PART ONE

[zenik]

🦇 share your thoughts and chat about part one 🦇

[akiradorable]

i hate to be the first one to post but am i the only one who hates EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER ???

i just finished part one and i just don’t care for any of them (especially moore, like if something happens in the house and she gets killed i’d be glad to be honest being a bitch isnt a flex) ??? i’m really glad part two is them actually going in the house…

also i get that part one was probably just an introduction to the cast but it just felt super long and boring :( especially since i didn’t sympathize with any of the characters (i feel like sam could be cool and also daniel ? i think his name is daniel ? the one who writes teenager things)

sorry if this makes no sense i just want to see if i’m the only one to think like this ):

[amal]

i feel like the 1st part was very long and same, i don't really care for any of them :// sam could be cool but really moore is the worst and i feel like she could have be really cool if she was written by a woman
also am i the only one who feels like the author focused too much on the fact that daniel is fat ? like every time a character looks at him or even in his own pov it's always the main focus :( and yeah there's nothing wrong with being fat but it's too bad that it's his only character trait (for now, but still sam is traumatized, moore is really rebel, cole is a legend but daniel is just fat ??) but idk it's just the beginning