What could have been done to make the book better?

[Kanak]

ok...so I have my own opinion about this book, about what the plot could have been ..So I want to know first what you guys think and then present my thoughts

[Merline]

I thought it was a great book. The ending was good though hart-breaking.
I absolutely love this book although it's a while ago since I last read it and I sadly forgot some things.

[Kanak]

I personally felt that the book was interesting but only because of the main characters. Otherwise, the plot was non-existent in the third book. Maybe the author could have shown a sort of war between Marcus and the people who wanted factions on one side and Evelyn and fationless on other side....And our main gang sees this from the genetic bureau department (or whatever the hell it is called) and want to stop it. 🤷‍♀️

[Nora]

Have Tris's death be better, or just don't kill her. I also didn't like them leaving the city, I think it would have been better if there weren't other people outside. I also would have wanted fewer fourtris arguments and more fluff. Oh, and less death in general. By having too many death's there wasn't enough weight in each death. Veronica Roth also shouldn't publish a short story where four and Christina kiss after tris is dead. Chris and Four had no chemistry and there was no reason we needed that short story.

[Kanak]

Yes!!! we had enough arguments between Tris and Tobias in "Insurgent". I know it is great to show a relationship with arguments to show that every relationship has problems. But we got that in the previous book. "Allegiant" could have been improved greatly if there were just more fluff in it!