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Rosa S | 12 comments I'm looking to do a beta reader swap for my YA Portal Fantasy at 96,077 words.
I'm not looking for detailed feedback as I've already hired an editor who's done a developmental edit.
All I would need is someone to read and respond to a 6 question survey when they are finished. I don't need feedback on each chapter.
I would like to do a swap for someone who is looking for similar feedback on their overall story and not feedback per chapter.

Here's the book blurb:

They say he’s the one they’ve been waiting for, but that’s impossible.

Sixteen-year-old Jaden Lewis knew checking out that cave on his neighbor’s property was a bad idea, but he couldn’t help himself. He hadn’t done anything this exciting since he became blind and his dad went missing.

Once inside with his neighbor’s foster daughter, Zoe, and his sister, Katy, they lose their way. When they finally find their way out of the cave, Jaden experiences excruciating pain from a birthmark on his shoulder. Zoe and Katy don’t recognize their surroundings, and when an Elvan princess finds them, they realize they’re no longer in the human world.

After learning they’re in the Elvan Kingdom of Ahana, Jaden is told he’s the one they’ve been waiting for. The birthmark on his back is the sign of the dragon and the reason why he’s in so much pain. He’s connected to the dragon that’s destroying their land, and he’s the only one with the ability to kill it.

Jaden doesn’t believe he’s who they say he is. But if he refuses to kill this dragon, he, Zoe, and Katy will become prisoners of the Elvan Kingdom and never return to the human world again.

The Sign of the Dragon: Ahana Book One is a YA Contemporary Fantasy with the message of becoming who you are meant to be.


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