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Can I send you my short story it's about 7000 word
■ The title of my story is 》 ( Crossword ).
■ My literary fiction short story Count = (7000 words).
■And it's about :-
A man divorces from his wife and goes through a difficult period.And he may lose his job due to his psychological state.
The story deals with how to stand up again after breaking up... And all of this is further explored into the story through a crossword game with his friend.
Thanks In advance!
Best Regards,
Deema

Dunites: Utopia
Blog by Tristan Gaines
This is the 3rd group of doctors today that have come to examine me in my hospital bed. I hate feeling like some lab rat that everyone wants to see. They should just post me on Instagram or something, it would be so much easier.
Why are all these doctors coming to see a 14-year-old kid? It has to do with how I’m recovering from my really bad injuries miraculously fast! They are even calling me the miracle kid.
So why would I write a blog about this? It’s because my doctor won’t believe me after I told him why I am healing so quickly, and people really need to know what happened and hear about what I found. What I discovered is going to affect everyone; it will affect you, your family, I imagine all of Mankind! But, if my doctor, seeing in person my completely impossible recovery doesn’t believe me, how could I ever get someone to believe me?
My only hope is to write down everything, because to have any possibility of believing me, you will need to hear the whole story. This story comes with a warning though, because the few people who know the things I am about to tell you were almost killed, plus what they found out changed them forever! Also, I hope can handle finding out that some things you have believed your whole life are not actually true, because if not, you’ll want to stop reading right here. But if you’re the kind of person who wants to find out the REAL truth, as unbelievable as it might seem, then I urge you to continue.
You’ve kept reading……..good! You may never forget this day, because what you are going to read here will no doubt change your life!
There are two reasons I’ve named this blog Dunites: Utopia. The first reason is because without the Dunites, there would be no incredible story and no truths to be revealed. The second reason? Well, you’re going to have to hear the whole story to understand that.
Before we begin, you need to know what a Dunite is. This old magazine article will explain:

Mrs. Cage Unleased
Mrs. Cage is getting divorced after over twenty years of marriage. Leaving a boring relationship and uneventful sex life, she sets out to explore. Touching and eventful encounters lead to new found sensations.
Warning-detailed sex

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The smallest towns often hold the darkest secrets. Willow Creek is no exception.
For nearly two centuries, more than 100 young women and girls have vanished, never to be seen or heard from again. If they were, they were never alive.
16-year-old Harley Masterson has lived in Willow Creek her entire life alongside her best friend Jonathan Reeves.
Like a good portion of the town, at least the younger generations, Harley and Jonathan remain blissfully unaware of the mysteries that have plagued their quiet town for decades.
However, this all changes when a classmate of theirs goes missing.
Both sharing a proclivity for crime documentaries and mystery solving, the pair embark on a mission to uncover the truth about these disappearing women and girls.
Things are not always as they seem in Willow Creek. Especially not when all the adults in your life seem to be hiding something. Or when there's a suspected cult running on the outskirts of town.
Nonetheless, Harley and Jon continue their quest for justice.
But, what will they uncover?
Are they opening Pandora's box?
Only time will tell.
Follow Harley and Jon as their quest leads to generations of secrets, lies, and mysteries.
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looking for a beta reader for my debut novel. It is in the genre romance-drama, a 75k novel.
feel free to contact me at sush.dmath.123@gmail.com
thank you very much.

I recently had my new Memoir published (attached below) and would be incredibly grateful for any reviews. It's quite timely as it deals with healing from childhood traumas and learning to love yourself. I'm new to Goodreads, so I apologize if I'm using the wrong page. Thanks, Lee!
Don't Forget to Remember...

if you are interested I would like comments on the first ten chapters of my novel, Havensgreen.
J. Harrison my email: Jumpj1952@hotmail.com

Danica has lost another job to her clumsiness. Pissed and looking to release some pent up energy, she hits the club, where she runs into a mysterious man. Her mystery man turns out to be the Devil, and he has a job for her. He wants her to hunt down the seven deadly sins and return them to him. There's only one problem, Danica has a deep urge to keep the sins and not return them. Then there's the fact that for the first time she has found someone who looks very similar to her and understands what's going on with her. Could the Devil be related to her? Could she be falling for the sins? Is the more to her clumsiness than meets the eye?

Would you be interested to beta read a contemporary/literary novel set in Singapore, that deals with identity, betrayal and friendship?
Summary:
'Roger Gorren, a British Eurasian, is propelled by betrayal from his home in London to Singapore, where his life is disrupted by the death of his business partner. This draws him into the Secret Service. Ultimately, he has to decide whether he will kill to order.'
The novel is a study of someone under extraordinary pressures, forced to make decisions with far-reaching consequences, that he never expected to face. The reader should be prepared to ‘look beneath the text’ – i.e.: much of the meaning is implied, rather than simply being spelled out.
The full novel runs to 99k words, and the first 3 chapters 9.5k. Reviewing either would be most helpful.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Clive

I am just starting out as a writer, predominantly writing in the Action-Romance genre. It'll really help out if you could please give me some feedback on my story The Molki Bride, approx. 57K words.
GR link: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/5...
If you are interested, please let me know!
-Claire
Things I'm interested in:
1. Thrillers
2. Mysteries
3. Romance
4. Literary fiction
5. Contemporaries
(I am good with adult and YA!)
Things that don't really work for me
1. Fantasy
2. Science fiction
3. Paranormal
4. Nonfiction
5. Historical fiction
Send me a private message if I can be of any assistance! Also, if you can, I would appreciate it if you could let me know your timeline so that I can see if I can fit it in my schedule. Thanks!