How To Write Compelling Fictional Characters - Notes On Characterization

[Ian]

I recently wrote a blog on characterization and how to write great characters: https://www.thisisallcanon.com/blog/h...

When I think of a great fictional character, what immediately comes to mind is Gyp Rosetti of Boardwalk Empire, played by Bobby Cannavale. Gyp is a hot-headed gangster prone to outbursts and violence who runs his team with an iron fist. He has high aspirations, hoping to one day take over Nucky Thompson’s territory. The viewer comes to know this man as someone to fear, which makes it quite the surprise when we get to a particular scene with his mother-in-law and wife.

During the scene, we see Gyp’s matriarchal influences in his life openly berate and mock him, treating him as a buffoon and a coward. For me, what I saw on the screen was a character come to life before my eyes. What was once one dimensional, became complex and full of layers. He was still the bad guy, sure, but he also had his own insecurities, fears, and emotions. To me, he became more than a character, he became real.

Now that’s characterization, I thought. And it’s an exercise that would serve any writer to perform: how would your character act during a dinner with their family?

[Maria]

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Thank you,
Maria

[Ian]

Maria wrote: "I found this post helpful. I also downloaded the 56-point editing checklist. I'll be following you for added advice.

Thank you,
Maria"

Hey Maria! I'm glad this helped you.