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message 51: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex followed her back in the garage and into the car without an word or complaint and he blankly stared out the window until they had got to the bar and he waited a couple of hours with her for her date arrive but he sighed when he saw that Ruby's date wasn't going to come and he watched her as she walked to the bar and started to drink. He watched as she got drunk and he thought about just leaving her alone as she walked to the dance floor swaying on her feet but then he remembered what Ruby told him if she got drink so he walked after her and when he got to her he said "I got to take you back like you said." then he gently grabbed chef by her shoulders and began leading her to where the front door was at and to where her car was parked at


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby couldn't really walk well on her feet. She kept swaying back and forth. "Can you carry me?" She slurred a little bit. She can't believe her date ditched her. "Can't I have one more?" She asked. She looked up at him. "I'm upset no one ditches me." She said. She was more upset then mad. She didn't want to leave. "Come on I can handle some more. I'm not drunk." That is what she did wash her feelings away or block them from coming out. She didn't like what she become but who was she? She couldn't answer it after all these years.


message 53: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex sighed silently as they walked out the door then he picked her up bridal style again and he muttered "Everyone gets upset when their date ditches them and no you can't. You can drink my blood if you want but no more beers or shots for today." and he shook his head at her last two questions as they got closer to the car. He actually didn't care at the moment if she bite him mostly due to the fact that he was going to have to get use to her biting him and drinking his blood.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't want his blood she wanted more drinks. She nodded her head. "I don't know your name?" She said. She looked at him some. "Its not fair that you know mine, but I don't know yours." Her words were slurred together. She didn't reply to the blood. "No one ditches me I ditch them." She said. "Its not my fault I'm this way." She said. She laid her head on his chest. "It was his fault sire's he made me this way." She said. "I don't know who I really am anymore." She muttered. "I'm drunk don't listen to what I say its probably not true." She didn't realize she was rambling.


message 55: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't reply to her first comment as he got to the car and he listened to what she said when he felt her hand on his chest but he didn't say anything but ignored the feeling as he muttered "I'm sure no one wants to be a vampire unless they volunteer to be one." as he opened the passenger door and gently say her down in the seat then he buckled her in and he was about to close the door when he said "Alex. That's my name." before he closed the door and walked over to the drives door, opening it the. Getting in before he closed it and started the car, driving off back to Ruby's house. He wouldn't be driving her car if she wasn't drunk but seeing that she was, he didn't want her to accidentally get them into a car crash or get pulled over so he decided to drive but only that one time.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments "Thats a nice name." She said. She looked up at him a little as he started to drive away. "I was 17 my parents died during the vampire invasion." She whispered. "I was young and didn't know what life was barley what wrong or right is. I loved cars and wanted to be a mechanic. I was smart and sweet." She whispered a little bit. "Now I'm here and this is my life is too late to change that's what my sire told me. He was always right." She said. She didn't say anything else. She would forget this happened in the morning. She was spilling everything. Thats what she did when she was drunk. "He got me in this life style I didn't have much of choice. I even got into a really good college that night everything change I don't remember much about me being that girl I was." She said. "It doesn't matter anyways everyone likes me this way."


message 57: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't reply as he kept his gaze on the road in front of them as he drove to her house though he listened to what she said then after a while he muttered in reply "You don't know that. Maybe the people who would are like that but you can't really speak for everyone else." as he slowly stopped in front of Ruby's house and he parked on the side of the house before he turned off the car and unbuckled his belt, opening the door and getting out. He shut the door behind him as he walked to Ruby's side then he opened her door and did the same thing before closing the door and walked to the front door of her house, carrying ruby in his arms and once he got to the door he opened it and walked inside closing the door behind him


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((gtg I will be back in a couple hours I will reply then))


message 59: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Okay)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby snuggled into him. "How would you know if they didn't like me?" She asked softly. She wasn't yelling or angry but more curious. She listen to his heart beat some. "I wish I could have a heart beat but I don't anymore." She whispered. She was shaking a little bit. "Everyone likes my job in life is to please people thats what sire said." In reality she was just a scared girl who didn't know what else to do. Her eyes slowly begin to close. "Goodnight Alex." She whispered as she fell asleep slowly. She looked peaceful as she slept.


message 61: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex didn't reply as he walked past the living room towards the base of the stairs and he walked up the stair case then he headed towards her bedroom door even though he never been to her room. Once he got to the door he opened it and walked into her room. He walked over to her bed and laid her down pulling the covers over her then he murmured "Goodnight Ruby." before walking out the door and into his room.

