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>3> bet

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😂, of course I expect nothing less from you

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hA😋 it’s a natural thing

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(view spoiler)[ Idk something to do if the group gets started. A festival of Lights, happens every eclipse and the Keep of Night is open to the public, everyone can have an audience with the queen.

The call outs, a time where any noble can challenge anyone for the others position and titles.(This would be difficult to pull of in a group so probably not)

A Human invasion. the humans fear of the Awoken grows until the launch an attempt to drive the Awoken away. (Some knew locations, more role-playable humans)

Royal wedding?

Funeral of a beloved hero, the Awoken are in mourning for a week or two. (Uldren Sov, maybe the Queen) The character might not actually be dead but plot stuff. (hide spoiler)]

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The best thing I can currently think of is perhaps hold off on the Funeral and Invasion. Prehaps we could end up combining those ideas later on and have the humans invade and “kill” someone of importance.

Maybe there could be some sort of festival of a sorts? Or maybe the Queen allows a few selected humans to come and prove themselves worthy of some form of land. Maybe have the Queen choose one or two of the Head Of Houses to test the chosen humans?
(Considering how Uldren is too precious to have an “accident” he’d most likely have a handful of Crow’s escort the humans in and out of the land maybe? (hide spoiler)]

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Mhmm yeah that was mostly just brainstorming, bored af right now

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Ight

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So idk I kinda want my boy uldren to get "killed" but in reality he's just really banged up and isolated for years until someone finally finds him, but's he's gone a little mad. So he has to find himself again through all the shit he has been through. Might make it part of a plot development if this group gets enough people. (hide spoiler)]

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i'm just gonna pop in here and say that sounds awesome

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(view spoiler)[ Peachy you ight, I feel the exact same tbh

I like this idea tho,
I’m trying to figure out if I should make Swan somethin’ different. Maybe a runaway since the Mother Queen literally loathes her..
Or maybe just like-
Vengeance? (hide spoiler)]

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My mind said fuck it, I’m making my Paladin girl a lazy sadistic bitch with a fucked up pasttt ehe (hide spoiler)]

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yeah thought it might make for an interesting character arc

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(view spoiler)[ Fr tho- I’m getting my gears going by thinking about what type of scenario we’d put this man in to get in that state (hide spoiler)]

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(view spoiler)[ you know the invasion plot device I mentioned earlier, I was thinking that he lead the defense, "died a hero" and all that. In reality he get's shot down on some random nearby planet where he barely manages to survive. Little bits get back to the Awoken hinting that he's alive. While he's stranded he's captured by either a rival house or something like that. Tortured and all that, and when he's finally rescued he's a shell of his former self, hardly even remembering those he once called friends. So the Queen and her advisers don't want the people to see their prince, so they hide him away letting most believe him dead, as he struggles to claw his way back to sanity.

Those are my thoughts as of right now, if ya got any ideas i could always use a secound opinion (hide spoiler)]

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(view spoiler)[ Okay as a person who loves to torture her characters and stuff- I LOVE THIS IDEA
But bro, are you good? Or are you just having a creative spree? (hide spoiler)]

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lmao yeah I'm good

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ight, just making sure XD

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Ight so I got a few ideas here

Mission 531: Return The Crow To His Nest.
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Sooo, I’m currently forming a character who wasn’t born into the tribes, but more so of given? Basically the person who had her was forced to give her to them- or let them do whatever with her at the time of her being barely an infant- and the scout who took her in had taken pity yada yada

So, I was thinking that she could be in this, sort’ve Black Ops until for the three Tribes. Their mission of course is to make sure The Crow remains safe. Buttt- when they catch wind of a mole from another kingdom who is trying to probe the Prince’s memories for the location of the Tribes and such- my girl Venja here and whoever comes from the tribes gets in the way- and fails somewhat-
Last resort, a memory wipe. In a desperate moment Ven and those who have not been kilt/injured takes his unconscious self away from everything. The forests, the kingdoms, everything. Eventually, the small squad of people they started off with dies out one by one until it’s just Venja and one or two others. Then he wakes up to find himself with no recollection of what the hell is going on, where he is, and barely knows his own name

Here comes the part with regaining memories, reflex’s, etc. Their mission has changed. They have been given the orders of the following things: Protect. Reteach. Keep a low profile, and make sure that the Prince lives. Even if it means a self-sacrifice.

