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trisha is once again tired. when is she not, though

“Along the side of the river, near where a new bridge had been built, a weatherworn statue stood, casting her shadow down the slope toward the blue-green waters. As tradi..."
hmm yes, it could have been better spaced out through two three chapters

Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it happens...hate those kind of bookas though"
I know, I’m so annoyed.
This book started with the description of the weather. And now 4 paras of info dumping.

“Along the side of the river, near where a new bridge had been built, a weatherworn statue stood, casting her shadow down the slope toward the blue-green w..."
Ikr!
*frustrated human noises*

Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it happens...hate those kind of bookas though"
..."
i snorted so loud
seriously!??! weather?!?! of all the things...

Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it happens...hate those kind of ..."
Yes!
I have evidence. Wait.

Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it happens...hate..."
These are the first two lines.
“IT WAS THE TIME OF year when the sunrise still had frost on it. But winter was fading, and the flowers were starting to bloom, and the promise of a new season filled me with anticipation.”

Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it..."


Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggg..."
that is exaclty what i'm feeling right now

so yeah i was intrigued

which was fine and mostly forgivable

which is just no
you can't just change her name to suit your story if i am to like it

just no
i hightailed out of there so fast

“Georgiana, it is good to see you safe and physically well. We have missed you and have been concerned for your well-being. Minister Shacklebolt has assured me that the worst of the fighting is over and that man Riddle is dead?"
Hermione raised her eyebrows at the mention of Kingsley’s new status, but silently nodded her head in the affirmative. The Queen gazed at her granddaughter for a moment longer then brought her hands to both sides of Hermione’s face and gently tipped her head down kissing her forehead.
"You look worn and exhausted, dear. I think your parents and brother can take you to Kensington to get cleaned and fed properly. After a good night's rest we can discuss what has happened over these past nine months and where we go from here, yes? But first? Commander McKinnon, if you would be so kind to return my granddaughter to her natural state.”
The Commander bowed and pointed his wand at the Princess and chanted the spell, “Heredis revelare.”
Quickly, Hermione Granger morphed back into her natural form.
Gone was the bushy brown hair and in it’s placed was long locks of wavy strawberry blonde that hung down to her mid-back. Her complexion cleared too, giving her the same peaches and cream skin her Mother had, and her eyes changed to a brilliant shade of sapphire blue...also exactly like her Mother’s. Her height changed slightly, giving her another couple of inches, making her legs look even longer, while her figure gained subtle curves.
She was a true English beauty, much like her mother.
Hermione smiled gratefully at the Commander, who bowed and was excused from the room by her grandmother.

her hair is hard work, her features are supposed to be mostly unremarkable, and her eyes brown
and this just ruined everything

Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?


Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?"
I was talking about that book.

i'm here for the non-makeup beauty
don't oyu dare force your beauty product filled character on me, and then proceed to tell me the love interest likes her only like this

Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?"
i think yes...is it an ARC?

i'm here for the non-makeup beauty
don't oyu dare force your beauty product filled character on me, and then proceed to tell me the love interest likes her..."
Totally agree!

Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?"
i think yes...is it an ARC?"
Nooo. It’s published.
It’s this book The Betrothed

Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?"
i think yes...is it an ARC?"
Nooo. It’s pu..."
oh my god
well that's embarassing

everything that looks good is over 100,000 words, and i do not currently have 4 hours to spare

Shouldn’t it be “IT WAS THE TIME OF the year, and not just year?"
i think yes...is it an ARC?"..."
I don’t know what to say at this point.
I would have maybe excused it if it was a debut, but it isn’t.
How did NO ONE notice it?

but some of the results were scarring

*fingers crossed*"
Hope you enjoy!

*fingers crossed*"
Hope you enjoy!"
IT WAS AMAZING!! I JUST FINISHED

*fingers crossed*"
Hope you enjoy!"
IT WAS AMAZING!! I JUST FINISHED"
YAY!
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Chapter 2. Like come on.
Ugggggggghhhhhhhh"
it happens...hate those kind of bookas though