(Time skip?)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((sure))

Ruby snuggled into the bed. Her eye opened next in the morning. She was had an awful headache and was in a bad mood. She open her door and then barged into his room and looked at him. "Wake up time for my breakfast." She snapped. She looked at him. "I'm being serious." She said. She was dressed in last nights clothes. She was upset and angry and didn't want to be around. She didn't really remember much of her conversation with him at all.


message 63: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex had been asleep with just his shorts on and his shirt off, snoring softly and looking peaceful until she barged into the room and his eyes snapped open as he shot sitting up and looking around with an panicked look in his eyes when he remove red where he was at and grumbled "Morning to you too." as he got up and walked forward until he was infront of her with his neck exposed so she could bite him.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She smiled some when he came as commanded. She looked up at him and pushed him on the his bed. She sat on his lap. She soon started to kiss him on the neck before she bit him. She then licked the wholes closed with her tounge She then pushed him back and started kiss him gently. "Don't resit it I know you love it." She whispered softly. She closed the gap in between them by pushing her body against him.


message 65: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex grunted slightly when she pushed him backwards on the bed and he looked at her but didn't move or say anything once she bite him and he waited until she was done when he got pushed all the way back and an second later he felt her kiss him and after resisting for a few minutes he softly kissed her back as he saw that he wasn't going to win and he was still half asleep with his mind working slowly at the moment


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby smiled against his lips as he kissed her back. "My sire used to do this to me. You will grow to please to me." She said. She looked at him a little bit. "Don't worry you will understand the rules soon." She said. She went back kissing him slowly and softly. She then backed away. "What do you think of me?" She asked.


message 67: by Carlos (last edited Nov 12, 2014 02:57PM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "He was one dirty sire." Alex mumbled as he listened to what she was saying and he kissed her back until she stopped then he replied "I think your stubborn, an pain in the neck literally whenever you bite me, quick thinking and beautiful in an scary way but you also confuse me at times." as he looked back at her. It was true that when he was with her she confused him.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby looked at him confused. "What makes him so dirty?" She asked softly. "You don't have anything mean to say about me?" She asked. She backed away. "I know I'm a sorry excuse for a person." She whispered. "Alex do you think there is real love out there?" She asked. She backed away from him.


message 69: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex shook his head and he said "No I don't have anything mean to say. You didn't ask to be something besides human." then he sat up as she backed away from him and he looked at her with dark chocolate brown eyes that looked sad as he didn't answer her question for a few minutes then he replied "Yes, I think there is such a thing as real love." though he was slow to answer but only because he couldn't guess what her reaction would be as well as not knowing if she would just suddenly get mad at him or yell at him.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head a little. "Well I hope you find that love its too late for me." She whispered. "Its too late for me to change or be anything other than I am." She said. She looked down a little. "Alex how do you know if love is real?" She asked. "I should go I have a date to go on tonight and a car to fix. You will do the same thing as you did last night." She said and walked up to her room. She sat down on her bed and stared emotionless. She knew her place and her place was this. That was what she was taught. Could her sire be wrong about what she is suppose to do?


message 71: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I think I already have." Alex murmured as he looked back at her but then he grew sad when she resumed talking and he said "Ruby." when she turned around and walked away and he was tempted to go after her but before he could take a step something made him stop and he stayed where he was at as he looked at the open door then he took an step back and sat down on the bed, hiding his face in his hands as he sighed and he whispered "I love you Ruby." He was sure he was positive about him loving ruby and nothing was going to change that even he died.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Tears slowly came down her eyes. She was lost and broken. She let the tears come down her face. She will never be able to have a normal life. Ruby wiped her eyes dry. She needed someone to comfort her. She wanted to change but she thought she was too late. She got up slowly and walked to Alex's room. "Alex people like me right?" She asked softly. "I mean you like this me the girl who party all the time." She said. She looked up at him waiting for an answer.


