Need a beta read

[Edward]

Hello everyone.
My name is Suren hakobyan. I'm the author of the book Edge of End.
I need some good people to help me and read my new romance novel called Touching the Freedom. It hasn't published yet. I'd like to have some opinions and if anybody is interested in reading and helping me, please, let me know.

Isabel is 22. She lives in Spain. Always doing her father's will, this summer she takes the opportunity to leave for Munich and take a part in Youth International Meeting for two weeks which a lot of young people visit every year from different countries.
David is 26. He lives in England. Coming across the Youth International Meeting website on the internet, David visits the same guesthouse as Isabel does. Not for having fun, he has a bigger purpose - an unfinished job which has been torturing him last two years. He has to finish what has started two years ago - here - in Munich.
From The first sight of him Isabel felt instant attraction to this man, but it isn't going to be easy. David is not talkative, prefers loneliness and he seems not to belong here. Why he has come here? What does he seek? She feels he's being suffering inwardly, a secret lies behind those dark and attractive eyes of him.
None of them expect the powerful feeling that grows between them and its invisible tentacles wrap tightly around those two. But how long is that feeling going to survive?

[Biswanath]

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