the Airport Settlement)
* Chapters 48, 50, 51, and 52 (Escape From The Prophet, Reunion with Symphony, and Arrival at Airport Settlement)
* Chapter 55 (The Traveling Symphony moves on from the airport, Clark contemplates re-awakening of civilization)
If I missed any chapters or if anyone can think of a better order, please feel free to chime in with any suggestions.
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Thanks, it was an interesting experiment for me to re-arrange the chapters! Please let me know what you think if you re-read the book this way. And if you end up preferring the author’s interpretation, then you don’t need to do anything else the next time!
Wow. You did a lot of work on that. I agree time jumping can be frustrating when overused. I thought it worked ok in this book though because it kept me a little off balance, never exactly sure where or when I was when starting a new chapter and that fit the mood of the book. Everything was strange and different from how the world was before and they never really knew what to expect from day to day. Anyway it would be fun to read it again in your order and see what a difference it makes.
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