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Hi, Izzy!I just posted a similar request for chapter-by-chapter exchange. I'm working on an adult paranormal cozy mystery with a fair share of romance, if that interests you. Alternatively, I'm also working on an urban fantasy/paranormal WIP. I'd be happy to swap a chapter per week or two.
Let me know if you're interested. Or feel free to DM me.
Thanks!



I've got this YA fantasy I'm working on and I'd like some feedback as well as a bit of pushing to make sure I actually get it done on time. My plan has a chapter being finished each week, roughly 27 chapters, so if anyone's up for it either reply to this or DM me. I'm open to swaps in a similar genre or I'm also super into mysteries so that too.
It follows 4 main characters: Sky - a 16-year old soldier who has a medical condition that limits her magic, trying to prove herself to her captain and her team. Merlot - Sky's teammate and arch-nemesis, his dad is high up in the military and he's very skilled in his magic of weapon summoning. Blanche - a wannabe professional archer whose magic is flexibility, but battling against her family lineage of dancers. And Jet - a farmboy who lost his leg in an accident trying to save his sister's life, with the ability to grow plants and extremely protective over Blanche.
There's a series of prison breaks in their home country of Clavithia which the military aren't properly investigating. The 4 teens have to band together to figure out who is doing it and why before they manage to amass such an army of prisoners that they can break into the maximum-security prison and release an ex-dictator.
It's a bit of a cheesy blurb, just off the top of my head lmao