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Aug 31, 2014 03:28PM
((Oh, by the way, I have blonde hair and hazel eyes that seem like they're flickering all the time.))
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((I mean, my character does))
Only my enhanced reflexes are keeping me alive now. I have to do something, fast! Desperately, I kick the girl’s staff out from under her so she stumbles, then scramble to my feet and run. "Everyone! Hurry!"
((Wait does she turn into half werewolf or just evil))
I take a step towards her, and feel a surge of... something. It is the same feeling I get when I talk to animals.
"Please! Stop!" I say. Her gaze flickers to mine, and she lashes out an arm. I slam to the ground at the touch, and I feel blood welling up in my mouth.
"Please. Do anything else. Think about something else! Think about what you were thinking about before!" I plead. I feel woozy now, from the large cut and trying to use animal speaking on her.
I dimly see her place down the scepter, confused.
Before I pass out, you know what I see? She gets out a phone and takes a selfie!
I take a step towards her, and feel a surge of... something. It is the same feeling I get when I talk to animals.
"Please! Stop!" I say. Her gaze flickers to mine, and she lashes out an arm. I slam to the ground at the touch, and I feel blood welling up in my mouth.
"Please. Do anything else. Think about something else! Think about what you were thinking about before!" I plead. I feel woozy now, from the large cut and trying to use animal speaking on her.
I dimly see her place down the scepter, confused.
Before I pass out, you know what I see? She gets out a phone and takes a selfie!
((Okay, then my paragraph actually makes sense :D)
((Wait so my animal speaking didn't work :(
((Okkaaaaaay........))
I gasp. It didn't work. I press my hand to my cheek and bite my lip as a searing burning pain runs through it.
"Oww." I moan lightly. I swallow, and attempt to stand up, leaning heavily against Em.
I gasp. It didn't work. I press my hand to my cheek and bite my lip as a searing burning pain runs through it.
"Oww." I moan lightly. I swallow, and attempt to stand up, leaning heavily against Em.
I stare. Brook's eyes lose their gleam. She pants heavily, and relaxes. Then she moves in spastic motion, as if she is fighting herself.
"It's okay." I find myself whispering. "Overcome it."
Everyone is starting back and forth from Brook to me.
"It's okay." I find myself whispering. "Overcome it."
Everyone is starting back and forth from Brook to me.
"Uh..." I groan as I sit up and rub my chin. "Well that was ru-" I start but I stop when I see Vine girl being weird. "You alright?" I ask standing up. "Whoa. Wardrobe change!" I shout, examining her black jumpsuit.
"Uh... Girl?" I nudge the girl with my foot. I kneel down and slowly take her spear so she wouldn't awake and smash us again. But as soon as I touched it, an electrocuting shock zapped my hand. "Yaa!" I dropped the staff and held my wounded hand.
I reach out and tentatively lay a finger on the scepter. Dead silent.
"You know, that's a very good question."
Where are we?
"You know, that's a very good question."
Where are we?
**Green eyes**
"Remember? You tried to kill us-" I stop, realizing that she's passed out.
"Remember? You tried to kill us-" I stop, realizing that she's passed out.
The girl who tried to kill me passed out. She also shifted back to normal. I take this as a sign that it's safe to come out of hiding. Cautiously, I approach. "Uh, hello?"
We moved the girl to a bed. She dreams, kicking and screaming constantely, until finally, she speaks.
"I-I thought I was blind... What-" She mumbles.
I soothe her. "Just a dream. You can see me, right."
She looks up. "Yah. B-Brown hair. Green eyes." She says drowsily. "Glasses."
I sigh with relief.
"And kinda... kinda nifty glasses... and... selfie.. tomato juuuuuuuuice!" She mumbles, and snuggles back into the covers.
It's kinda hard to believe this girl tried to kill us...
"I-I thought I was blind... What-" She mumbles.
I soothe her. "Just a dream. You can see me, right."
She looks up. "Yah. B-Brown hair. Green eyes." She says drowsily. "Glasses."
I sigh with relief.
