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message 251: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay! Thank you!!


message 252: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 03, 2020 06:55PM) (new)

Name: Ro (short for Rosalie)
Age:17
Gender:female
Appearance:(view spoiler)
Personality: She is kind when she is with the people she knows well. And caring when it comes to hurt people or animals. She is also protectful of her friends and furry friends. She is very friendly with new people and will chat their ears off.
Goddess of Animals
Power:can speak to animals/ connect with them?
Pets: n/a?
Other: loves to be outside


message 253: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Sorry for the delay, crazy work and all- but I have added Addison, Melanie and Elizabeth to the list!


message 254: by [deleted user] (new)

I fixed it (i hope) if u have any concerns/questions plz tell me, i am trying my best :)


message 255: by [deleted user] (new)

thx!!


message 256: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Added Rosalie and Victoria. Have fun! :)


message 257: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 05, 2020 01:23PM) (new)

Name: Roxanne Sara Carter

Nicknames: Roxy, Anna, Anne.

Age: 15

Zodiac Sign: Taurus

Birthday: May 20th

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/im...

Personality:
|Shy| Roxy is shy, she rarely talks to anybody. This is when she’s normal, or scared. However, she does like to strike up some conversation with people she warms up with!
|Sweet| Roxy is sweet! She’ll go to anyone who has a problem and try to resolve it. However, when mad, she’ll snap at people and won’t talk at all.
|Caring| You wouldn’t believe how caring she is. She won’t let you do anything for her, she’ll do stuff for you. Don’t worry, if you need help, Roxy is here for ya!
|Welcoming| In her heart, yes. She’s had so many fake friends before, but she still welcomes people into her heart. Her father, Joseph, taught her that when she’s sad, not to complain and be grateful. She’ll murmur when scared quietly “Okay dad..”

Goddess of: Shyness, and Introverts

Power: Roxy can tell if someone’s really shy or not. If so, she can help to open them up.

Pet: Her dragon, Arabella.

Other: sister is Olivia.

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Name: Olivia Lily Carter

Nicknames: Livi, Olive (only to Roxy, others may call her that)

Age: 14

Zodiac Sign: Gemini

Birthday: June 20th

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://i.pinimg.com/736x/8e/c2/c6/8e...

Personality:
|gentle| she’s amazing with pets because all she does is keep gentle with them. She’s so gentle to anybody else, she’s not pushy at all.
|affectionate| sharing candy in her lunch? This gal. She’s really kind. Like, so kind, you can rely on her to do anything for you.
|curious| she’s curious of things she has not seen before. This is when depressed, she’ll explore places to get things off of her mind.
|Baker| Cooking? This girl is capable of holding a Bakery, she had one with her mom back home. When talking to her about it, it’s called Maisie’s Bakies, and she ran it with her mom.

Goddess of: Sweets, Candy, and Baking.

Power:
|Creative Focus| When Olivia is creative, or is just so focused, her eyes turn white. That shows that when she is focused on something, basically giving a sign; ‘I’m Focused, and I need to be left alone.’

Pets: Her Dragon, Zoey.

Other:


message 258: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Daphne wrote: "Name: April Smith

Gender: female

Age: 14

Goddess of: the moon

Personality: deffinitly not shy. she is almost always in a good mood, but if you get on her bad side, watch out. altho she isnt shy..."


daphne, good try on the personality, but here are some tips to improve if you join other roleplay groups. i only mean well when i give these comments, so just take it as constructive criticisms, which means as how to positively improve:

- spelling [ i know this is not easy to solve, but try googling words! so deffinitly is definitely, mystorios is spelled as mysterious, and astrominy is actually astronomy, . altho can be spelled fully as although ]
- you can afford to explain more on the personality traits, instead of comparing her to a night sky, tell me why is she mysterious? in what event is she mysterious?

i can't approve her, because i don't know her powers and what they do. please ensure that all the parts of the template at the beginning is included! and like what Nikki said, she can be Goddess of Moonlight, and here are other suggestions- Goddess of Space/Astronomy (since you've mentioned she's really into it)

⋆ Nikki ⋆ wrote: "Name: Roxanne Sara Carter

Nicknames: Roxy, Anna, Anne.

Age: 15

Zodiac Sign: Taurus

Birthday: May 20th

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/im...

Personality:
|Shy| ..."


Olivia's powers aren't elaborate on, like, I don't really see the impact of baking, so please add that in, thanks!

But, Roxanned is APPROVED.


message 259: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
i'm fine with their characters already, and i do approve of Daphne's April !! do you have anything else you want her to add / change?


message 260: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 06, 2020 07:15PM) (new)

Name: Adalyn Maxine Thaxton

Nicknames: Ada, Lynn, Lynnie

Age: 14 (turning 15 in 3 days.)

Gender: Female

Goddess of: Arts & Crafts, and Drawing

Power: Artistic Storage/Supply (Adalyn has storage. It’s in her head. It keeps art supplies by saying something, like a art supply. This triggers sometimes headaches, because she thinks about it way too much, and it just pops onto her hand. This doesn’t include saying any sort of thing, just Art supplies.)

Personality:
Ada likes to draw. She can draw self portraits, even. But, on her downside, she can get moody. Then, she’ll just take a break. A long one, by going to draw. When scared, she’ll keep very quiet. That’s beause Ada has had her parents yell at her, so she’s afraid of someone yelling at her. She has a brother, Aiden. He likes to keep cover for her.

Appearance: https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/im...

Other:

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Name: Aiden Jack Thaxton

Nicknames: Aid, Den

Age: 15

Gender: Male

God of: Reminders

Power: Remind (All Aiden has to do is look someone in the eye, then he can see what idea they had, but that it was drawing a blank? He could solve it, by knowing what the idea was in the first place.)

Personality: Aiden is a fun boy. When mad, he’ll just relax and think of the positive side. He barely gets scared, unless its a mad girl. He’s just a sweetheart, he just wants to help people out more. Aiden thinks of the positive things, amd remind others there is always a bright side.

Appearance: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/d7/7d/...

Other:


message 261: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay! Thank you!


message 262: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
NICE LONG PERSONALITIES!
have fun! i'll add them when i'm back from work :)


message 263: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 08, 2020 07:56AM) (new)

Name: Calista Azur

Nicknames: Liz

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Goddess of: Venom

Power: Can shoot venom from her hand/mouth but doesn't use it unless you're mean. She can make you paralyzed but she has an antidote that she saves.

Personality: Calista loves singing and she is really outgoing. She loves making friends. But if you get on her bad side, well, you'll never see the end of it. She protects anyone she cares about. She lost her sister (and best friend) at a young age so if she sees anyone with siblings she poisons herself a little bit. She does this Because she feels like it makes her stronger instead of weaker, and that she can handle life because she has PTSD of her sister dying. Also, since she does this she is now almost immune to poison/venom.

Appearance: https://images.app.goo.gl/543dFdZyBbN...

Sexuality: Pansexual (likes boys, girls, and nonbinary people and trans people you name it)

Other: She has depression, anxiety, anorexia, and insomnia. She has to take pills for this and they make her throw up or have massive headaches. Sometimes they make her emotional (mad/sad). If she doesn't take pills, well watch out.


message 264: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Anyway, you will have to remove the part where "it can be deadly" because no one should have the ability to kill someone else.

I don't understand what you mean by if she sees someone with a sibling, she poisons herself a little bit. What's the point of that?

The other parts of her personality are fine though, and in general, a goddess of venom is pretty cool.


message 265: by [deleted user] (new)

KK

Because she feels like it makes her stronger instead of weaker and she can handle stuff because she has PTSD of her sister dying.


thx


message 266: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
oh that's fine! but you can definitely add the reasoning in


message 267: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 07, 2020 10:23AM) (new)

is she approved yet?


message 268: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
yeap now she's approved! good to go on the list!


message 269: by [deleted user] (new)

yeeet thx!


message 270: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 07, 2020 11:16AM) (new)

I finished Ashlyn!!!

Name: Ashlyn (Ash)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://pin.it/6n1o2M1

Personality: When you first meet her, Ashlyn is quiet shy girl. She has trust issues (on a small scale) so it takes her a bit to open up to people. Once she does though, she is incredibly loyal and kind. She is a shoulder to lean on and an ear to listen. She tends to lean towards peace more than the rest of the TAS crew. If provoked though, she will put up a strong fight.

Goddess/God of: Goddess of Nightmares, Dreams, and Daydreams

Power: Ashlyn can tamper with or create dreams/nightmares/daydreams.. The downfall to this power is, when she uses it, she will go unconscious. This power also drains her a lot, so she can’t go around randomly altering everyone’s dreams/nightmares.

Pets: TBD

Other: She was a part of TAS and is Ciara's twin.

Let me know if there is anything you want me to change or add!


message 271: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
I think she's generally fine, it's just interesting how everyone wants to use "illusion" as a power.

Maybe you could remove the part of her giving dreams, nightmares or changing them? It's a very powerful tool, to alter someone's mind like that!


message 272: by [deleted user] (new)

I can edit her powers! That’s the part I wasn’t sure about


message 273: by [deleted user] (new)

Is that better? I took out the illusion part because I realized that that’s pretty similar to what my other character, Ciara does.


message 274: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Sophie323 wrote: "Is that better? I took out the illusion part because I realized that that’s pretty similar to what my other character, Ciara does."

That looks good now! She is approved! Sorry for the late response, I was making my own characters for the last 45 minutes HAHA


message 275: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod

Name: Cayenne "Cai" {pronounced as "Kai"} Forrest

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: (view spoiler)




Personality: Cayenne, in contrary to his name, is sweet and kind, and usually goes out of his way to help others. He is pretty shy, and doesn't really like to open up unless someone probes him to do so. He is not very vocal with strangers, but with people that he knows, Cayenne will be more comfortable and outspoken. He is also humble, and rarely brags about his powers to anyone, and hardly even uses it unless someone asks him to - in which case, he doesn't reject them because he would therefore feel bad. Cayenne only gets angry when he sees injustice, but even then he won't confront anyone directly, and will try his best to help sort the problems out.

God of: Spices

Power:

On the superficial level, Cayenne is able to discern spices, even mystical ones, and he would recognise a spice just from its smell.
On a more supernatural, powerful level, Cayenne is able to use spices for good, where he can come up with a concoction that can help others. On the negative, he can create a spice that would cause the person to feel pain and anguish. He has only used his once, which was a terrifying event. (view spoiler)

Pets:

Cayenne has a puppy called Pepper, which is ironic because of his name. He often gets laughed at for naming his dog Pepper, but he didn't mind as long as he could be happy with his puppy.

Trivia:

- Bisexual
- Twins with Sorrel
- Had a mortal restaurant with his sister, Sorrel
- Their puppies are twins as well



message 276: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Name: Sorrel "Rel" Forrest (view spoiler)

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Appearance: (view spoiler)




Personality:

Sorrel and her brother are definitely not two peas in a pod. She is simply oozing with confidence, and some people might even call her flirty. Sorrel knows this. She is confident of her own body, her powers, and her mentality. However, this is because she builds up a facade to protect her brother who has a shy and reserved nature. Sorrel is often the face of the twins, and often the one speaking for both of them because her brother doesn't speak that much to begin with. Sorrel is a fun, and optimistic person to hang around with, but she is a very difficult person to date. Despite her flirtatious nature, she sets her expectations high, and she doesn't just date anyone that comes along.

An important thing to note is that when someone bullies her brother, or makes her angry. She'll use all her power to create crazy herb concoctions that made the person wish that they had never triggered Sorrel to begin with.

Goddess of: Herbs

Power:

Similarly, on a superficial level, Sorrel is able to identify all forms of herbs, and determine which are better ones for specific ingredients and recipe.

On a more magical level, Sorrel's main usage for herbs are for healing, creating restorative kind of energy from her herbs. She has the ability to create destructive herb mixtures, and Sorrel has used it several times, especially on mortals who would ridicule her brother. (view spoiler)

Pets:

Sorrel has a puppy, the twin of Pepper, named Salt. Yes, their names are Salt and Pepper.

Trivia:

- Bisexual
- Twins with Cayenne
- Had a mortal restaurant with her brother, Cayenne.
- Their puppies are twins as well



message 277: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Ellipsis wrote: "OOOH the triplets?"

Twins!


message 278: by [deleted user] (new)

clairene ⍥ wrote: "Sophie323 wrote: "Is that better? I took out the illusion part because I realized that that’s pretty similar to what my other character, Ciara does."

That looks good now! She is approved! Sorry fo..."


Thank you!!! Also I love Sorrell and Cayenne! (And Scarlett’s Johansson XD)


message 279: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
You're welcome! and thank you too :) I was looking for celebrity twins :DD


message 280: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Are you... related to Almond_Milk by any chance?
And we already do have a Goddess of Healing , but they have left the group for reals, so I will allow this.

However, what do you mean by "with levitation" like floating and levitating someone could heal them?


message 281: by clairene ⍥ (last edited Jun 07, 2020 01:51PM) (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Oh, I see. Could you make that clear in your power description! thanks!

Afterwards, she will be approved, and I'll move Ken's character up for adoption later on.


message 282: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
sorry, could you also kind of change her name like maybe to Goddess of Recovery

or something along those lines? It's easier to distinguish on the character's list!


message 283: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
We're going to actually lock the group soon, for various reasons, so I don't think you'll have much of a chance to play your character.

Nonetheless, if you want comments, there's a Goddess of the Sky already, owned by Lunaria! Could you make her different? And uh since you're new, we have this whole pet peeve where the personality has to kind be longer, so yours needs to be elaborated on

The power is also too vague, what does she control of the sky? the sky is very big and broad ya


ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (detectingeagle310) | 1233 comments Katniss wrote: "Sorry Ray, for her appearance, I just realised the link doesnt work, can you replace it with this one pls??: https://www.pinterest.ie/pin/68370278..."

Done !


ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (detectingeagle310) | 1233 comments Katniss wrote: "Thx soo much Ray!! 😁😁😁"

Always happy to help a friend !


message 286: by clairene ⍥ (last edited Jun 12, 2020 11:17AM) (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
I think having the part of "touching you lightly and will burn you to ashes part" is a little extreme. Like, others are just going to disintegrate with a touch? It's too overpowered.

Her history is not clear too. So if her parents were mortal, then she just happened to be a Goddess with no realm or reason? And does she know that she had the ability?

The punctuation is also off for the paragraphs. There are different full stops everywhere, which should be commas instead! Please review it.

We can't see the photo of the phoenix as well!

As we will be locking the Create threads very, very soon, once you make the changes to Haley, and if we do accept it, Haley will be the last approved character before we lock this thread up.


message 287: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Sorry, @S, I don't know why this thread was locked before you made your changes, but could you make the edits?


message 288: by ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (last edited Jun 25, 2020 01:56AM) (new)

ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (detectingeagle310) | 1233 comments Name: Amelia Miracle

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://www.shutterstock.com/image-ph...
Same as the picture but with longer hair. She also has a tatoo on her arm that she doesn't show anyone. It is from a past she doesn't want to talk about.

Personality: She is friendly and is a person who would always support her friends and family. She would always help a person in need. Her reasoning skills are great and she is really good at deception. She is protective towards her friends and family and is always there for them. Anyone who dares to mess with them will have to suffer the consequences She can be really sensitive at times and may need someone who will listen to her problems and try to understand them. She can be really stubborn at times.

Goddess/God of: Darkness

Power: Umbrakenises and solidification of shadows

Pets: A wolf named Spirit


message 289: by ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (last edited Jun 28, 2020 11:51PM) (new)

ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (detectingeagle310) | 1233 comments Name: Jacob Evans

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance: https://www.pexels.com/photo/acoustic...

Personality: Protective and anyone who dares to mess with his friends will have to suffer the consequences, he is understanding and is someone you can share anything with, he is daring and loves challenges and breaking rules. He will always be there for you when you need him and wouldn't give you the cold shoulder.

Goddess/God of: Time

Power: He can slow down, speed up and stop time but not rewind it.

Pets: A cute dog named Snowflake

Name: Jane Williams

Age:16

Gender: Female

Appearance: https://images.app.goo.gl/eSV7z75y6w5...

Personality: Can be outgoing and likes making friends, she likes to show people where they stand if they try to go beyond their limits, she will protect friends and family with her life and sometimes wonders if she should have even been born/created. She is a person who might need support from her friends even though she doesn't let them know, she will try to prove herself and this sometimes results in problems

Goddess/God of: Hate

Power: She can create/remove hate from people though she prefers not to as tampering with people's emotions is not something she likes to do. She can increase negative emotions in people which can cloud their judgement.

Pets: None yet

Other: TBD


message 290: by ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (last edited Jun 13, 2020 11:28PM) (new)

ᏒᏋᎩ [Exam season :( (2 of 5 done)] (detectingeagle310) | 1233 comments Katniss'character

Name: Hayley Wilson
Age: 16
Birthday: 26 September
Gender: female
Appearance: https://www.pinterest.ie/pin/68370278...
Personality: shy, she laughs all the time, but only with people she knows,she is always happy deep inside, knowing there is a little place for her in this world. She was taught to fight back, so if I were you, I wouldn’t get into a fight with her. Hayley is very smart. She can burn you into ashes. Hayley can be very sensitive too, she doesn’t deal with change, it makes her stress a lot, and that makes her ultra sensitive! There is no point in arguing, according to her, she is the one that knows best.
Goddess/God of: flames
Power: makes flames when mad
Pets: none yet (but would love to have a phoenix: https://yt3.ggpht.com/-PWvDtn5_558/AA... )
Other/History: She has never really had friends and is desperate for some. Her parents abandoned her, they couldn’t afford having a kid because they were too poor. She was found in front of the orphanage, only left with a simple, but strange note in an envelope. She has lived in an orphanage all her life, the orphanage was very strict, and their food portion was very small. She was different from the other kids, she always felt left out. The people at the orphanage had shown her a note, the parents had given them when they abandoned her, it said “Beware, our daughter holds great power, and is not like other kids, please take good care of her”. They soon found out what it was, she was able to make you burn, she talked back, but she could literally burn you! At the age of 14, Hayley was put out for adoption because the orphanage was overloaded with kids, she was the oldest, and no one would take her. But a few months later, a loving couple was looking for a daughter. They immediately adopted Hayley, but of course, they had no idea of her powers. And as a teen, she could get pretty moody. On her 16 birthday, she got very upset that her “Dad” couldn’t make it. She started trashing the entire house, and accidently hurt her adoptive mother. Hayley was scared, she had killed her “mother” and her “Dad” was on the way home. At the sight of his dead wife. He kicked Hayley out of the house. She was a homeless kid, until she found the academy.


message 291: by clairene ⍥ (new)

clairene ⍥ | 964 comments Mod
Here's some things to think about, and edit. But honestly, I could just approve her, because I'm not going to be moderating this group after Haley's approval anymore, but those are just comments. So if you do join another group that demands more, then you should give some thought about the flaws of your character, why does a certain event occur etc, if not your character will either be overpowered, or flawless, and not many people enjoying roleplaying like that.

What you could work on:

Her power is still too great, she should not be able to burn someone to ashes. As in, she should not be able to do that AT ALL.

Also, why would her adoptive father just throw her out of the house if she had killed her adoptive mother. If you killed your mum, do you think your dad will just throw you out of the house? Nope, he'll probably be in shock, call the police etc. So that needs to be worked on too. But, what would make her so moody to the point that she would kill her adoptive mother, especially if the adoptive parents were described as "loving". Wouldn't Haley think twice before she "hurts" the mother, and essentially kills her?

Furthermore, for personality, what do you mean "no point in arguing with her"? Like, I think that would make her a character who would always just gets her way and that seems bratty to me, and she seems too perfect as well. What are her flaws?

I do like the fact that her power comes from rage though, and I really appreciate the effort that you put into her back story, it's just that I nitpick sometimes. I'll just go ahead and approve her so you don't need to think too hard about it for now.

Approved, and going on the list.


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