Middle grade fantasy book - beta reader needed

[Amy]

‘Mason did not expect to find a grumpy old man and mutant hedgehog in his doorway. Nor did he expect to be flung into the middle of a war. Now he’s stuck in a world of gatekeepers, fey wars and magical realms. Hidden for twelve years and with powers he should not have, Mason finds himself with one pressing question: who is he?

To make matters worse, his nan - the only person with answers - has mysteriously disappeared. With an ever growing list of missing loved ones, Mason and his new friends are torn between searching frantically and ending the fey war before it reaches its bloody conclusion.’

I would love a beta-reader for this. I’m on my third draft but I think it needs someone else to have a look now. Thanks!

[Preye]

Hello Amy! I would love to read your book. Mason sounds like a truly interesting character, and, from your blurb, it seems he has his work cut out for him. I'm keen to see how he develops over the course of the story and I would love to find out how the plot unfolds.

I have been a beta-reader for a little over three years and I pride myself on giving honest, constructive, and in-depth feedback nested in a series of actionable steps. An MG fantasy novel sounds right up my alley and I can start reading immediately. I have a quick turnaround time and my services are very affordable.

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If you feel I'll be a good fit for your book, please message me here (my account is open). Alternatively, you can send an email to preyeiwo@gmail.com and I'll get back to you immediately!

I can't wait to hear from you!

— Preye :)

[Fanna]

Amy,

I would be interested in beta reading this middle grade fantasy; the short blurb definitely pulls me in. With an experience of more than three years, I can provide a valuable, honest, and constructive feedback on your manuscript.

Find out more about the cost of this service and read testimonials on my website: https://fannaforbooks.com/beta-reader...

To discuss further or inquire something, you can send me a message on here or send an email to fanna.the.blog@gmail.com

Hoping to hear from you soon!

[Nila]

Amy wrote: "‘Mason did not expect to find a grumpy old man and mutant hedgehog in his doorway. Nor did he expect to be flung into the middle of a war. Now he’s stuck in a world of gatekeepers, fey wars and mag..."

Hello Amy,
Good morning.
I would like to read your story
Kindly go through the terms on my website www.digitalreadsmedia.com/beta-reading
So are the testimonials.
If you find I can be helpful for your book and you would like to have discussions post receiving the feedback to make the book stronger, kindly mail me at digitalreadsmedia@gmail.com or via the form on the page.
Keep writing.
Be safe always
Shalini
Digital Reads Media

[Sam]

Hi Amy, this story sounds amazing! I'm a certified editor who has been beta reading for over 7 years. My beta reads always include in-line comments and a detailed summary of my thoughts. My rate is $0.003/word CAD for up to 50k, then a $150 CAD flat rate fee for stories over 50k.

You can check out a handful of testimonials on my website: https://wisecatediting.com/testimonials/

If you think we’d be a good fit, email me at wisecatediting@gmail.com and we can discuss further details :)

Cheers!

[Helen]

Hello Amy,

If you are still looking for a beta reader, I will like to work with you on this project.
Contact me at https://www.fiverr.com/s2/94d53c1ba2

Thanks,
Helen

[Sara]

This sounds like a fantastic project! I would love to be involved if you are still looking for someone to work with. I’ve worked in the publishing industry since 2008, first at Penguin Books and then I opened my own business. Feel free to message me here, or by email at saramiller709@yahoo.com if you would like to chat more about your project.

I hope you having an amazing rest of your weekend!

[Cielo]

Hello Amy! I'd love to work with you. I'm an experienced beta reader who has worked with over 100 clients so far, my services are detail-oriented, thorough and honest.

My rate is $1 per 1000 words and I have experience beta reading Middle Grade books. Fantasy is my favorite genre. I can deliver feedback in November.

Here is my page in which you can check testimonials from past clients + further info on my beta reading service: http://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/b...

If you're interested in working with me, please contact me at cielobellerose@gmail.com and I'll reach back as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you!

[Karen]

Hi Amy!

I was excited when I read your post! I just finished a few pieces that are similar to yours! (Also, it reminded me of the Lion, Witch and the Wardrobe, based on your description).

If you're interested in my services, all of the details can be found on my Fiverr! https://www.fiverr.com/share/V3oEvl

Also, feel free to message me on Instagram at @reading_glasses__

[Blue]

Hey Amy!

https://www.fiverr.com/share/ZyRYjY

A lot of avid readers might know they don't like something, but they may not know why. It really takes someone who has studied craft to dive in a say 'why' something isn't working. Here is my fiverr link if you're still looking for a reader! I'm an agented author and happy to take a look at your query as well if you plan on querying agents once your manuscript is polished.

[Hannah]

Hey Amy!

Looks like you've got a lot of offers here to choose from, but if you're still looking for a beta reader, I would love to read your book!

I charge $15 for up to 40k words and $20 for up to 60k words, providing a chapter-by-chapter analysis of what's working and what isn't working, as well as a detailed summary of my thoughts on the pace, characters, dialogue, etc. You can see examples and read reviews of my work on fiverr: https://www.fiverr.com/hannah_hg.

