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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

If your story has a plot hole, post it here so we can help you with it!


message 2: by Emi Rose (new)

Emi Rose (luvluvluv2read) what are plot holes?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

when you've got a magor problem or snag in your plot that you may have over looked before.


message 4: by Emi Rose (new)

Emi Rose (luvluvluv2read) i see, thanks!


message 5: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi what if we're just stuck?


message 6: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) Hm, what's your problem *fixes helper cap* Let's see if I can help.


message 7: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments LOL! ^^
Unfortunatly, I can't think of anything to write about and I won't be writing more of the Music Box until lesson 40 of OYAN....a long way away. *sigh*
I want to WRITE something!! (I do want to write more of the Muisc Box, but pease understand I DO NOT stop writing just because some guy tells me to..(Tell me if I'm making any sense.)...It's just that when I started writing the Music Box, I didn't have a FIRM PLOT. So..Well, if you are a OYAN memeber or are signing up/considering to sign up, you'll understand--....a firm plot is nessessery...)
Unfortunaly, I need something to write in the meantime!!


message 8: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) Uhm ... my thinking cap has failed ... I'm sorry! :(


message 9: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments =(


message 10: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi what is OYAN? I never have a plot at all when I start writing... I just put down whatever comes to mind, I have so many story beginnings. Whenever I remember a dream well enough to write it down I do, so that I don't forget it, and there are some pretty wild things I've got a page or two of, but stopped because I just couldn't write any more.
Sometimes it just doesn't feel like the story wants to be written yet, like it's telling you to wait till you have a better idea.


message 11: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments Yeah I know what you mean.


message 12: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Me too!!! OYAN is short for One Year Adventure Novel,it's a program where you get tutored on how to wrte a rela novel, and at the end of the school year you have one!! Here is the site:
http://oneyearnovel.com/


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments do you have to pay for that?


message 14: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments I think...I'll ask my mom. She'll know. ^^


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments OH. Then I probably won't do it...


message 16: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments But it's sooo goooooodddd....... =((((


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments But it's not worth it! I'm just a 6th grade girl with a bunch of voices inside her head and is trying to write a novel!!!


message 18: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Ok....Oh well...


message 19: by Kendall Anne (last edited Oct 01, 2009 02:12PM) (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments ....


message 20: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments HI!!!


message 21: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments HELLO!!!!


message 22: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) BONJOUR!!!

(french! XD)


message 23: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Coolio!


message 24: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments HOLA!!!

(Spanish! Lol)


message 25: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) Yeeeaah, we're cultured people!! *high five*


message 26: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments γεια σου!

GREEK!


message 28: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) That's so cool!!! How'd you do it??


message 30: by Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (last edited Oct 01, 2009 02:18PM) (new)

Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments μιλω ανγλικα και λιγο ελλινικα


message 31: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments Janeen-san wrote: "γεια σου!

GREEK!"


How in the WORLD do you say THAT?!?!?!?! Strange..


message 32: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Maria-G.Weasley/PersonWhoNeedsMentalHelpOhLookAFly wrote: "I SPEEK GREEK!!!!"

COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 33: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Really?


message 35: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) Coooooool!!


message 36: by Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (last edited Oct 01, 2009 02:19PM) (new)

Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments Kendall♥Huntress of Artemis♥Daughter of Athena wrote: " Janeen-san wrote: "γεια σου!

GREEK!"

How in the WORLD do you say THAT?!?!?!?! Strange.."


you say it: yasoo


message 37: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Maria-G.Weasley/PersonWhoNeedsMentalHelpOhLookAFly wrote: "Yep!"

Awesome!


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments η ηλικια μου ειναι ενδεκα


message 39: by Kendall Anne (last edited Oct 01, 2009 02:27PM) (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments Interesting...


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments Or, in english: I am eleven years old.


message 41: by Emma (new)

Emma (emmascout) haha


message 42: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) | 182 comments nice =D


message 43: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Cool!


message 44: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments I wish I knew another language!!


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments then get a couple books from the library and search some websites online and start learning!


message 46: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments Ok... ^^


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments Oh yah. You might want to choose a language first!


Maria [the clockwork creeps on useless lives] (mariachhile) | 38 comments seriously that's how I started then I connected with this guy online and we email each other and he helps me for free


message 49: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 647 comments coolio


message 50: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi i'm learning Japanese...
hello could be:
おはよ ごじいます ohayo gozaimasu
こにちわ konichiwa
こんばんわ konbanwa
they change depending on the time of day


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