Beta Reader/Editing wanted for YA Sci Fi Book

[Kaleb]

Hi, I just finished a young adult science fiction novel, and I'd love for you to take a look at it! It's the first in a trilogy. It's about a girl who has the power to destroy things, but she can't control it. After harming many of the people she loves, she is found by a secret society of people who have the same power, but have learned to control it. What she doesn't know is that the only way to do this is to give up the majority of your sanity. I'm looking for someone to go through it and critique mainly the story (identify plot holes, circumstances that are too coincidental, etc.), though any other comments that you have regarding the writing itself would also be greatly appreciated.