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The Countess + Max
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Cheers to doubles. I like it. So it's basic chaos, right? the government officers are savages, the people are poor, living on little. And then this rebellious group working undercover is planning a coup and they want to free the people but there are people who don't want that to happen and others just want power. Is that a good build up?
No problem. I'm about to go on mine as well. haha.
Eh...heh...you mean putting up the characters? Are we doing them simple or detailed. I like simple.
Name: Aiden PierceAge: 18 years
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Homosexual
Appearance:
Name: Ivy Sanders
Age: 16 years
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Appearance:
[[Oh hey, I forgot to tell you that i'll be away for a month but I'd try to post as often as possible.]]You can start wherever and however you want, I'll pick up and follow. I like the snippet already.
AidenI keep my head down. Most of the time, they don’t notice me. It’s when I have her with me. When I’m holding her hand; her small little hand in mine I can feel her shivering. She doesn’t understand our world. She’s too young to remember what happened. I wouldn’t want her to remember anyway. Even when everything was happening, I was young as well and can hardly remember but I can remember agony. I can remember pain and feeling worthless. There was a lot of suffering. But there are those willing to fight back. I am not one of them.
I look at her. My little sister; eight and toothless and cute as ever. “Hey, almost ready?” I ask her. A walk through town, a town lost to the breakers of our world but a walk all the same. She needs it. She needs to begin to learn the world that she lives in.
Ivy
I look at the ground. I count my Missisipis. It seems like a task for a child but I was a child when everything made sense. Now, I use my Missisipis as a way to make my world make sense even though it barely does. I count nothing. Maybe I count the possibilities that the world may be destroyed further from where it already is. Maybe I count the minutes and seconds before I see him, my best friend, Jamie Devolc. We train separately but with or without him, he makes me strong. He makes me want to fight even though the fear consumes me. I pretend to be unbreakable and for the most part, I feel he believes in my strength. My strength comes from him thought. I look up at the ID sign in station and see him. I smile. Whenever I see him, I smile because he makes me strong.
[[you have a strange writing style but I kinda like it. Haha. I’m not back yet but I have WiFi at the moment, so hey. Haha.]]
AidenShe smiles at me with a toothless smile and nods. As usual, I take her hand and we walk out of the door. I don’t wear my hood, I don’t cover up today. I’m one of the rejected, one of those who couldn’t join the camp or wouldn’t join it. I have mixed race in my blood. Some believe we are not good enough, even after centuries of fighting for equality once the world began to crumble, some reverted back to their old ways. I do not mind being excluded. I can remain and take care of her.
“Are we going to cross the Camp today? Why don’t we ever go in?” I want to explain to her our differences. She cannot tell that we are only half of each other. She cannot tell that we are different. All she sees is me as her big brother and I love her for it. I consider her questions. Sometimes we can visit, see the trainees. Maybe today will be the day.
Ivy:
I land with a thud onto the ground. I feel the pain and I hear my trainer call for me to get up but my eyes are closed and my heart is not in it, not even a little bit. My opponent is probably standing over me now as she has stood multiple times; fists out and ready to pounce. I groan and then I think of him. I love him because he is my best friend. He is the only person I believe can save me that is why when he pops into my brain, I get to my feet and punch the girl’s lights out. Meal time. I have to see him to remind myself that I’m strong.
Aiden I press my lips together and give in to her cajoling. I can’t help it. “We’ll go and watch them.” I say to her and receive another one of those toothless smiles. I walk up to the visitor’s office and register my name and hers. Before he sees our last name, the guard has already flashed me seven different dirty looks that she doesn’t see but I do. He realises she could be my sister or my daughter and he attempts a smile before he lets us in. I feel a nervous tinge go through me. Someone is watching me and I don’t know who. I can feel the eyes and they fill me with despair. I look around but do not see anyone. I turn to her. “Lead the way princess.”
Ivy
I lift my head when I hear his voice, my lips spreading into a wide smile. “Jamie. Hey,” I say. I resist not jumping into his arms. Fraternization is not allowed during the work hours. Not that I want to fraternise with him, it’s just that the guards would probably view it as that. I only consider him a friend, which other friends mock me for but it’s the truth. “How was the morning training? Hanna’s kicking my arse today,” I say attempting to sound like I find it easy to have my arse kicked but the reality is much more depressing. I am sad to fail, especially when I have to admit my failure to him.
So, I just wanted to ask for the last time if you were done with this.
yay! excited.