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Hi Sara,I would be open to swapping with work with you. I am also working on my first novel, it's a 90k period romance and I could use another set of eyes on it.
Feel free to let me know if this is something you would be interested in.
E.W wrote: "Hi Sara,I would be open to swapping with work with you. I am also working on my first novel, it's a 90k period romance and I could use another set of eyes on it.
Feel free to let me know if this..."
I'd love to swap! :)
Sara wrote: "E.W wrote: "Hi Sara,I would be open to swapping with work with you. I am also working on my first novel, it's a 90k period romance and I could use another set of eyes on it.
Feel free to let me ..."
Just messaged you!
Hey Sara. If you're still seeking a swap partner, I have a thriller romcom starring an IT girl as well, I think we would help each other a lot. DM if you're interested, I'll share the google doc.
Hi,I have a crime/thriller with some romance story in 2 parts (140k total). I am mostly looking for feedback on pacing and structure. You can see what it's about below:
It's a gang! is a about the new generation of a crime family proving itself and getting over years of abuse. It's about found family and making connections, choosing your people- and fighting for them. It's about persevering and making things work against all odds. It's about waking up every morning when you don't want to because you have people depending on you. It's about love.
I'd love to read your manuscript and give you any feedback you need of it.
Thank you,
Katrina
I'm currently writing my first novel, and I would love some extra eyes on it to make sure my pacing and character interactions are fleshing out okay! I'm also doing this to hold myself accountable to try to keep my deadline- lol. I'm happy to swap and beta read anyone else's work, too. I read everything, so it doesn't have to be thriller romance! I will list the description below!
"Tessa Fournier is just like any other girl. She loves chocolate, can't live without her computer, and has a crazy ex that will follow her to the ends of the earth. Typical, right?
After a difficult breakup, Tess finds herself confused and alone. So she does the only logical thing: She rents a house in her childhood neighborhood, with the hope that a fresh start will right all the wrongs in her life. What she wasn't expecting? That pesky ex just won't stay gone. Even crazier? Her hunky moutain-man neighbor has taken up the mantle of protector, guard dog, and handy man all in one.
Luke Solis has spent years of his life living in his cousin's shadow. He's quiet, and people like that about him... until they don't. Once they realize he doesn't open up? Gone. And usually, he's okay with that. Until he meets Tess, that is.
What happens when tall, dark, and stubborn meets clueless IT dork?
Well, they're not too sure either."
Comment if you're interested and I can email you the document so far!