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Name: AshfireAge: 24 moons
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Ashfire is a grey tabby tom with black stripes. He has a mostly white face and chest with white paws. He has bright orange eyes with white whiskers and a pink nose. Underneath all of his fur he is skinny, though on the outside he looks like he has a strong build.
Personality: Ashfire is very loyal and tries to be a leader. He tries to make the right decisions but will often need help on making the decision. He can be overly protective to the others he love, and always mourns if one of his loved ones pass away. He tends to be more solemn than joking, he's usually very serious about everything.
Fatal Flaw: Mourning for lost ones more than usual and overly protective.
Best Trait: Being loyal and serious.
History: Ashfire was first named Ash for his pelt. His mother was a rogue while he never knew who his father was. He was born with a sensitive stomach that would only allow him to eat certain prey. For most prey he would have to hold his breath just to get it down. But if he eats something he absolutely can't eat, it comes back up in heaving coughs.
His mother died by a rogue group when he was seven moons old in twolegplace. After that, he never wanted to go to twolegplace again and fled to the forest. He lived as a loner, watching weird cats in groups hunt and fight. He would always practice what he had seen.
He could hunt and fight, but not the best that he was capable of. He was soon found by one of the group of cats called Thunderclan. He was invited into the clan to train as an apprentice and was called Ashpaw for his former name. At first he wasn't very welcome, but little by little he gained their trust.
He started with the elders. He would always care for them, making sure everything was perfect. He would listen to their stories and even tell some of his own. He made friends with apprentices and would always listen to his mentor.
The queens were trickier. He would always try to friend them, but he'd usually stay away from the kits, which was hard. He earned their trust when a different clan invaded and he saved a new queen and her first kits. He earned his named Ashfire, the fire for his bright eyes.
His eating 'disorder' has not yet been detected. He always eats alone out of sight where no one could hear him or would question him. He wants to keep it to himself though knows that eventually someone will figure his secret out. Though the last medicine cat Berrywing had known of his disorder and would sometimes help him with poppy seeds if he couldn't fall asleep from not being able to breath correctly when he went to his nest.
Mate/Crush: Open
Family: NA
Other: He has experimented and can eat vole and fish down regularly though neither one is his favorite taste.
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Mintleaf
Name: Mintleaf
Gender: Female
Age: 31 moons
Rank: Warrior [Will move to nursery to be Queen soon]
Appearance:
Mintleaf is a black and white tuxedo cat with bright, curious green eyes. Most of her pelt is black, but her nose, chest, paws, and a blob on her underbelly are white. She takes pride in keeping her fur silkily groomed all the time no matter what. Her claws are razor-sharp and very long, as are her teeth, making her a fierce opponent in battle. She has short, white whiskers, and a short black tail with a white tail-tip. She is missing half of her left ear, and her flank is scarred from an accident she will never forget no matter what.
Kitten
Apprentice
Warrior
Personality: Mintleaf is a very softspoken, generous cat. From her easygoing disposition you would think she's a medicine cat half of the time - except when in battle. She doesn't get angry easily, but when she does, she really gets upset. When Mintleaf dedicates herself to something, she really gives it her all and a little more. You can always count on her when you're in trouble because she's loyal and open to any task set before her, a cat easy to make friends with despite her shyness outside of battle. Mintleaf has a strong belief in StarClan and is constantly praying to them. She has a short memory, though, and is rather forgetful and disorganized. Sometimes - about twice every six moons - Mintleaf has bad days where a certain memory haunts her. The best way to deal with her is to leave her alone and give her some thyme for shock.