[Ayesha]

Hi Amy,
If you haven't found someone already, I am interested in beta reading for you. My website, https://whatayeshareads.blogspot.com/... has more information about my services, examples of my commenting style, and testimonials. There are also more testimonials on my Goodreads thread: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


Thanks,
Ayesha

[M.T.]

Hi Amy! I'm super interested in this, and middle grade fantasy is one of my specialties. You can find more about me, including rates and testimonials, at https://kitnkabookle.com
Look forward to chatting with you!
Mary

[Katelyn Rothney]

Hi Amy!

I am an experienced young adult fantasy writer, who enjoys beta reading and editing in her free time. I specialize in reading speculative fiction, mainly Young adult fantasy! I would love to read and provide feedback on your middle grade/ya fantasy novel - I think I would be a terrific fit.

Hope to work together!


Feel free to get in contact with me in Goodreads messages, or on Fiverr.

Check out my Fiverr profile/reviews: https://www.fiverr.com/katelynrothney
Book a Young Adult beta read: https://www.fiverr.com/share/GKLDD2


Take care!
Katelyn

[Liz]

Hey Amy,

I'd love to take a look at this for you. I tried to DM you on here but I think you have that feature turned off. If you'd like to chat further, please email me at bookwormlisa@gmail.com. Have a good one,

Lisa

[Mamta]

Hi,

I’d love to work with you. My email id is menonmamta02@gmail.com


Here is my link with testimonials:


https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


Looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Mamta

[Kayinat]

Hi Amy, I hope I'm not late but here is what I provide:

Inline Comments

Top to bottom feedback on my readers report that includes
(20+ Q/A with detailed answers covering all aspects of your story such as flow - first impression - plot - plot holes - writing style - pacing - subplots etc.)

Suggestions for Improvement.

I have a good turnaround time.

Here is my mail in case you want to contact me there
kayinat125@gmail.com

Check out my reviews
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

[Anna]

Hi Amy, I would love to beta read your novel. I enjoy reading all types of fantasy novels and yours sounds interesting.

References and sample work are available upon request.
Martin Brisebois mbrisebois@lbpearson.ca
Tammy Euliano teuliano@gmail.com
Jaclyn Warren jcwarren1194@gmail.com
Maggie Shaw maggie.shaw@eregendal.com
Here are my rates and what I promise. 

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I am reading. (a reader report)
I will focus on:
- the characters (are they likable, enjoyable, did you manage your goal of making them awful ...)

- the story (pacing, great moments, twists, dead ends, dragging parts...)

- is your world believable? Is it detailed enough, or too detailed. 

-repetitions, beautifully written parts, quotes I loved.

$10 for 10000 words (2 days delivery)
$40 for 50000 words (7 days delivery)
$80 for a 100000 words (12 days delivery)

My email is andzela_a@yahoo.com

Regards, 
Anna

[W.]

Mamta wrote: "Hi,

I’d love to work with you. My email id is menonmamta02@gmail.com


Here is my link with testimonials:


https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/......"

[W.]

Kayinat wrote: "Hi Amy, I hope I'm not late but here is what I provide:

Inline Comments

Top to bottom feedback on my readers report that includes
(20+ Q/A with detailed answers covering all aspects of your stor..."

[W.]

I just went through the beta reading report Kayinat provided to me for my 70k word mystery thriller, Girl Emerging. Kayinat's turn around time was outstanding as were her insightful comments and suggestions. They will benefit me greatly in updating my manuscript. I was particularly pleased with the format of Kayinat's beta read report on the manuscript in which she posed and responded to questions about the manuscript. I have no hesitation in recommending Kayinat to others and will certainly request her services in the future.

[Anna]

Hello Amy, I would love to beta read your book. I am an avid reader myself but I used to love reading books for my sons as late as into early middle school.
References and sample work are available upon request.
Martin Brisebois mbrisebois@lbpearson.ca
Tammy Euliano teuliano@gmail.com
Jaclyn Warren jcwarren1194@gmail.com
Maggie Shaw maggie.shaw@eregendal.com

Here are my rates and what I promise. 

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I am reading. (a reader report)
I will focus on:
- the characters (are they likable, enjoyable, did you manage your goal of making them awful ...)

- the story (pacing, great moments, twists, dead ends, dragging parts...)

- is your world believable? Is it detailed enough, or too detailed. 

-repetitions, beautifully written parts, quotes I loved.

$10 for 10000 words (2 days delivery)
$40 for 50000 words (7 days delivery)
$80 for a 100000 words (12 days delivery)

My email is andzela_a@yahoo.com

Regards, 
Anna

[Emmanuel]

Name: UGOCHUKWU HARBOR
Format: pdf
Email:uarbor2007@yahoo.com
Can only drop a review on Goodreads. Don't have a KU account.

[Emmanuel]

I would love to offer a free service for the first 5k words, and if you like my work, would be offering a paid service for a full book ranging from $20-100.(email: uarbor2007@yahoo.com)