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message 1: by Brenda, Aussie Authors Queen (new)

Brenda | 80323 comments Mod
It turned out that the dead man was from Glenelg - what a tragedy it was...


message 2: by Sally906 (new)

Sally906 | 91 comments She was trying to shoo away the seagulls from the package of fish and chips that the dead man was clutching.

Or was it fish and chips? I looked closer at the package and saw....


message 3: by Leonie (new)

Leonie (leonierogers) | 3571 comments that it was fish, but not chips. Three golden discs of potato scallop tumbled from the broken packaging as a particularly aggressive seagull tugged at it.


message 4: by Sally906 (new)

Sally906 | 91 comments Suddenly the potato scallop exploded into a cloud of golden smoke.

"get back" I yelled " gat away from the cloud - it's a chemical - look at the gulls."

The gulls were all lying in the sand - not dead - sleeping.

The police and ambulance people came running down the beach as the crowd backed away from the dispersing gas and the sleeping gulls.


message 5: by Paul (new)

Paul (pbuzz) | 101 comments Stepping back, I was fortunate to not be affected by the gas and was content to silently watch on as the police commenced their investigations.


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