Beta Reader Needed With US Security/Pentagon/Military Interest or Experience

[Laura]

My book Mages Unbound is an epic/urban fantasy that follows a family as the world is about to descend into a global war (the Fifth Mage War). Decisions made by family members will prove pivotal to the outcome of the war. About 20% of this book involves the US Joint Command & National Security Council. While this is fantasy, so it doesn't have to be 100% true-to-life, I do want the aspects of it that I set in the "real world" to ring true. If you're interested in beta-reading the whole thing -- FABULOUS, that's awesome. If you have some experience/knowledge of the Pentagon/Joint Chiefs/US Security stuff -- even if it comes from your passionate love of Tom Clancy novels, I'd love to have you beta read just those chapters (or the whole thing -- whatever you like). The whole manuscript is 125,000 words (I told you it was epic ;) I'm happy to swap critiques if your writing style is a fit for me. I'm pretty eclectic, but shy away from thrillers & really gory stuff.

[Matt]

I have 25 years of military (Navy) experience and five years at the Pentagon. I’m happy to beta read your epic. I have a military thriller 85,000 words to exchange. :)

You can email me directly: mattphillips@msn.com

[Dwayne, Head of Lettuce]

Suggestion for Matt and anyone else that replies: Contact Laura via PM instead of posting your email. This is a public forum and you're inviting spam bots to your door. Thanks.