Once upon a time & Sarbi

[Sarbi]

Well here it is. :) So you said you had some ideas...?

[onceuponatimeareview]

(view spoiler)[So I had this really good idea that popped into my head after listening to Cop Car by Keith Urban.

Girl A is a good girl. She gets good grades. Guy A is a bad boy. He commits a crime and kidnaped Girl A. They are in the run. One night the cops find them. She denies everything the cops says. The cops believe her and let them both go. She doesn't see Guy A anymore. He left her. She was broken hearted. Until one day they go on vacation. She sees him. Then he commits a bigger crime that effects them both. Will she turn him in?


I would like to be the girl.
Someone who can play a bad boy would be nice.
Detail I want someone who make become more detail. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[I have this idea about this girl who lost her memory and she goes back to her old life a year afterwards and still doesn't have her memory so she goes to school and no one talks to her. Her boyfriend sees her and wants to know what she knows. She doesn't like him. When she needs someone.Will she except the help? Will she get her memories back. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[You know of the story of Red Riding Hood. Wrong. Little Red Riding Hood has goes to grandmas house. Like the normal story. The big bad wolf turns out to be a werewolf who tries killing them. The axe man is a werewolf hunter in disguise. He kills the werewolf. He must of not a done a good job. Some years later.The werewolf is the new student at a high school. Red Riding Hood is now this a regular girl in school. She isn't cool,but has two best friends. They do everything together. She thinks the new kid is a stuck up jerk. He is,but he is drawn to Red. He doesn't know why. He forgot the scent of the little girl. They fall in love and he tells her what he is. She doesn't believe,but she does. She ran away from him because he tired killing her. Sometime later she excepts it. She wants to be turned to live with him forever. The hunter comes back ready finish the job he started. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[All anyone wants is to be normal. Double goes for Girl A. She wants to fit in. That will never happen. She is a vampire. She stays keeps it low at school. Correction she is a Vampire Princess. She is being forced to marry another vampire who she doesn't even know. Guy A is the new kid at school. He is a jock. He fits right in with everybody else. Except he made one mistake. He decide to sit at the lunch table make friends with Girl A. She doesn't trust him at all. Then she realizes she likes him. He likes hurt. One day on a hiking trip a vampire hunter shoots and misses hitting him. She fights with herself to change him. She didn't want to lose him. Now he is a vampire. What she did was forbidden. Now they have to keep it a secret. With hunters and rules. Will they be able to stay together. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[This is one is based off of 50 Shades of Grey the characters are well at least some of them are. No we wouldn't do any hard core romance. I will explain more of it to you.

Six years ago Lillian Kylee Grey went missing more so she ran away. She left everything and started over some place else. No one knows why she left. She left her past behind her and thats where she wants everything to stay in the past where it belongs. Until one day her past collides with her future. How can she keep everything to herself when she meets the one person who she always falls in love with all over again. Then one day her secret is out about who she is. Will the one person who she loves stay beside her or leave her because of who she is? (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[The year is 3024 and the world is rule by a new species called the Perfects. The Perfects are and alien/human hybrid. Each perfect has a special ability and talent that use. Humans are extinct. Or that's what they think. Humans have to hide because they can't fit in with the Perfects. Most humans are barley living.

Each Perfect is driected if they find a human they have to bring to the Dome where they would be transformed. One day the bad boy popular Perfect went stumble across a human girl on the run for life. He takes her to the Dome. The human girl gets transformed. Little did he know about the corrupt ways of the government until he is made to take care of the girl until she adjusts to her new life.

The government secerts he finds out.
She's confused and has no memory on what happened but she is a danger to the public with her ablitlies that no one has.
Can they stop the government before it's to late? (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[Okay so I have this idea that I want to write a more about on my own. So I need someone to help spark ideas on how to write it this idea.

Its August 7th 1888 when the famous killings of Jack the Ripper began. No one knows who he is or why he is doing it. Girl A is young and naive even when the killings start. In the Whitechapel District there is a new guy in town. No one knows anything about Guy A. Guy A is demon. Guy is also Jack the Ripper. When Girl finds Guy A can she resist him. Can she believe he has a good heart? Or will she be his next victim?

I want to be Girl A
I need someone who can play that mysterious bad boy
I want someone detail
Remember I can only be detail if the other person tries to be or I won't get my brain juice working. (hide spoiler)]
(view spoiler)[I'm suppose to be evil. Don't you see?

Girl A is a witch princess who was born into a powerful bloodline. Everything points to her being evil. She is very confuse on what to do. She wants to be good. She hates the dark powers growing inside of her everyday. She fights it off but the pain becomes unbearable. What is evil anyways? Until one day she meet Guy A. Well you see Guy A is evil dark and mysterious. He kidnapps Girl A to be his queen. Guy A teaches her to let the go of the darkness inside her. He teaches her how to be evil. Will Girl A relaize that she needs to stop running from her destiny and trying to be something she not? Or will she fight it?


I know this is a killer here I really would love to be Girl A.
Another thing is I'm trying to become more detail so I would love someone who can push me to be detail.
Also someone who is active I understand people have life's outside of goodreads.
Anyone? (hide spoiler)]

(view spoiler)[Girl A lives in a kingdom that is having an on going wars for her whole life. The most recent of such is the Dragons. The dragons by far are the most terrifying creatures in this kingdom. Guy A is a dragon. Of course are dragons can transform into humans. Girl A is out to prove that girls can do anything guys can do. She has her mind on killing a dragon. During this hunt things don't go as plan at all. In the end Guy A rescues Girl A. Guy A senses something about Girl A, but can't put his finger to it.

