Sci-fi story, by Mockingjay Rebel

[[deleted user]]

Welcome and I am really enjoying the beginning but make sure you include why the little girl would anything to be one. Make sure you make the setting fit the idea of alien life and include correct punctuation.😁

[Dalia, Curator & Co-Mod]

Maybe you could introduce the elements of the story more slowly than listing them right out of the bat. But maybe that’s just more my style of writing. Play with different things and have fun!