Experienced and affordable YA and New Adult beta reader

[Michelle]

My name is Michelle. I studied journalism and creative writing at Minnesota State University, Mankato. I self-published a young adult novel called Shattered. I am also a blogger. I have articles published on the Reach for Resources blog and in the Hopkins History Society Newsletter.

I love reading, writing and editing in my free time. I have helped many authors with betta reading their novels and would love to help more authors.

I charge $20 for a betta read. My feedback will include inconsistencies, character development, scenery, what works well or could be removed, conflict, pace, ending and anything you feel I should pay attention to. I would get back to you with my feedback in 5-7 days. I am open to young adult, new adult and erotica.

If you are interested in my services, you can email me at tinkerbellsapphire@yahoo.com

[Ackash]

Hey, y'all! I'm currently look for beta readers for two manuscripts that I've been working on. (you can choose 1 or both) I'm look for opinions about the overall vibe and theme of the book as well as some general critique from the beta reader.

To make it simple, both these manuscripts are connected but not connected. They are unrelated in the small picture, but the universe has other plans for these main characters. The themes of the manuscripts are similar (zodiac signs, acceptance, challenges) but also different (one has racism whereas one has neglect of native culture) as well. So, with there being 12 signs, there will be 12 different protagonists with different backgrounds, skin colours, body types and many more.

Savannah is a 20+ African American with an average build, a tendency to not let change taking her and a heritage she doesn't understand. Yannathan is a 30+ Aboriginal Australian with a climber's body, a need for a journey and feelings he doesn't understand.

the manuscripts both have elements of fantasy (superpowers) and there are some warnings (trauma, alcohol is mentioned, fighting, sex is mentioned) for both scripts. though some only apply for one of them.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/2014110... (this is a link for TAURUS- the first 3 chapters of it, at least)

If anybody is interested in these scripts, do DM me on my instagram mentioned in my bio or message me on here. (comments are cool too :))