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So, The whole thing with the Kell of Silence and the assassination of the once-King. Names are thrown until it’s between Swan and Nevalan (royal advisor yada). He gets caught up between the two’s fight, which involves some sort of death match in a court room- gets blasted by this super weapon.

Wakes up alone. Unsure. Yada. In an uncharted place. Unable to contact a soul. He has some memory of certain figures.
That changes when he comes across the remains of a small aircraft. There isn’t a ‘corpse’ in there, but a few meters away. They had dragged themselves away from it.
There was a a few things in their hands, and surrounding them. His daggers. An old-fashioned hand recorder and a handheld camera (Let’s say they have endless power) and a handful of half-used, unused, and slightly damaged memory chips.
He finds a place to watch them.

It just shows the glitching, horrible-quality perspective of someone having surgery. Panicked face were around the person he was seeing through, people who he barely recognizes come in every now and then.

Turns out he isn’t in the middle of nowhere, but in a coma. What he’s seeing in those videos, is what’s going on in the real world.
On the hand recorder, he starts making these half-assed daily logs. Sometimes when he goes back to listen, he can hear someone saying the same thing
“Wake up.”

Eventually, after sticking around the aircraft for a week, he’s about to leave when the ‘corpse’ moves. Asks him if he’s alright. That everyone’s worried. And to “wake up”

More will be added

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Okay so love both ideas but I got some questions

In "Return The Crow to it's Nest"

Would "Uldren" be the one whose memory was wiped?

If so I'm kinda iffy on that one, just because I can't really see him allowing himself to get his memory wiped in the first place. Even if his sister ordered he'd probably just disappear for a decade or two to prevent anyone from messing with his memory.


I like the idea of the fact that he's in a coma, and he's stuck in a hellscape sorta place. Also the whole thing where Swan and Nevalan accidentally injure him while he's trying to stop the two of them.

Though I'm not sure either of the scenarios is quite going to push him to the point where I think his arrogant ass needs to get to come back a changed man.

Though, I'm thinking he at least needs everyone to believe he's dead for a good year or two. So maybe when Swanonal and Nevalan get in their fight, he intervenes and their fight ends up somehow destroying the throne room or something like that. His body isn't found and Nevalan supporters maybe kidnapped him because he got super injured in the fight. He goes through hell with them but finally manages to escape. "Broken man, shelf of hid former self, ect." A scout finds him and brings him back to the capital but his sister is like we can't have him messing up the royal image so tells your girl Venja to get him the hell away from the Dreaming City and to make sure he keeps a low profile.

They get attacked as their leaving and then your story continues from here.

"a desperate moment Ven and those who have not been kilt/injured takes his unconscious self away from everything. The forests, the kingdoms, everything. Eventually, the small squad of people they started off with dies out one by one until it’s just Venja and one or two others. Then he wakes up to find himself with no recollection of what the hell is going on, where he is, and barely knows his own name

Here comes the part with regaining memories, reflex’s, etc. Their mission has changed. They have been given the orders of the following things: Protect. Reteach. Keep a low profile, and make sure that the Prince lives. Even if it means a self-sacrifice." (hide spoiler)]

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Yaa he would be the mem whiped one- and it wouldn’t really be a choice but more so of forced-

But yea I think I like this idea (hide spoiler)]

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_ wrote: " Peachy you ight, I feel the exact same tbh

I like this idea tho,
I’m trying to figure out if I should make Swan somethin’ different. Maybe a runaway since the Mother Queen literally loathes her....."

Just saw this, sorry. so what exactly is all the stuff going on with Swan and the Queen Mother? I'm assuming the Queen Mother is just super pissed bc she thinks Swan killed the old king

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Yeah basically- and it’s also because Swan Kind’ve DIDNT say a thing- but mainly due to the fact she physically could not due to the recent stitches and coals

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mk