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the whole secret society thing - with invisible wars that cause visible destruction... Sounds kinda like the soul society. Have you ever read (or watched as it may be) Bleach by Tite Kubo?other than that it sounds good. don't continue on it if you can't feel the story. But don't delete it either. Save it and maybe you'll be able to came back and finish it later.
i haven't read it yet.. it's not a ghost story... lol.
You obviously haven't read bleach if you think it's a ghost story, I admit it has ghosts in it though. LOL you guys might like it. it does have some cussing though if you read it online. in the officially translated ShoJo version the cussing is censored. mostly.
Ok. I think my friend has read it...
nonono... my story isn't about ghosts... i know little about "bleach" because it has a catoon version, right?
ya the cartoon was based off the comic. you'd think it'd be easy to get a story the same way when it's already written in pictures, but they still change it up a bunch!!
okay... i agree with you but the concept were all the same. :)
anyway, i already edited my manuscript. please commenthere' the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...
rollie, it sounds like a good story. Your writing is choppy though. That makes it hard to get the idea of what's really going on with Steph.
anyway,it might confused you because the chapter wasn't really complete...
the first & second chapters were complete though right?
I don't mean to be mean or anything, so don't take any criticism like that please. It's just so hard to convey what I'm saying without facial expression and tone of voice. it's amazing how much people can tell about what your saying just from those.
nope...they're all incomplete. all chapters were all incomplete.lol
i know too... it's just okay with me...i accept any comment anayway..
thanks a million..
I can understand about them not being complete! My writing is the same way. I just write what ever comes to mind about the character and try to fit it to the story. I usually end up deleting and erasing a bunch.
yeah... i deleted some part but most it was been edited... i'll post the missing part soon..lol
Behind the normal rotation of the earth, there's a secret community where the people have their own special abilities.
Between their worlds there are societies who are creating hidden wars that cause visible mass destructions.
When Charmaine Steph Howell discovered that her blood line belongs to a secret society, she was ready then to hear more of the fact even if it causes her revenge.
Revenge for those people who bounded her life span even if it means a bad omen; fighting the man who saved her life more than she ever expected.
i need an advice if i really need to continue this one or not..please help.. i have my first six chapters of but i'm still hesitating if will continue this one...