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Bhavya is sort of back online
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaawhats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudd..."
Welcome ❤️
you know what? i'll just write as much as i can. i don't care how bad it is, i'll just write so i'll have a first draft and i can yeet as many things out of it as i like later.
Navya wrote: "Gourica wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaawhats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shud..."
Hmmm...okay, but if its sort of his character job to recruit people then I don't think its a problem...
Navya wrote: "you know what? i'll just write as much as i can. i don't care how bad it is, i'll just write so i'll have a first draft and i can yeet as many things out of it as i like later."YESSS that’s what I do.
Gourica wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa
whats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it sto..."
That's also good advice. I do want him to be a valid side character so I'll write him with a clear personality
whats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it sto..."
That's also good advice. I do want him to be a valid side character so I'll write him with a clear personality
Navya wrote: "Gourica wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaawhats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shud..."
👏👏👏
I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSIN
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-
Navya wrote: "I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSINSHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Maybe she has brains? Or stealth?
Gourica wrote: "Navya wrote: "I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSIN
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Maybe she has bra..."
She does have both of those things but
They just recruit her at first sight
Why? I WANT AN ANSWER
I CAN LITERALLY INVENT AN ANSWER
BUT NOOOOO
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Maybe she has bra..."
She does have both of those things but
They just recruit her at first sight
Why? I WANT AN ANSWER
I CAN LITERALLY INVENT AN ANSWER
BUT NOOOOO
Navya wrote: "I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSINSHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Hmm I have an idea but it sucks.
Maybe have the man know the girls mother/father who he owed in some way, or he was forced to make a promise to look after the girl if the parents fail to do so? Something like that...
Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaawhats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it stop"
because 1...."
Omg😳
Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSIN
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Hmm I have an ide..."
That's actually pretty close to the reason I gave in the books! I'll send it to you when I'm done so you can see
SHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Hmm I have an ide..."
That's actually pretty close to the reason I gave in the books! I'll send it to you when I'm done so you can see
Nashita wrote: "Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i am highly concerned that the adultish side character in my book sounds like the dude from fbaa
whats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it sto..."
yes.
whats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it sto..."
yes.
I have soo much faith in y'all all my writer fitness..one day wen u finish and release ur books imma say to everyone that u guys r my friends😪😪Overly emotional Yes
But the truth
I panic every time I read ur writing because mine is
Reasons A***** recruits A****
BOOM
1. ~brains and stealth~
2. An insanely difficult reason which involves A***** being an eighteen year old but his father knowing A****'s mother and stuff
3. He sees A**** running away from someone chasing her and wants to help
BOOM
1. ~brains and stealth~
2. An insanely difficult reason which involves A***** being an eighteen year old but his father knowing A****'s mother and stuff
3. He sees A**** running away from someone chasing her and wants to help
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "I HAVE NO IDEA WHY THIS GIRL GETS RECRUITED TO BE AN ASSASSINSHE HAS NO REDEEMING QUALITIES SO FAR
SHE CAN'T FIGHT
WHY AM I MAKING SUCH QUESTIONABLE CHOICES HELP-"
Hm..."
We writers think alike 😌
Nashita wrote: "I have soo much faith in y'all all my writer fitness..one day wen u finish and release ur books imma say to everyone that u guys r my friends😪😪Overly emotional Yes
But the truth"
Aww I don’t think I’ll ever get published though 🥲
I don’t write well enough for that...
Nashita wrote: "I panic every time I read ur writing because mine is trash not as good as yours"
I don't know who you're talking about but I can relate
And don't worry, your writing is great
I don't know who you're talking about but I can relate
And don't worry, your writing is great
Navya wrote: "Reasons A***** recruits A****BOOM
1. ~brains and stealth~
2. An insanely difficult reason which involves A***** being an eighteen year old but his father knowing A****'s mother and stuff
3. He s..."
Yess perfect!
Nashita wrote: "I panic every time I read ur writing because mine is trash not as good as yours"No my writing is not good. I love your work!
Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have soo much faith in y'all all my writer fitness..one day wen u finish and release ur books imma say to everyone that u guys r my friends😪😪
Overly emotional Yes
But the truth"
..."
SAME
Overly emotional Yes
But the truth"
..."