"And kinda... kinda nifty glasses... and... selfie.. tomato juuuuuuuuice!" She mumbles, and snuggles back into the covers.
It's kinda hard to believe this girl tried to kill us...
"What do you think is wrong with her?" I ask, stepping forward and seeing the unconscious girl. I felt her forehead, and she instantly began to shiver. I snap back my hand and stuff it in my pocket. She stops shivering but her nose looks red like she was cold.
I'M SO CONFUSED. WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT'S GOING ON HERE SO I CAN ROLEPLAY???
"I think," I say, looking at her, about to explain the physics of colds. "Er, that she is acting as a normal kid would after passing out and getting a fever. And-" I get up and walk to the kitchenette. "I think she needs some soup."
Kamiko wrote: "I'M SO CONFUSED. WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT'S GOING ON HERE SO I CAN ROLEPLAY???"
What are you confused about?
What are you confused about?
Julane wrote: ""I think," I say, looking at her, about to explain the physics of colds. "Er, that she is acting as a normal kid would after passing out and getting a fever. And-" I get up and walk to the kitchene..."
"I recommend minestrone with a dash of chedder. It usually helps warm them up."
"I recommend minestrone with a dash of chedder. It usually helps warm them up."
What are we doing right now? I get the whole character thing, but what's the, like problem. The story. I don't know. I just didn't feel like going through 5 pages of comments because I'm super lazy...
Kamiko wrote: "What are we doing right now? I get the whole character thing, but what's the, like problem. The story. I don't know. I just didn't feel like going through 5 pages of comments because I'm super lazy..."
Thats ok. So, Alice (Brook) has this connection with an evil torturing house, and we all have a special power and we have to work together to lift Brook/Alice's curse. I have ice powers (Like Elsa), Julane/Indigo and talk to animals + super inventor, Rangergirl is really clever about how the house works and stuff, and Ruby was injected with Panther DNA thus her having cool animal powers.
Thats ok. So, Alice (Brook) has this connection with an evil torturing house, and we all have a special power and we have to work together to lift Brook/Alice's curse. I have ice powers (Like Elsa), Julane/Indigo and talk to animals + super inventor, Rangergirl is really clever about how the house works and stuff, and Ruby was injected with Panther DNA thus her having cool animal powers.
Alice wrote: "I wake again and this time I can see clearly.There is a girl sitting on the edge of the cot(b.t.w this is unrelated but my character is only 9,youngest)and she looks worried.I look at her"Hi...wha..."
"Oh! Your awake! Thank goodness!" I exclaim. "How do you feel?"
"Cold." she answers, hugging herself.
I sigh. "Well, some soup is getting ready for you.
"Oh! Your awake! Thank goodness!" I exclaim. "How do you feel?"
"Cold." she answers, hugging herself.
I sigh. "Well, some soup is getting ready for you.
Hmm...the problem is, my favorite character in my writing is a Mary Sue. She is soooooooooooooooo perfect, well not really. She's beautiful, smart, great sword fighter, but she can't be that perfect. She's also mean, hates people, has a bad past, and just doesn't care about anything. So everyone pretty much hates her, but of course, she doesn't care. She also has waterbending powers. Is that okay?
She slurps it down eagerly, and we watch.
And the questions begin.
"Where am I? Who am I? Did I turn into... you know what, at night? Was anyone hurt?"
And the questions begin.
"Where am I? Who am I? Did I turn into... you know what, at night? Was anyone hurt?"
Kamiko wrote: "Hmm...the problem is, my favorite character in my writing is a Mary Sue. She is soooooooooooooooo perfect, well not really. She's beautiful, smart, great sword fighter, but she can't be that perfe..."
That's great!!!!!!!!!! :)
That's great!!!!!!!!!! :)
Feel free to write in the story whenever!
Yay. So introducing...Kamiko (from Two Worlds) and our names are alike because I named myself after her, and I also invented her. She will participate in this, but don't expect her to get along with anyone...xD
"Uh... Yes, last night was interesting, but no one was seriously hurt. But I'm sorry, we don't know where we are at all."
