Looking for a website review

[Jason]

Just wanted to share the website my brother has helped me put together for my books.

Take a look and let me know what you think. Any feedback would be helpful so we know anything that needs to be changed or edited. From personal preference to spelling and grammar corrections feel free to speak up!

Thanks!

http://varsiankingdom.com/

[Carolyn]

Generally light letters on a dark background are harder to read, but yours work because your font size is so large...however, all those grey letters... It would be easier to read if the letters were white. I suggest this from a background of 30 years in graphic design. I assume you're going for the dark, mysterious look.

[Jason]

Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yes, the darker mysterious type of look would be a decent way to explain it. Something fantasy without too much graphics galore.

I think I could make the text white easy enough.

[Carolyn]

You'll find the white text will be easier to read, and won't affect your "mysterious" look at all.

Good work!

[Jason]

Thanks. :) I still need to do that. Life has kept me running ragged with moving and stuff at work and all sorts of stuff but I plan to get to it!

[Carolyn]

Get up an hour earlier! ha ha!