Help with title...

[R.A.]

Please give me your opinion. As a title, what does "Time Dancing" say to you?

[Jennifer]

Sounds stiff or an incomplete thought. How about dancing through time. Or time's dance.

[R.A.]

Thanks Jennifer, every comment helps.

[Emma]

Time travel theme, its fine, but personally I would have picked Time Dancer.

[Candace]

It sounds like the start of a great title to me. You just need to finish it...

"Time Dancing:Tapping Out the Seconds"
"Time Dancing:Twisting Through the Years"

You get the idea.

[R.A.]

Candace wrote: "It sounds like the start of a great title to me. You just need to finish it...

"Time Dancing:Tapping Out the Seconds"
"Time Dancing:Twisting Through the Years"

You get the idea."
Thanks Candace, that's what it felt like to me too.