Looking for a CP for 100K YA Fantasy

[Maddie]

Hello!

My name is Maddie and I'm looking for critique partners. I have never critiqued before, but I am excited to learn. I'm looking for big-picture feedback on a finished 100K YA Fantasy. Here's the blurb:

In the Kingdom of Vasilica, three friends Night, Sky, and Dawn just want to escape their criminal pasts. But when a mysterious blackmailer threatens to reveal their secrets, they are forced to steal a cask of holy wine from a royal temple. Their attempted heist results in the death of the queen’s husband when the friends are caught in the act. The queen flees the scene, forcing Dawn to pursue her, and Night to take her place.

With the help of Sky’s court knowledge, Night assumes the role of the queen. But when Sky’s family arrives for the funeral, exposing his past, and Dawn fails to return in the allotted time, Night alone must face the return of the drakes that once ravaged the land. With the friends separated, they must fight to find each other and resolve the mess they have created before their identities are revealed.

I'm willing to read in any genre, although I know YA and fantasy best. If interested, message me or email me at maddikey7@gmail.com. I look forward to connecting!

[E.J]

fantasy novels tend to be longer, with all age range, and I think 55k -70k is a bit on the shorter side.

[Leah]

Hi Maddie,

I would love to swap stories with you. I am going to email you.

Regards,

Leah