Guy B is Girl A's twin brother. He is always in trouble. He hates following rules. He is also is very protective over his sister. Well Guy B is dating a Girl B who happens to be a Rebel who lures Guy B into this. Guy B doesn't mind because he knows his parents are wrong and corrupt about everything.

Basically this whole group of people go on a journey together eventually to bring peace to all the kingdoms. Along the way Girl A and Guy A fall for each other but it takes time. Guy B doesn't like Guy A. Guy A would do anything to get Girl A. Even if that includes flirting with Girl B or other girls along the way. Everything will be end up being tested in the end. Will they succeed?


Requirements

I want to be Girl A and Guy B

I want this to be detail super detail

I understand people have life. Just post at least once day.

I know this sounds confusing but I feel once we get Roleplaying it everything will go good (hide spoiler)]

[Sarbi]

Oh god! I`m stuck between three; the red riding Hood one, Jack the Ripper and the "evil" witch one.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Thanks we could always combine one of them together my favorite is the Jack the Ripper one cause I never got to really try it out same with the others one. I gtg but I'll be back soon.

[Sarbi]

Okay we can see that, I`ve got an idea on how to mix some. Okay!

[onceuponatimeareview]

I'm back. Whats your idea?

[Sarbi]

Sorry about that! Well I had in mind that after some time of eventually knowing each other Jack could try and "corrupt" her I guess you could say, like try and get her to join him or something like that. Twisting the witch thing a bit into the plot.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay I like that.:) Now I love doing doubles but I really want to be the girl in this one if thats okay.

[Sarbi]

Yeah that`s fine, I like his story so I don`t think it`ll be a problem. Mysterious and sort of evil right? :) Want to make charries?

[onceuponatimeareview]

Yeah that's it. Sure how detail I like doing simple because I can learn my character as I go along but I can go to detail ones as well.

[Sarbi]

Me too it`s gives more diversity, a simple one. Name, appearance, age.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Yep thats good for me

Name: Callie
Age: 17
Appearance:

[Sarbi]

Name: Kyle

Age: 20

Appearance:

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay so who shall go first?

[Sarbi]

Mind if you go first, just so I can get a feel of the story. :)

[onceuponatimeareview]

Sure it may take me awhile because I'm tackling a few things. By the way how detail do you want this to be? And any ideas on how to start this off?

[Sarbi]

Sure no problem. Well I can make it detailed I mean maybe not exaggeratedly long all the time but at least 2 or 3 passable paragraphs. Also depends on the story.

Mmmm maybe when the killings first start and she see`s him after one but doesn`t suspect and then it gets more intense and she is constantly warned or something like that.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Okay sure can do.

Okay I think that will work there.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Callie stood in the dark street with only the light from the street lights being able to guide her everywhere. She didn't like being out in night because it was nerve racking being the only one walking up and down the dark streets. She grew used to it because she had to do it to get from her job to her house. Late hours and busy days made her tired all the time. Loud noises interrupted her thoughts. As the sounds grew louder her feet starting walking faster than before.

Loud thumping noises came from inside her heart. Thump,Thump She jumped back walking slowly not wanting to walk up on anything scary or anything that could kill her knowing that it could be anything. She knew that she was the only person in the streets. No one else was here in the empty streets.

A loud shirlling scream came from an alley way. She started to run quicker as she came to the place and stopped by and turned her head. Her feet stopped. She closed her eyes in the fear of what that could be there. she opened her eyes in the worse possible thing is could be was a dead person.

((Sorry it's so short))

[Sarbi]

((No problem))

Kyle had left early in the night to begin with his "nocturnal activities", dressed in nothing but black he looked like death itself. Having the satisfaction of yet another young women he took small souvenir. Walking along the dark empty streets he cleaned his finger of the crimson blood, small electrifying shiver still coursing through him as he left the body in the alley in all it`s gruesome glory.

Seeing a small girl get close to it made him smirk as he very quietly approached at first intending to make her his next victim. But he had a thing with toying with them first so he tapped her back hoping for a scream, the first dose of a new prey. "Excuse me but what is a Young women like yourself doing out so late. Don`t you know there`s a killer amoung us?" His face was twisted to looked concerned his handsome features looking down into her face.

How lucky that`d he`d rid himself of most of the visible blood! His cape hiding any casualties as well as the sharpe blade he liked to use, humans were so fragile it was practically like stealing Andy from a kid, which in a sense he did do taking something else entirely.

[onceuponatimeareview]

Callie look at him scared as she let a small scream out. He had something to do with it she knew that. "I was making my way back home." She said. She didn't like him. "I think I need to get home now." She whispered softly some. She didn't like this feeling that she felt coming from him like he was caring death with him. He was dark and mysterious to her and that gave her the creeps but at the same time she was curious about him and what he does and why he is out there. "I could ask you the same thing what are you doing out here when there is a killer?" She asked. "Some might point the finger to you as the killer." She said.

Her heart wasn't pounding like it was before. She knew she should run but something was pulling her in. She looked up at him creeped out some. "I'm going to get home now." She said walking away slowly not wanting to make it seem that she was afraid of him. She wasn't though something was off about him though. She wanted to stick with him but at the same time she knew it was wrong to do that.