I have two stories in need of a beta read. 1. Approximately 7500 word short story. Contemporary equestrian themed. Has a deadline. Need feedback no later than April 10th. Based on story prompt, Wes is shy young man who is also losing his eyesight due to a genetic condition. He meets Chris and romance ensues.
2. Novella approximately 37k words contemporary. Would like responses back by May first or sooner. Rob was bullied in high school by Dane. Ten years later, he meets Dane again and a friendship begins that develops onto a romance.
On both, I'm looking for plot holes, timeline issues, connection of the MC etc.
If interested and you can meet the deadlines please send me a PM. Thanks.
1. Approximately 7500 word short story. Contemporary equestrian themed. Has a deadline. Need feedback no later than April 10th. Based on story prompt, Wes is shy young man who is also losing his eyesight due to a genetic condition. He meets Chris and romance ensues.
2. Novella approximately 37k words contemporary. Would like responses back by May first or sooner.
Rob was bullied in high school by Dane. Ten years later, he meets Dane again and a friendship begins that develops onto a romance.
On both, I'm looking for plot holes, timeline issues, connection of the MC etc.
If interested and you can meet the deadlines please send me a PM. Thanks.