Kamiko wrote: "Yay. So introducing...Kamiko (from Two Worlds) and our names are alike because I named myself after her, and I also invented her. She will participate in this, but don't expect her to get along wit..."
Ok! :-)
Ok! :-)
((And we might all hate you right back [in the story of course] cuz rude characters aggravate me :))
Oh, she's also a master at hiding emotions. She's so scary that people have sent her to psychologists (or is it the other one?) So yeah, Julane/Indigo, she doesn't care. Hate all you like...xD
"Your... oh." I shift uncomfortably. I frown, but quickly smile and change the subject. "I'm Paige. This is Indigo, Em, and... I don't know your name." I point at the girl who emerged from the house with White hair.
I hang back, watching the others talk. I decide to slip out on my own. I've always liked being alone. I edge away, trying not to be noticed.
I come out of the shadows and everyone jumps in shock.
"Ah!" Who is this new girl? I already don't like her for ruining my escape. Everyone else noticed me from my yelp. "Who are you?"
"Does that really matter? I was sent here by that stupid author. And that was a really bad I don't know what to call it,(what's your name here Rangergirl?) escape, slip away?" Oh, great, I think. This is going to be horrible. A bunch of annoying people who don't know anything about anything. That author((me))is really going to get it now.
((Tyri Prydon. Sound familiar? Hint: The story I'm writing))
I glare at the girl. "Yes. I was trying to slip away. Thanks a lot for helping." Any hope I had of an inconspicuous escape has been smashed, so I march away with as much dignity as I can muster.
I glare at the girl. "Yes. I was trying to slip away. Thanks a lot for helping." Any hope I had of an inconspicuous escape has been smashed, so I march away with as much dignity as I can muster.
I go and chase after Tyri, when I see another girl.
"Who are you?" she asks, studying me.
"Uh, I'm Indigo-"
"Huh. So are you guys some messed up sorority, or...?"
I can tell she is trying to get on my nerves, but I find myself laughing. Her mouth quirks into an almost approving smile.
"I'm Kamiko. Just spread the news, I don't want to waste my breath."
I laugh. "Uh, guys, uh... this is Kamiko... She's.. er.. delighted to meet you guys."
"Ecstatic." Kamiko drawls. "To what do I owe this pleasure? Did orphan girl get worked up again?" she makes a pouty face.
The others look at her, annoyed. Tyri glares, and walks back to the shack.
"Who are you?" she asks, studying me.
"Uh, I'm Indigo-"
"Huh. So are you guys some messed up sorority, or...?"
I can tell she is trying to get on my nerves, but I find myself laughing. Her mouth quirks into an almost approving smile.
"I'm Kamiko. Just spread the news, I don't want to waste my breath."
I laugh. "Uh, guys, uh... this is Kamiko... She's.. er.. delighted to meet you guys."
"Ecstatic." Kamiko drawls. "To what do I owe this pleasure? Did orphan girl get worked up again?" she makes a pouty face.
The others look at her, annoyed. Tyri glares, and walks back to the shack.
((Wow, you got my character better then I did. xD))
I roll my eyes. She executed intimidation pretty well, and that was high praise coming from me. It wasn't intimidating in the least to me, though. And really. "'And she's a meanie during the night'" Hilarious. Does she really think she can threaten me? Little girl. Some promise, but no one pisses me off. I could kill her easily. I didn't let my emotions show, though. My face is a mask of nonchalance. "Well," I said, stretching, "I'm going to go train or kill a monster right now, preferably kill a monster" They all looked shocked at the monster orphan girl killed, but I was more tough then that when I was a little girl.
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"All right, all right, calm down, Em - it's fine, you're fine, come on." Paige soothed.
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"Grr."
I can hear yells coming from where the others are. Reluctantly, I turn back, and see them struggling to fight a giant. I sigh. Are they going to need my help for everything? I dash back, hoping my reflexes can keep me out of harm.
I slip into the torture house. I've faced worse things then this, and I could always rely on my skills to fight. ((What exactly is in this torture house? Lots of monsters? Torture? Oh my glob, Idk))
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