Strengths:
~ A great warrior in battle
~ Super stealthy
~ Loves to encourage others
Weaknesses:
~ A bit of a doormat
~ Can't let go of her past
~ Is afraid of heights
Family:
Toadleap [Brother, Alive, Open]
Rosepetal [Mother, Alive, Open]
Dusttail [Father, Alive, Open]
Crush/Mate: Reedwhisker [Open, please ask first. 35 moons, tabby tom]
Kits: She is one moon pregnant. They could be pre-made, but ask permission first. (view spoiler)
Background: Mintkit was given her name because her mother tasted the herb mint, and liked the taste so she named her daughter Mintkit. Toadkit was named because that had been Rosepetal's father's name. Mintkit and her brother Toadkit were very opposites right from the start. He was energetic and playful whereas she was more quiet and reserved. Toadkit was the popular, mischievous kit, and Mintkit was the kit who sat aside even when invited to play with others. The two still had a very strong bond, though. Around five moons, Mintkit finally began to open up and expose a bubbly personality. When the two were apprenticed, it was obvious both were gifted warriors. Toadpaw excelled at battle and Mintpaw at hunting.
They finished apprenticeship on the same day, a bright half-moon, and became Mintleaf and Toadleap. Mintleaf for her gentle personality, Toadleap for his stealth and strength in his hind legs. When Mintleaf had been a warrior for about five moons, the most traumatic event of her life struck.
She was hunting on the ShadowClan border when problems struck. A rogue jumped out and attacked her for no apparent reason, leaving her bloodily bruised on the ground. She suffered a hard blow on the head and couldn't remember any of it when she woke up in the medicine den - Reedwhisker had found and saved her. Shakily, she recovered. Most expected her to be terrified for life - but instead, she became a formidable, harsh opponent in battle once her wounds healed - but outside of battle, her bubbly self had disappeared and she had gone back to quiet and patient. Nine moons later, she started having dreams about her attack - only it became exaggerated quite a bit. Dozens of cats leaping out, clawing at her mercilessly.
It was around this time she became mates with Reedwhisker, and is now expecting kits.
Other:
~ Has never had an apprentice.
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Name:
Age:
34 moons
Gender:
Female
Rank:
Appearance: Include a picture, at least 4 sentences
Personality: How does your cat act? What is he or she like? 4+ sentences.
Fatal Flaw: The worst thing about them, likely to lead to their demise.
Best Trait:
History: At least 6 sentences unless it is a very young kit under 3 moons
Mate/Crush:
Family:
Other:
UNDER CONSTRUCTION
Name Bumblekit Bumblepaw, BumblebeeAge Unborn
Gender Tom
Rank Kit
Appearance
As a kit, Bumblekit is small and fluffy. He has a cream colored pelt with a little bit of white poking out. His fur is always dirty and forever unkempt. Bumblekit has pale blue eyes that are always excited and joyful. Since he hasn't ventured out much, Bumblekit has yet to attain scars.
Personality
Bumblekit is a clumsy, joyful and curious kit who is ready to explore the world. He wants to learn as much as he can and discover new things as soon as possible. But that dream may be harder than he imagined with his clumsiness. Bumblekit will more often than not trip over his own paws than actually walk. His pelt is always dirty and unkempt as a result of him always falling and meeting the ground head first. He has a tendency to get easily distracted, the second he spots something shiny on the ground or spots something flying around him, Bumblekit will abandon what he is doing and focus upon that until the next interesting thing comes along. Bumblekit is a happy kitten who sees the world as his one friend and is always smiling, not seeming to comprehend that some cats are evil at heart. Overall, Bumblekit is a fun and playful kit, albeit very clumsy.
Fatal Flaw Clumsiness
Best Trait Happiness
History N/A
Family
FatherReedwhisker {Open}
Mother Mintfur {Kate}
Sister Briarkit {Knieka}
Sister Sagekit {Kate}
Mate/Crush N/A
Other N/A
UCName: Sagekit
Age: Unborn
Gender: Female
Rank: Kit
Appearance: Include a picture, at least 4 sentences
Personality: How does your cat act? What is he or she like? 4+ sentences.
Fatal Flaw: The worst thing about them, likely to lead to their demise.