message 73: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex stayed sitting on his bed with his face in his hands as he was close to the verge of tears though crying wasn't something that he had done for a long time now bit when he heard someone walk into his room, he took control over himself again and he looked up when he saw that it was just Ruby standing in his room in front of him and he listened as he heard her ask him a question and to that he replied "I don't care if you are the kind of girl who likes to party or even if your not that kind of girl. I love you for who you truly are." and he didn't even seem embarrassed or blush when he said that he loved her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby looked up at him and stepped back a little. She didn't even know him. She didn't who she was and how could he? He was lying all boys told her this. This wasn't something uncommon. "Look if you want to do things with me you don't have to tell me you love me. It won't get you any further." She said. She looked up at him. "You don't know who I am and neither do I." She snapped. "I'm a broken mess and want to be whole." She whispered.


message 75: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Ooh. I think I got an idea for an plot twist)

Alex was slightly hurt when she moved back away from him then he slowly stood up and moved so he was an few feet away from her and he looked at her in her eyes with an calm look in his eyes as he said "Your right. I DON'T know who you are besides that your a vampire but what I do know is that the reason you flirt with guys, the reason you date a guy every day and the reason you drink is because you just want somebody to like or love you for the person who you really are instead of someone your not."


message 76: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Nov 12, 2014 06:09PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((:o is it a secret?))

Ruby backed away again. "Listen now this is who I am. Who ever you think I am was the girl from the past. I'm not longer her. I will never be her again." She said. "I was taught this. I forgot about everything I use to know." She said. She backed away even more. "The only person who loved me was sire. He taught me this. He took care of me. He must love me." She said looking at him. "I'm train to please people not love them." She said.

((me too but IDK about it))


message 77: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (No it's not a secret. What's yours?)

"You just admitted that this isn't your true self." Alex noted and he watched as she backed away from him more but he didn't let it show that it made him sad but just had his arms at his sides as he listened to her and he angrily said "If you think that sire loved you because he changed you into someone your not then your just lost. He didn't love you because if he did then he wouldn't have changed you into someone your not and you know it but your just to scared to admit it." then he walked up to her until she was a few feet in front of the door way before closing the door and locking it.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments (Well you know how you said Alex has lost his memories? What if Ruby knew him and they were dating. I was know this probably wouldn't work because of Ruby being 1000 years old. Or maybe it would. I have no clue.))

She wanted to curl into a ball and cry. Ruby walked to her room and slumped to the floor. Tears wilted to her eyes. and she started to cry. She couldn't stop. She felt like she messed things up but at the same time she didn't know any better. She looked down at the floor. No one ever got angry at her. Ruby didn't need him or anyone else. She will make him pay for making her feel this way or not.


message 79: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Actually, that's an good idea and I think it could work with Ruby and Alex dating a few weeks before he lost his memory. Reminds me of the show dance in the vampire bund)

Alex leaned against the door as he stared down at the floor, feeling horrible for what he did and say to her. He didn't mean to make her cry, he was just angry and said the truth though he knew there would have been an better way to say it then saying it out if anger. He hesitated then he unlocked the door and walked to Ruby's door to apologize when he stopped in front of the door way as he saw that she was crying and everything seemed to slow down as if someone had pressed the slow motion button as he watched an tear go down her face and hit the floor and his head started hurting as if the missing parts of his memories were trying to rush back in his head at once and he grabbed his head, falling to his knees with his eyes shut tightly in pain and an groan of pain that sounded almost like an yell.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Thanks yep that would be perfect))

Ruby kept crying she can't believe he was the one. He was the one who she was suppose to feed off. She shook this feeling off. She heard a a sound and ran to see Alex on the floor. Ruby started at him shaking some. She didn't know what to do. She kept shaking. She was scared. She looked at him. "Alex are you okay." She said through her tears. She didn't know what else to say. She remember losing him once. It was along time ago for her. Everything was a long time ago. Everything meshed for her. She gave up on love the day she lost him. She didn't expect to find him here again. She changed since though. She wasn't the same girl and she had the fear she would never be. It wasn't like anyone cared about her.


message 81: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Okay bit lets not have Ruby tell him yet. Not until he finds out)

Alex stayed on the ground on his knees with him grabbing his head, his head still hurting a lot so he didn't hear her question. Him seeing that tear from Ruby seemed to have triggered something in his head that made his head hurt as if his lost memories were trying to get back in his head all at once. He remained in that position for a few minutes before the pain slowly disappeared and he let go off his head, breathing heavily with his eyes still closed as he tried to control his breathing then after he did he shakily got up to his feet again and looked at her straight into her eyes so that they were making eye contact


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((okay sure can do))

Ruby looked at him dead in the eyes. She was still shaking some. She didn't break his eyes contact with him. "Are you okay." She whispered. She hope he was. "You can't love me no matter how much you say you do. No one loves me but sire." She whispered. She was lost and broken from all the things that happened to her. She was still shocked he was here in her house. "I'm sorry you think you can love me." She said. "I'm not fixable I'm broken." She whispered. She wanted to be the same girl so much but it seemed impossible for her to do so. She lost hope and most important herself.


message 83: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex nodded slightly then he murmured "It doesn't matter what you say. I'm never going to stop falling in love with you no matter how many times you want me to because your afraid that I'm going to hurt you cause the truth is that I promise that I'm not ever going to hurt you. Never will." then he slowly walked to her until he was an few inches away from her then he hesitated before softly holding her face in his hands and he softly kissed her after hesitating again. He didn't care if she would hate him enough that she wished he was dead because he was going to stick true to his word and what he just said


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby wanted to keep crying. She backed away at the kiss. "Look Alex I'm sorry I'm broken." She was afraid of losing him again. "You don't want me you want someone who can love." She said. She lost hope in herself. "You can't fix me." She said. "No can its too late for that." She whispered softly. She looked at him a little bit. She looked down tears came to her eyes. She didn't say anything about him hurting her when she lost him. She felt bad. "You can't fix me. If you can than do it because I will never be able to love unless if I me." She said.


message 85: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex looked at her when she backed away and he said "No your not broken and you can love still even if you lost hope in yourself and you can still be the same girl you were before even if you don't believe it or lost hope in yourself that you can't change." as he gently rose her chin so she was looking into his eyes and he gently cupped her face in his hands, gently brushed the tears off her face with his thumb. He wasn't going to stop and was going to keep on trying to get her into believing into her self


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby sniffled a little bit as she looked into his eyes. She didn't move away. She wanted to but she couldn't. "What are you going to do? Make me the same girl again?" She asked. She looked at him not moving. "Alex why do you have so much hope for me? You just meant me." She whispered. She looked at him some. "I tried after sired died but he is gone and I don't know anything but what he taught me." She said. "I mean I do I just forgot." She whispered softly. "I have a date to go get ready for." She said.


message 87: by Carlos (last edited Nov 13, 2014 06:17AM) (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "I'm not going to make you do anything bit that doesn't mean I won't try. Alex murmured as he stroked her cheek with his thumb softly and gently before saying "You probably don't remember but last night you told me about how you got changed into a vampire and how you didn't want this life so I'm going to try to help you have much as an human like life again and help you be yourself instead of what someone else made you to be." then he softly kissed her before pulling back slowly and again murmured "Go get ready for your date. If you need me, you know where I'll be." and he softly kissed her one last time before slowly pulling back and letting go off her face as he walked away back to his room.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby she watch him walk away. He was so soft and treated her like she would break. No one did that. She looked a little not going in her room. She wonder what else she said while she was drunk last night. She wanted to him to stay. She quickly walk to his room catching up to him. "Why do you have so much faith and me and hope. You don't know me." She said. She was confused by this. "Why." She whispered. "Why do you kiss me like we were a thing. Why do you love me?" She wanted answers to her questions. "I'm nothing special but a broken lightbulb. Lightbulbs can't be fixed when they break and neither can I." She said.


message 89: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments Alex walked into his room when he heard someone walking after him and he stopped in the middle of his doorway and turned around to see Ruby walking quickly after him. He waited until she stopped in front of him and he looked down at the ground as e listened to her talk then after she was done he looked back at her after a few minutes and he said "Ever since I woke up in the hospital with amnesia, I was told that I was always helping people whenever they needed it or whenever they thought they didn't need help so I'm trying to be that person again in hope that I would somehow get my memories back." then he looked down and was silent for a few seconds then he whispered "And I was told that I had an girlfriend that I loved and she loved me as well but after I got into the accident, they said she left thinking I was dead and I can't even remember what she looked like or her name was but when I kissed you back in your room, I had an weird feeling like.... like I knew you already and already loved you."

(Don't tell him yet)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby looked up at him shocked a little bit. "Look you didn't know me trust me I remember faces and this is the first time we meant." She said lying. "I hope you get your memories back but this girlfriend of yours must not have loved you very much or she would of never left until she knew for sure that you were dead." She looked at him. "You can't love someone you just meant." She said. "I'm sorry you have a hard life I really am but if you want to help people help people that can be fix." She said and walked to her room. She locked the door and crumbled to the floor. She just stared tears wouldn't form in her eyes. She felt bad for leaving him but they said he was dead. She remember how cold she felt that night. That was the night she changed and became more like this. She felt like she had no choice to do so. He couldn't fix with or without her memories. She gave up on people and everything else. Love didn't happen in real life it wasn't real. If love was so real she would still have him but she didn't so that just prove her point.

((I won't))


message 91: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (I still got my idea for an plot twist if you want to hear it)

"I know I meet you before. If I could just remember." Alex said when she walked away and he watched her leave then he slammed the door with surprising strength that it shook the stuff in his room but he didn't seem to notice as he slid to the ground with his back against the door and his knees pulled up to his head with his face hidden in his knees and his hands am grabbing his head as his head started hurting again but not because a memory was coming back but he was rather trying to force himself to remember the memories he lost though the attempt made his head hurt worse then it had before and after a few minutes, he gave up and he just remained in the position he was in as an single tear went down his face. He wanted to remember, to have his missing memories back so he can remember everything that he couldn't.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Yeah go ahead and say it :))

She heard the door slam from his room. She looked down a little bit and started to cry now. She hated herself. she wanted to be with him. Ruby thought it was best to push him away until she couldn't do anything at all. She sighed a little bit. She didn't want to get hurt again. She was afraid she was going to break down sometime. She sniffled a little bit and got up and sat on outside his door. "I'm sorry I don't want to be broken anymore." She whispered. "I want to be whole again. I want to be me but its been a long time since I was me. I gave up when I lost my twin brother." She lied. "We were so close I loved him very much." She knew it was wrong to lie like this but she didn't want to tell him about them being together. She looked down a little bit. "I want to be fixed."


message 93: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (I got the idea from an episode from dance in the vampire bund so I didn't think of this myself but it when Ruby and Alex get attacked while they are out in an abandoned part of the city in Los Angeles by one of Ruby's old dates and an group of vampire or just by an group of vampires and when Alex gets hurt, he changes into his true form (I was thinking an werewolf) and begins to get his memory back piece by piece and Ruby already knowing what Alex's true form was but didn't tell him and the next day she asks him questions about his past and who he really is)

Alex had his cheek resting on his knee while staring blankly at the wall next to him when he heard Ruby sit down outside the door and talk though he didn't say anything or reply as he listened to her and he was silent for about ten or fifteen seconds then he sat up, wiping away the tear on his face before he stood up then he sighed and turned the door nob, opening the door and looking at her


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((I like that idea :) ))

She looked up at him. She felt bad for lying to him the whole time but she wasn't about to tell him. "Please forgive me." She whispered. "I'm sorry." She muttered has the tears came down her eyes. She felt saying sorry to him because of lying to him. She was shaking as she broke down. "I'm a bad person I lie and hurt people and play with people." she whisperd


message 95: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments (Cool)

Alex just looked down at her in silence for a few minutes then he reached down and helped her up then he drew her into a hug and held her for a few seconds before taking an step back so he was looking at her and her him then he said "It's okay. I forgive you."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((yep))

Ruby looked at him. "You can't forgive me." She said. "I have that date to go to." She whispered. She got up and then dressed in a shorter dress that was too low cut. She walked back to him. "We are leaving now." She snapped at him.


message 97: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments "Maybe your right. It probably is to late for you to change." Alex snapped back in response after she snapped at him and he took an step back before closing his door and getting changed, putting on the cloths he had on the other day before when they went to the bar


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Her eyes watered some as she waited. She wiped her tears before he came out. She looked down shaking. She didn't need anyone. She didn't need him back. She was a player and she wouldn't stop because she didn't care anymore because she lost him.


message 99: by Carlos (new)

Carlos Reyna (CarlosAlexis) | 478 comments After a while, the door opened and Alex came back out with the shades on and he closed the door behind him as he walked past Ruby without an word and into the garage where he waited inside the passenger seat


message 100: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Nov 13, 2014 11:05AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ruby walked down to her car slowly. She open her door and sat in slowly. She turned the car on and pulled out. She felt like to do everything slowly. She wanted to break down and cry but she held it in. She arrived to the club but her date wasn't there. She saw bunch of her old dates. She got out of the car one of them went up to her and smacked her in the face. "You are player. You can't date all of us can you?" He hissed. She welcome the pain.

"I'm not a player." She said lying


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