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The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight
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The Statistical Probability of Love at First Sight - Restarting February 9th 2016
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Reading from the 25th October 2015
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I'm not sure I like the writing. It's simple and everything but it's clumsy. And I've never liked third person in present tense; it just sounds wrong to me.
I also hate it when mom is used like a proper noun, especially in third person. Like, what's up with that? Maybe this book was designed to make me uncomfortable.


It's a common noun.
And I don't really have a problem with third person. But when it's combined with present tense, it bothers me. Also, I have yet to see any point of the third person since it's all from Hadley POV so far.


And I wouldn't call yourself commom. To your kids, you're as proper as it gets.

I like their conversations. They're fun and so are the characters. I like how the pace of the relationship is going. But then the conversations end and the narration is still the same (obviously). You'd think I'd have gotten used to it by now. It's starting to get annoying, the writing.


There are grammatical errors and it keeps jumping from past to present to past perfect to present again and I wanna scream.


On the bright side, I think I'm getting used to the writing in this book. It took over half the book for it to happen but, better late then never, right?

Just finished(view spoiler)

Here's my full review: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

It just proves we're an awesome team.
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