Best Trait:
History: At least 6 sentences unless it is a very young kit under 3 moons
Mate/Crush: N/A
Family:
Reedwhisker [Father, Open]
Mintfur [Mother, taken by Kate]
Briarkit [Sister, taken by Knieka]
Berrykit [Brother, taken by Triss]
Other:
Name: HoneydappleAge: 25 moons
Gender: She-Cat, Female
Rank: Warrior
Appearance:
Honeydapple is a slender, lean cat. She had a golden pelt and large, honey-coloured eyes with black markings around her face. Her paws are strangely small for a warrior, though the pads are hard from stepping on ThunderClan territory all day.
Personality: Honeydapple is really a kit at heart. With her easy-going disposition and her tendency to be sweet and kind to every cat (even the ones outside of Thunderclan), she's often known as a pushover or a do-gooder. This is not the case, however. In battle, she's fearless, though she often shows mercy towards every other clan cat. She's an independent, loyal cat who will do anything for her clan.
Fatal Flaw: She tends to be too merciful, almost to the point where other cats think she's too soft to be a warrior
Best Trait: She's loyal
History:
She was born in a litter of three with her two brothers, Rainkit and Sleetkit to a beautiful queen called Amberrose, who died in battle four moons ago. When Rainkit fell ill, Amberrose unintentionally neglected Sleetkit and Honeykit. This led Sleetkit to to grow up bitter, though Honeykit attempted to become sweet and loyal.
As an apprentice, she was badly injured by ShadowClan. This delayed her Warrior training, leading Sleetpaw to become a warrior before she could. He also became a lot more protective. She now walks with a limp because of her accident.
Mate/Crush: Looking for one
Family:
Sleetstorm - Brother
Silverpaw - Niece
Other:
Honeydapple:Please separate the categories so they are like:
Name:
Gender:
Age: (Etc)
You need a written appearance, and the pic doesn't show. Shadowclan should corrected to ShadowClan, and Moonpaw is not a correct prefix. What about Silverpaw, Brightpaw, or Shimmerpaw?
Sleetstorm
Please separate the categories so they are like:
Name:
Gender:
Age: (Etc)
You need a written appearance, and the pic doesn't show. Shadowclan should corrected to ShadowClan, and Moonpaw is not a correct prefix. What about Silverpaw, Brightpaw, or Shimmerpaw?
Also, who died on the Thunderpath? His mate, or his kit?
Lastly, please put Honeydapple and Sleetstorm in separate posts.
Name: SleetstormAge: 25 moons
Gender: Tom, Male
Rank: Warrior
Appearance:
Sleetstorm has a strong, sturdy build with lean muscles under his flank. His pelt is a dark gray, speckled with white tufts across his chest, belly, and paws and streaked with black across his back, side, and legs. His left ear was torn from a battle. He has piercing blue eyes,
Personality: Sleetstorm is known for his sharp tongue and his bitter words. He's fiercely loyal and overprotective towards Honeydapple and Moonpaw and many of the kits/apprentices and even the warriors avoid him. He's known for being strong and silent. He's a good hunter and merciless in battle, especially against Shadowclan. Many cats doubt his loyalty.
Fatal Flaw: He's merciless in battle
Best Trait: He's overprotective and fiercely loyal
History:
He was born in a litter of three with a brother and a sister, Rainkit and Honeykit to a beautiful queen called Amberrose, who died in battle four moons ago. When Rainkit fell ill, Amberrose unintentionally neglected Sleetkit and Honeykit. This led Sleetkit to to grow up bitter, though Honeykit attempted to become sweet and loyal.
When Honeypaw was an apprentice, she was badly injured in a fight against ShadowClan. Ever since then, Sleetpaw became more and more protective of her. As a warrior, he fell in love with a she-cat called Fernheart and they had a kit, Silverkit. Fernheart, however, got hit by a monster on the Thunderpath and died immediately.
Mate/Crush:
Family:
Honeydapple - Sister
Silverpaw - Daughter
Other:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Rank:
Appearance: Include a picture, at least 4 sentences
Personality: How does your cat act? What is he or she like? 4+ sentences.
Fatal Flaw: The worst thing about them, likely to lead to their demise.
Best Trait:
History: At least 6 sentences unless it is a very young kit under 3 moons
Mate/Crush:
Family:
Other: