Beta readers needed for 20k paranormal novella about death and the after life

[Hanna]

Hello everyone,

I've just finished the second draft on my paranormal novella.

It's about John, a marketer who dies and finds that the afterlife is being run by Suthek, a murderous demon. The demon send the marketer back to earth to serve as a doomsayer (gives him a cardboard with an end times message and sends him on his way).

John ends up meeting Death and has to try to save mankind's souls from the clutches of Suthek.

Please let me know if you're interested in giving this a read.

I'm interested in finding out how well the story flows, if there's any inconsistencies in the plot and if you find the story entertaining in general.

Since this would be my first novella, any feedback is quite appreciated.

Thanks a lot!