SAME
Navya wrote: "Reasons A***** recruits A****BOOM
1. ~brains and stealth~
2. An insanely difficult reason which involves A***** being an eighteen year old but his father knowing A****'s mother and stuff
3. He s..."
Sounds good!
Navya wrote: "Reasons A***** recruits A****BOOM
1. ~brains and stealth~
2. An insanely difficult reason which involves A***** being an eighteen year old but his father knowing A****'s mother and stuff
3. He s..."
Ooh nice
Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have soo much faith in y'all all my writer fitness..one day wen u finish and release ur books imma say to everyone that u guys r my friends😪😪Overly emotional Yes
But the truth"
..."
Your writing is soo much better and interesting than of one book I just finished yesterday ~
Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I panic every time I read ur writing because mine is trash not as good as yours"No my writing is not good. I love your work!"
Ig it's like we are never satisfied with our own
Also thank u❤️
And urs is great
Gourica wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I have soo much faith in y'all all my writer fitness..one day wen u finish and release ur books imma say to everyone that u guys r my friends😪😪Overly emotional Yes
..."
Awww thanks. That’s one of the best compliments I’ve received 🥺
Also which book was it? :)
Nashita wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "I panic every time I read ur writing because mine is trash not as good as yours"No my writing is not good. I love your work!"
Ig it's like we are never satisfied w..."
I guess...
Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: ":)"
:)"
my time has come
:)
:)"
my time has come
:)
Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: ":)":)"
my time has come
:)"
Nooooo Navyaaa noooo
Ok wow this nook has 273 pages!!!!
Bhavya wrote: "Navya wrote: "Bhavya wrote: "Nashita wrote: ":)"
:)"
my time has come
:)"
Nooooo Navyaaa noooo"
~much sadness~
:)"
my time has come
:)"
Nooooo Navyaaa noooo"
~much sadness~
i'm reading the foreign language that i made up in my book out loud and i am dying why is my voice and pronounciation so bad
i literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP
i literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP
NAVYAAA DID U SEE MY BOOK BLOG?
Navya wrote: "i'm reading the foreign language that i made up in my book out loud and i am dying why is my voice and pronounciation so badi literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP"
😂
Nashita wrote: "Ok wow this nook has 273 pages!!!!"Yess 🥳🥳🥳
Navya wrote: "i'm reading the foreign language that i made up in my book out loud and i am dying why is my voice and pronounciation so badi literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP"
Don’t worry, you can do it. ❤️
Nashita wrote: "NAVYAAA DID U SEE MY BOOK BLOG?"
IS THIS THE FIRST I HAVE HEARD OF THIS
NO I THINK I HAVE SEEN IT
I THINK I'M FOLLOWING IT
WHAT'S THE NAME?
IS THIS THE FIRST I HAVE HEARD OF THIS
NO I THINK I HAVE SEEN IT
I THINK I'M FOLLOWING IT
WHAT'S THE NAME?
Navya wrote: "i'm reading the foreign language that i made up in my book out loud and i am dying why is my voice and pronounciation so bad
i literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP"
like how the hell am i supposed to pronounce "J'lachno"
why did i invent "J'lachno" it sounds like the name of a fish
OH MY GOD
juh-laach-noh? jleych-now? what the hell
i literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP"
like how the hell am i supposed to pronounce "J'lachno"
why did i invent "J'lachno" it sounds like the name of a fish
OH MY GOD
juh-laach-noh? jleych-now? what the hell
Nashita wrote: "Books and Brownies
Wait here it is
https://booksandbrownies820513218.wor..."
YES I HAVE
Wait here it is
https://booksandbrownies820513218.wor..."
YES I HAVE
Navya wrote: "Nashita wrote: "Books and BrowniesWait here it is
https://booksandbrownies820513218.wor..."
YES I HAVE"
yay :)
Navya wrote: "Navya wrote: "i'm reading the foreign language that i made up in my book out loud and i am dying why is my voice and pronounciation so badi literally cannot pronounce words I MADE UP"
like how th..."
jeh - laak noh ?
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whats his name
casteel
or hawke
yeah that guy
*shudder* make it stop"
because 1...."
No! but you can do whatever you want with your book. Maybe make the character a lot more annoying or a lot more friendly or what you want readers to feel about him?