Short Story/Excerpt Swap

[Daniel]

Greetings everyone,

I have a fantasy short story in need of some beta-reading. In exchange I'll read any short story of similar length, or even an excerpt from your novel. My preferred genre is literary fiction, but I'll read anything that is well written and has a strong narrative hook.

Comment below if you're interested and I'll DM you with my email.

[Daniel]

It's 5k

[Susan]

Hi Daniel, I'd be interested in swapping a short story with you. The story I'd like to swap is about 3k words in length.

[Daniel]

Hi Susan,

That's great. Here's my email: danielchristopherrobledo@gmail.com

As well as the link to my story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H...

Feel free to send my me either your story's link or the file in an email.

[Mae]

Hi Daniel,
I'd love to swap stories with you if you're still interested, I have dark fiction short story that's just shy of 3K.
-Mae

[Daniel]

Mae wrote: "Hi Daniel,
I'd love to swap stories with you if you're still interested, I have dark fiction short story that's just shy of 3K.
-Mae"

Hi Mae,

I'd love to read your story. Feel free to either send me the link or email a digital copy here: danielchristopherrobledo@gmail.com

Let me know what kind of feedback you're looking for.

Here's the link to my story 'The Orc': https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H...

At this point this story has already been edited a dozen times, so what I primarily want to know are these two things: 1) how can I refine it. 2) Is this story any good? Don't feel bad telling me if it's mediocre, or even flat out terrible. At this point I'm debating whether to chuck it in the trash or start submitting it to publishers.

Thanks
Daniel